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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some employers involve their emoplyees in their decision-making process. Do the advantages outwiegh the disadvantages?

Strategic planning in modern enterprises takes into account staff's ideas and opinions. Despite its being criticised by a few organizations, involving labourers in management decisions has benefited both parties.

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Air pollution in cities is growing at an alarming rate. what measures could be taken to address this problem?

It is certainly true that air pollution is increasing day by day in cities. And this is the biggest problem. However, because of this , corrupt Nations face so many drawbacks in life. my essay will examine this case and also give a solution in upcoming paragraphs.

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In the future, nobody wiil buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many books and newspapers are no longer printed due to their modernism and they will be able to read them online without paying. From my point of view, I agree with this statement and will provide further details to substantiate my argument.

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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What are the primary causes of this? What is the main effect of this?

nowadays, obesity is more pervasive than ever up to now. this essay will outline some possible reasons for this issue as well as some consequences it may lead to.

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These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the current world, the vast majority of adolescents immigrate from their hometown to other cities for various intensives, from higher education to high-paid job positions. These immigrated demographics mostly tend to return to their hometown at age years. I will substantiate how the manifest drawbacks of this trend outweigh its boons.

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Most people try to balance between work and other part of lives. Unfortunately, not many achieve this delivate balance. What are the main problems people are facing? What is the best way to overcome them?

It is true that these days the majority of the population fail to find a working-life balance in their lives. There are a number of causes of this, but certain measures could be taken to improve this problem.

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Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years. Why do you think this has happened? Is it a positive or negative development?

The trading market has significantly changed in recent years and vanishing high-street shops is one of its consequences. There are several reasons for this receding which I believe is a negative development.

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some people say Technology has improved our world. do you agree or disagree with this view?

There is a popular belief that scientific experiments have given a breakthrough to human life in every aspect, from medicinal factors to communication.

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some people say Technology has improved our world. do you agree or disagree with this view?

In this modern era, technology is playing a significant role in human life. The majority believes that machinery has positively developed the world. I completely agree with this statement because people are benefiting from technology countrywide.

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in their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. why is this? do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the current society, the organizations tend to chiefly highlight that their merchandise is new in their advertisement. This trend will shed light on a number of factors this trend stems from and my point of view about considering it as a positive or negative development.

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Some people think that younger generations are becoming less and less polite. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and examples.

With the advent of technology, youths in the present world are considering themselves as superior and more intelligent than old generation people, because of which, they are behaving in a rigorous way or misbehaving without any respect to others. I personally agree with it and think that politeness has to be developed in today’s young people.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Sugar is an important source of energy for the body and has various benefits since it could absorb quickly and be used immediately. However, consuming too much sugar could cause more harm than good. Many manufactured food and drink products such as fast food contain overdoes of sugar that the body needs. I definitely agree with the statement that higher prices on sugary products would help people avoid health problems and change their buying behaviour.

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Small businesses should avoid recruiting young women who do not have their own family in order to avoid paying maternity leave later on. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

It is commonly believed that small companies should not hire females who do not have married yet because they would have to pay for pregnancy leave in the future.However,I personally disagree with this opinion and this essay will discuss the reasons and relevant examples to support my viewpoint.

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Very few schoolchildren learn about the value of money and how to look after it, yet this is a critical life skill that should be taught as a part of the school curriculum. Do you agree or disagree?

Many children do not have enough chances to learn how to manage money, but some individuals think it is important for children to learn money management skills in school. I completely agree with this view, and this essay will explain why it is significant for children to learn the value of money at school.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Other, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals argue that the parents must teach young people how to behave in society while others claim that they should learn this in school. This essay aims to examine both views and explain why the parenting role of teaching children how to be good members of society can not be fully done by the school.

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Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. What are your opinions on this?

There is no doubt that these days video games have been becoming popular among kids. The question is, why are playing violent games raising crime and violence? And what are their effects on children? In this essay, I am going to discuss the effects of playing violent games and how they influence offspring.

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Some people say Technology has improved our world. do you agree or disagree with this view?

The Advancement in technology plays a significant role in human life. The majority believes machinery has positively developed the world.I completely agree with this view because people benefit from technology countrywide.

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Most people take an interview to select a person for a job. What are the other ways? What do you think is the best way to recruit new employees?

Undoubtedly, recruitment is an extremely complex process which is consisted of various stages. Although The most important part is an interview, some people opine that there should be other assessments for selecting a qualified employee. Here, more efficient and effective evaluation methods will be recommended.

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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What are the primary causes of this? What is the main effect of this?

It is considered that in this fast-paced era people are increasingly becoming obese as compared to the past. This essay will articulate causes such as hectic schedules and an inadequate meal along with their effects.

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Some people say Technology has improved our world. do you agree or disagree with this view?

These days, the growth of any basical part started from technology products; which gives way to achievement. I totally agree with this statement, technology is the best method to reach success.

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