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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Obesity is an increasing public health problem in some parts of the world. Explain some possible reasons for this problem, and suggest some solutions.

Obesity is at an alarming rate in some regions of the globe. Only some people are nowadays more focused on health while the majority of the people are suffering from obesity. Although there are some possible causes for this increasing graph there are also some solutions to it. We will discuss both in detail in the below paragraphs.

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As major cities around the world are growing, so are their problems. What are these problems for young people living in cities? What are possible solutions for these problems?

Big cities are rapidly developing every day, however, issues come up along with these developments, affecting the young population. I'm hoping to properly present the problems which major cities face, as well as possible solutions.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option?

In this contemporary world, the advent of technology has changed our life enormously. Moreover, it assists to improve our knowledge different languages in all over the world through its' precious accessible websites. Even though in the recent period of times some accents vanished and people believe these speeches are unnecessary to their life, declared that can be easy to live with fewer mother tongues. Thus , I completely disagree with the above statement and I will elaborate on my opinion in the following paragraphs.

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Some people hold that it is the television that alienates the relationship of family members. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by some members of society that television destroys close relationships among family individuals. I partially agree with this opinion.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion

People are working to fulfil their needs,Though,Sometimes no one gets accurate feedback or energy in their working environment.Certain groups argue that if we have wrong situations ,then accepted the issues and continue to the work But some others mentioned that they overcome those situations and achieve the goals.I agree with the second opinion ,As I grew through that point of view.This essay will elucidate both standpoints before we reach the conclusion.

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These days, many people are choosing to learn languages online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of learning a language online?

In the contemporary world, people started to depend on tetechnolo more often such as online learning. There are many benefits to learning a language through the internet as well as a few drawbacks. Both sides will be discussed in this essay.

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Buying things in the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this ways outweigh the disadvantages?

With the rise of the world wide web came a new way of shopping and that is through sites such as Amazon and E-bay. This method of purchasing goods has many advantages and I believe they outweigh the disadvantages.

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Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people prefer to finish their work alone. The others are more into completing tasks with teamwork. In general, humans are a species that belongs to social animals. This is why we have a lot of group activities in school education. From my perspective, I do believe that teamwork skill is vital abilities which must be mastered.

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Nowadays getting a job is becoming harder in poor countries leading to a rise in unemployment. Some people believe that pupils should only be allowed to access primary education while others believe that secondary education is necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Unemployment is one of the biggest problems faced by developing countries as well as by underdeveloped countries. Certain individuals insist that children should only be allowed to take education till primary school. Whereas, on the other, hand there are some people who state that secondary education is essential in order to reduce unemployment. In my view, I totally agree with the latter statement, and it will discuss further in the essay.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations.

In today’s world, there are numerous industries that are looking for workers. However, some people prefer to stay in one association for a long period of time. Meanwhile, Other sizeable groups choose to move to another employment merely for higher salaries. Personally, people who spend more time in a workplace will probably gain more knowledge and powerful position, compared with other groups. This essay will elucidate both standpoints.

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Some people believe that time spent on television and computer games can be valuable for children. Others believe this has negative effects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The advancement in technology influences the living standard of human beings to the extent that we cannot survive without it even for a second. Some people advocate that time spends on leisure activities like television and computer games is lucrative for the juveniles, while others say that it has many negative ramifications in the long term. I think that it has more negative impacts on the health and development of kids.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right or wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. Agree or Disagree?

Children as we all know need guidance at an early stage. Certain demography of society believes that punishment is an important tool to teach infants how to differentiate right from wrong at an early stage. I strongly agree with this notion and would be supporting my idea with illustrations followed by a lucid conclusion to the essay.

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some people believe that technology has man-made more social do you agree or disagree

The world is speedily moving into a technologically driven society. Certain individuals believe that the introduction of automation has made man more social. I will argue why I completely agree that the introduction of automation has made man social.

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Some people believe it is a good idea for students to work part-time to ensure better opportunities in future. Others are of the opinion, job during study distracts the individual. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Working part-time for students can lead to better prospects in their careers while some people are of the opinion that their jobs can also distract them from their studies. While more experience will always help but will also impact their academic results. Both the opinions are discussed in the detail below.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays people have too many opportunities for what they want to do and people who achieve something can do it more easily than in former times thanks to advanced technological appliances,developed devices or improvements in artificial intelligence.Therefore,individuals have oodles of options in their lifestyles.Some populations assert that people who live in the current time have a lot of choices whereas another side claim that people who live in the past generation have more choices.From my point of view, we have too many alternatives because of the developed Internet and developed appliances.

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Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent agree or disagree?

Nowadays, technology has become an integral part of society. Some percentage of the population think that the earth was better with a less technical touch on it. While I agree that the world was much better with minimum innovations but there are also some advantages to it.

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many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

In today's modern industrialized world, a number of individuals spend most of their time working and the rest of their time are too little to be able to do leisure activities. In this essay, I shall discuss the statement to demonstrate salient points followed by providing a reasoned conclusion.

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Some people prefer hobbies that require technology, whereas others prefer hobbies that do not require technology. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that the number of the population engaging in hobbies with electronic devices worldwide incredibly rocketed. Certain individuals think that it offers merits to their life. Others state that hobbies which are without technology are the best way to engage. In my opinion, however, I sit on the latter view and this essay explores the pros and cons of both statements.

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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

Leisure activities are predominant for children's growth mentally as well as physically. Some believe that it should be controlled with educational activity otherwise children are wasting their time on nothing. On the other hand, some say that it should not be controlled and we let offsprings play in their own way to leisure. I strongly support the latter view. In following the paragraphs, I explain brain development and creativity to support it.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

Any human is called during lifetime to face several challenges in many aspects, such as an underpayment job or o tough working environment. Many individuals pathetically deal with the given circumstances, while others dynamically react to create new opportunities. Through this essay, it is going to be discussed both views and I will state my opinion in favour of an energetic way of acting.

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