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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Abortion has been a debatable topic due to its spontaneous increase in recent times. However, there are two views to it, one supporting legitimising abortion and the other faction opposing it. Personally, my thought goes along with the latter group.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is becoming increasingly common that many organizations overly place their focus on the novelty of their products. ,Personally I think this may bring more negative impacts to society, especially for consumers.

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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays due to increased demand for oil and natural gases in urban areas 'however, remote and untouched areas encounter few drawbacks due to this development. In my ,opinion it is a positive development. In this essay, I will be discussing the advantages and disadvantages as per my knowledge.

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More adults work from home as computer technology becomes cheaper and more accessible. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The advanced technology of computer make it possible for people with access to the internet to work from residence becomes affordable and convenient. I agree that this trend has various benefits. However, some demerits also should be taken into consideration.

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In some cities, people are choosing cars instead of bicycles, while in other cities riding bikes is replacing cars. Why is this case? Which development do you think is better?

In modern society, crime rate has been rapidly change compared to the earlier decades. This essay will explore which are the reasons influenced by the main problem and express my view in the end.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays with the development of internet connections, each person can download and listen to any type of music without hesitation. Most music lovers, all over the world believe that music is a perfect method to make a strong relationship with different cultures. I strongly agree with this idea.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do you agree or disagree?

Many years ago, producing sugar was difficult and it was a luxury good hence many people could not use it. But nowadays, sugar manufactury is easy and most food and beverages companies using huge amounts of sugar in their products. Due to the increasing rate of sugar consumption, increase some diseases dramatically as well. A solution that helps to decrease the effect of using sugar is increasing the sugary product price. I partially agree with this idea but in my idea, there are more effective solutions.

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Some people think that because of email and telephone, communication among people is less personal now than it used to be. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is believed that modern ways of communication like email and telephone are less personal than talking face-to-face. This essay disagrees with the fact as the young generation are adapting to these modes and folk who are less confident in person are able to communicate and express themselves better through them.

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More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions?

Consumption of sugary drinks is increasing every day even though are unhealthy. The main reason for this is the way they are advertised. Therefore, agencies should mention the harmful effects of these drinks on human health in their advertisements, so people should know what they are choosing.

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Nowadays, scientists and tourists can travel to remote natural environment such as the South Pole. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

With the advent of technologies, a large number of improvements have been implemented in the tourist industry the world over. Resultantly, in this day and age, scientists and travellers are able to traverse remote areas, such as the South Pole, North Pole, and things like have come along with a number of upsides and downsides. Whereas this travelling habit removes boringness and helps people increase knowledge, it can also be risky and cause the destruction of the ecological cycle.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

Evergrowing cities are forcing people to build houses in the countryside resulting in environmental and social challenges. Few people think that protecting the countryside from these challenges is important than allowing new house construction. However, homes are very important to mankind, and is considered one of the basic right of every individual. I believe allowing the expansion of home construction into villages are critical to satisfying the basic need of human beings which is a shelter for all, and the essay shall try to put forward my rationale behind the thought.

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These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Despite the fact that it has been pointed out by some that more and more families relocate to other nations to find a decent job and this situation benefits their children, other people opine that this trend will bring more difficulties to their young children's lives. Personally, I agree with the former idea as moving to a new country is beneficial to young people's development.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In today's most developing and rapid-growing world learn about some a new accent is necessary. A number of people believed that learning a new voice is a trend because of travelling or work, on the other side, some think completely opposite. while I believed that not only specific purpose we learn a new accent but there are many reasons.

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary

It is often argued that selecting an occupation with high wages is more advantageous, even if it doesn't appeal to one at all, However I cannot entirely agree with this opinion and think career contentment is more critical than a considerable income.

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Many people in the music business feel that illegal music sites on the internet are a serious threat to the industry and more should be done to prevent them from operating. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

In today's modern world, there has been a sudden escalation in the number of music followers. Some people from the music industry feel that this rise has led to the rapid increase in illegal music sites which can be a serious threat to the business. In my opinion, I support this contention due to many reasons. This essay will argue why this statement is true.

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Some believe in enrolling their children into the best schools so that they learn to socialize while others believe that homeschooling is a better option. Discuss both views and where do you stand on this topic?

It is undeniable that education plays a vital role in the character formation of an individual. Several people believe that top-rated schools are necessary for the socialization of children while others opine that learning from home is helpful to mould a child's character. I would consider in detail both sides of the argument before expressing my view.

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By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murderers. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.

It is generally said that the death penalty is a barbarian punishment even though the prisoner is a murderer or has performed serious assaults against other humans. Plenty of people argue that, in order to be more civilized we must seek better ways of reforming criminals while others claim that liberating society from those people is a better option. I personally feel that execution is one of the worst punishments, this essay will discuss my opinion and its social implications.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

As a result of the evolution of the technology over past few decades, the future of transport looks promising with driverless vehicles. Within a phenomenon where only passengers would be the only ones travelling in the vehicles, that would clearly lead to much more positives rather than the negatives, especially due to highest safety levels and optimum efficiency.

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In developing countries, some people believe that their government should introduce new technology to people in order to improve their quality of life. Others believe that offering free education would be more advantageous in the long term. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A segment of society believes that there should be the introduction of the latest sophisticated technological gadgets to raise the standard of living. However, others reckon that the government should offer education at no cost and this would be fruitful in future. I opine that latter view has more benefits in contrast to the former one. In this ,essay both aspects will be explicated.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Nowadays, there is an increase in the trend of owning money from banks in order to receive their desire, although they do not necessarily need it on a daily basis. This essay conveys the compelling reason for this action of those people. In addition, suggestions are offered to tackle the aforementioned issue.

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