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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Since the beginning of 21st century internet has been changed dramatically and working from home has become common. While working in the comfort of home may prove to be a blessing, office workers have some unmatchable benefits. This essay will discuss why office goers could be more productive than people who choose to be home-sourced.

In recent times, we can observe that the usage of the internet has increased at a very brisk pace. Due to the pandemic, companies were forced to allow their employees to work from home. This has resulted in the performance of employees being less productive when compared to earlier times. This will essay will discuss this and provide reasons to support the argument.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

It doesn't seem like a surprise to anyone that small, family-owned stores traditionally located in busy neighbourhoods and high streets are gradually losing their customers. Modern consumers are more prone to comprehensive shopping in one of the trendy malls which have recently appeared in every major city. I doubt we could confidently specify it as either a purely positive or negative development as I will describe the situation from different perspectives in the main paragraphs of this essay.

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Al parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but other think having a range of subject is better for a children's future. Discuss both of the views and give your opinion.

In recent times, it is becoming increasingly common for people who believe that schools have to teach children skills, however, parents think that learning a number of subjects will have a good impact on the future of young people. I strongly believe that this trend can have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.

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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this period of technology, many educational institutions offer their courses online.The majority of folks are in favour of this due to its number of merits. In my opinion, I strongly believe that it is a positive development in education. we will discuss the topic in further paragraphs with a suitable conclusion.

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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the age of digital transformation, everyone has personal smart devices connected to the Internet so that they are able to access to newest information easily with no fee requirement. For that reason, newspapers may no longer be suitable for modern needs. I agree with the statement indicating the replacement of the online era in the newspaper field.

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Many people believe that physical fitness is essential for academic performance. How does exercise benefit school performance and what can people do to maintain a regular fitness routine? Give explanations and examples for your response.

Nowadays school curriculum rarely gives pupils time for involvement in any venture other than studies. A major concern in society is whether physical activities are beneficial for students or not. In my opinion involvement in activities that require body movement is paramount for people of all ages.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, children spend way too much time on smartphones rather than engaging in physical activities as they are finding the former too comfortable. This is clearly a negative development in my opinion.In this essay, I will explain the consequences and will provide solutions with suitable examples.

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Employers somtimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information. Such as their habbies and interests, and whether thay are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent times, applying for a job requires some details that are not in the role description. While some people find that helpful. Others argue this information is private and may have a negative effect on the application result. I am in the middle, however, In this ,essay I will discuss both arguments as there are widely differing views on the issues.

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In many workplaces, online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The development of technology has changed the way people communicate in the workplace, so online communication is now more common than the traditional way. In my opinion, this transformation brings more advantages than drawbacks.

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Some people think that children should be taken in control by their parents while others argue that they need to learn to be independent. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

In society's recent times, many parents think that their heirs should be taken care of by them, and on the other side, someone would like their kids to live independently in their adolescent lives. In my point of view, I will discuss both ideas and provide my statement below.

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Some people say that art subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some are of opinion that students at high schools might not be compulsorily obliged to attend artistic programs, such as painting or drawing. From my perspective, I totally concur with this statement owing to the following demonstrations.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present, some people assume it is crucial to make changes in two different aspects of life, whether in career or private life for development progress. From my point of view, I believe the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

Some families purchase a considerable number of pastimes for their children. Having plenty of toys for scions brings benefits and drawbacks for them.

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Today people are wasting lots of food. Do you think so? What can be done to reduce the amount of food waste?

These days, the living standard of humans is continuously increasing. It is believed that at the moment, a significant amount of food is wasted. From my perspective, I strongly worry about this detrimental phenomenon and I will give my explanation in the following paragraphs.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

English is the most common language across the globe. Nowadays, it is taking precedence over local languages ,especially in schools and workplaces. If this situation doesn't stop, then local languages are most likely to die out. In this essay, I described why I believe English is important for everyone, and explained why and how we should ensure the survival of local languages.

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Some people think the government should take measures regarding the healthy lifestyles of individuals. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In contemporary times a lot of importance is given to the healthy lifestyle of an individual. Some people believe that it is the responsibility of the government to take appropriate measures in order to improve the lifestyles of people. Whereas others feel that it is the accountability of every individual to look after health. I believe that it is a joint responsibility of both and this essay will elucidate my assertion in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is true that companies in today’s society somehow stress the newness of their products in their adverts. There are some factors which help to account for this trend. Moreover, this trend has forced businesses to become more prototypical when creating the latest goods that customers will be inspired to purchase.

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In the advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in someway. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In modern days, many companies tempt to persuade customers of their items with brand-new functions by advertising. From my perspective, this means could increase product sales and make profits from advertisements. However, I agree it also cost disadvantage development by over-packing the products and I would discuss it in the following essay.

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Some people think that distance learning programs can never be as good as traditional, face-to-face education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

During the Covid-19 pandemic, every student had to experiment with distance lessons. Since then, it is often been discussed whether traditional education could be gradually substituted with internet lessons or not. In my essay, I will share my opinion about the topic due to my experience with it during my university years.

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Some people think that music lessons aren’t important and that children should pay more attention to science. Do you agree or disagree?

Education subjects has been a well discussed topic recently in our society. Certain people express that arts are not essential for children's education. Nonetheless, others claims that artistic knowledge is vital for developing our imagenation along with creativity. In my opinion, I partially agree with tthe statement given, and in this essay I am going to analize the benefits as well as the drawbacks.

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