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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Nowadays , many people spend less and less time at home .What are the causes of this? what are the effects of this on individual and society?

Over the past of recent year, It is often said that more and more people have been spent more time out than at the home. Furthermore, It is fair to say that has causes and Marjory effects on all communities. I will point out some examples in this essay on followed paragraphs.

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Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. Discuss and give your opinion.

There is a growing idea among the general population that, mothers should take whole the responsibility to raise the children since they have decided to have children . However , most communities oppose this opine since fathers should take the same responsibility as mothers. Since the concept of single parenting is out dating and fatherhood important to provide them with the necessities and security , this writer believes that both parents are equally important to build up a happy family.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

The world is getting better and better in recent decades. Thanks to the improvement of agriculture, people become healthy and happier in their lives. However, the gap between rich and poor increased since the low government develop countries have little awareness of starvation. Thus, influencing the ministry's attraction is important.

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The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyle? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?

Nowadays, most of the public is attracted by real ts and crafts and many communities think that art plays a crucial role in their lives and society. many universities and other countries are encouraging the skills of pupils moreover, in this modern lifestyle several species are using some apps to show their talents.in this essay, I will explain both sides.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.

With the advent of technology globally, information has been readily accessible. Some individuals believe that a great deal of advice should be shared in research, commerce and the academic world. Whereas, others argue that invaluable data should be restricted. In my opinion, knowledge should be restricted instead of been shared freely. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss both views and give reasons for my opinion.

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Many people work long hours. Leaving very little time for leisure activities. What are the advantage & disadvantages?

It is considered that most of the masses spent time working to a large extent despite leisure activities. This essay will discuss the merits & demerits of this trend in the forthcoming paragraph.

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Some people think that the responsibility should be on the government for the rise of obesity in children, others think that the parents should be in control instead. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Owing to the increasing rate of obesity,some believe that authorities should tackle the issue,whereas others blame guardians as the main factor behind that.However,in my point of view, a collaboration of both can be more effective.Nevertheless,the roles that both can play in this arena are uttered here.

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It is often argued that reading non-fiction books is better than reading fiction. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Reading is an integral part of our lives which can affect our behaviour. Therefore, it is very vital that we choose the right books. In my opinion, every person has a different choice and different interests.The essay will discuss the favourable points of reading both kinds of books and finally reach the conclusion.

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The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that popular people's lives are usually focused on by the media. Therefore, attention should instead shift to the common people. I disagree with this statement because these famous individuals already lead public lives that earns them their fame and their actions affect ordinary people's lives.

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Some believe that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is often argued amongst the masses that a new dialect should be invented for global interaction. This essay will argue that demerits of the introduction of new language offset the merit entailed by this state of affairs, as this will lead to stress, confusion amongst many and will take time to instate globally.

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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

All parents want to indulge their kids with things they never could have in their childhood. Whether guardians should entertain every wish of their children without limits, is a concern for a vast majority of people. In my opinion, this method of parenthood is not ideal and would lead to undesired outcomes as the child gets older.

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Differemce between countriwes cbecome less evident each year. Nowadyas, all over the world peopl;e share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits asnd TV channels. DO the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Globalisation has resulted in a constant diminution of differences amongst nations which reflects in increased resemblance of dressing style, eating habits, preference for entertainment and infotainment; and so on. It seems to me that the advantages of such an intermingle are far beyond its dr=awbacks.

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Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but others believe it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education and health play a vital role in the development of a country. People think that the government should bear such expenses as these issues are becoming very expensive for a normal person. This essay will discuss that the authorities should be liable for the healthcare and educational liabilities of its citizens conditioned that an equal amount of tax will be charged from everyone.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.

Today's world is the world of technology, due to globalisation everyone is connected to one another through technology and has access to every kind of information. Therefore some consider that sharing scientific research, business and academic information publicly is good while others do not support this idea. However ,in my opinion , everyone has the right to get knowledge about what is happening in the world, so sharing information is good as it would be beneficial for some.

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Some people believe that learning science is necessary for everyone, others disagree. Discuss both views and mention your opinion.

In today's world technology is rapidly increasing, in such a situation, few argue that learning science is important to keep ourselves updated, while others believe that it is not necessary to gain knowledge only in this domain. This essay will discuss both perspectives and then give the concluding view at the end.

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Some think that children should start school as early as possible, while others believe that they should start school at the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, education is a very important topic, it can give a better future and the time the children will start is a very controversial topic, and each parent has their opinion about this. I will give my opinion in this essay and I will discuss both views in further paragraphs.

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social media is promoting communication between people . do you agree or disagree ?

social media or the internet promoting communication are you with or against

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social media is promoting communication between people . do you agree or disagree ?

It is undeniable that the internet plays a pivotal role in today’s world . there are some opinions which propose bonds and communication between each other are strengthened by the internet innumerable applications , I agree with this notion . In the following essay , some ideas that support my opinion will be discussed thoroughly .

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Large companies use sports events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, you see promotions everywhere around the stadiums. Some people tend to believe that this has a negative effect on sports, but other people think that this negative effect is not true. Hereafter, I will clarify to what extent I agree with these individuals.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.

It is commonly argued that much information for particular purposes such as scientific research, business and the academic world should be spread widely on purpose, however, some pupils state that the highly sensitive information should be kept due to its privacy. Thus, the essay elaborates on both perspectives respectively, then I will directly write my opinion afterwards.

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