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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree

According to some, music helps to bring people together from different parts of the world, different ages, and cultures. I agree with this suggestion. This essay will argue that at concerts and in clubs, most people tend to be more friendly and cohesive and fan clubs of world-famous celebrities also help people to find new friends.

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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for parents doing this? Is this a positive or negative development for the children?

With all the different crises around the world, some parents agree with the statement they ought to pressure their scion to get always the best they can, as rushing for getting them successful in their lifetime. However, contradicting that, other ones believe they must be careful in putting so much expectation in their minors. I tend to agree to this later since, as far as I can gather, success does not represent the most important aim in life.

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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?

Nowadays, the majority of murders gain freedom from prisons that perpetrate further scandals. I think this is mainly because of the government laws and age differences, but there are some problems.

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Completing university education is thought be some to be the best way to get a good job.On the other hand,other people think that getting experience developing soft skills is more important.Discuss both view and give your opinion

Education is one of the blessings to mankind which bestowed cognitive skills and lucrative jobs. Strata of population opine that finishing higher studies is the best way to do a satisfying job while rest people reckon that higher experience and developing dexterity is more prominent.This essay will discuss why further education is crucial but why experience and other skills are ultimately superior.

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Countries with a long average working time and more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there is a common view that nations with extra labour time would be provided more profits than countries with short average working hours. At the same time, however, there is some uncertainty as to whether overtime work could provide economic prosperity . In this essay , I will review both sides of the issue to seek a conclusion.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway line for very fast trains between cities. Other believes the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion

In today's world, public transportation plays a significant role in people's lives whether it is rail transit or bus transportation. This essay will augment my views on both cases.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry. why is this case? what can be done about this problem?

Nowadays, many people still suffer from hunger whereas modern technology helps more farmers compared to the past. In this essay, I will explain the causes and then suggest possible solutions to resolve this problem.

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wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed that protecting wild animals is vain and a waste of money and other resources since the current century does not need wild animals anymore. I firmly disagree with every single component of this idea.

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Some people think car is the best way to travel in city while other think bicycle is better discuss both give your opinion

Some people argue that a car is the most useful way of transport in the city while others claim that biking can be more advantageous than driving cars . In my opinion , I take the view that both these two ways of transport can have several advantages and each of them can be used regard to the situation .

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There are many advertisement directed at children. Parents argue that children are mislead, while advertisers consider advertising a source of useful information. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, advertisements have been increasing as well as the development of technology. Moreover, most of the advertisements are aimed at children because the company believe that children are the country developers. However, parents think that it is not appropriate. In my point of view, I do agree with the idea of giving useful information to the younger generation through advertisements. This further essay will discuss the benefits of the promotions.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Over a decade, the number of workers suffering from different health issues has constantly increased since they do not do exercise or other beneficial activities. From my perspective, there are immense factors why people rarely workout but the main one is overworking which can cause either mental or physical problems afterwards. This essay will talk about the causes of this circumstance and the possible solutions.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extend do you agree?

Several individuals imagine that rather than to prevent climatic changes, the world needs to identify ways of adapting. I totally disagree with this idea. This essay will illustrate and explain this position.

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Living a county where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is undeniable that speaking another language apart from mother’s language is practically and socially challenging for the people living abroad. I strongly agree with this statement because language is the main key for communication and a lack of understanding of different languages would create many difficulties in social interactions and everyday situations.

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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion

Living in an egalitarian society, some argue that equality is important and that women should do jobs according to their preferences. However, others maintain that not all the jobs are suitable for women, there are must some works have to be done by men. In my opinion, I agree with the first statement and think that they still can do an excellent job in every kind of work content.

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Some people think it is best to save money, for example in a bank or saving scheme other people feel that money should be spent whenever, it is available. Discuss these views and reach and opinion on this debate.

Undeniable money is a popular topic that is debated by many. But that can not be circumvented by anyone, because the opinion on this matter will determine one's attitude. Before reaching a concrete conclusion, let us take a glance at both sides of the argument.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first sentence. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem ?

It has been said that criminals would engage in more wrongdoings after their first sentence. In this essay, I will suggest that social learning and being brave cause this phenomenon and then argue that the best solutions are an encouragement to modifications and strengthen the negative impacts of jails.

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Some people say that in all levels of education too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

For one to be fully equipped for the world today, we have to spend quality time in school depending on one's course of study. Some have argued that we dwell more on academics in schools than the required knowledge we need to thrive in our day to day activities. I strongly agree with this view because our current schooling system has more breadth than depth.

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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some individuals may think that the world should have just one official authority structure rather than every country having a government. It seems that in the present age, despite the fact that there are various national cultures having one supreme government isn't a bad idea. Now I will explain my opinion on both sides.

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Task 2: There are more and more effective security measures in large cities to reduce the crime. Does the endeavor bring more benefits than problems?

There is a controversial idea heating a debate over the fact that there are numerous security actions in metropolises to reduce the crime rates. From my perspective,the endeavor is beneficial but still has some disadvantages

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Many students have to study subjects which they donot like. some people think this is a complete waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Certain individuals are of the view that it is pointless for learners to do courses that are not their favourite. I totally agree with this outlook. The essay discusses the reasons for this position such as content obtained but not used in work situations and missing out on other courses that could have aided their employability.

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