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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation

Having your own abode, small or big, is counted as a great blessing. Our elders from previous generations emphasized making their own dwelling as it is considered a lifetime asset. Definitely, it has many advantages over renting a residential property and that's why it is considered a positive situation in numerous countries.

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More and more people are shifting to cities from countryside. Do this have advantages or disadvantages on environment?

Population in urban areas is becoming increasingly popular nowadays. This has many disadvantages to the environment. One is deforestation and the other one is destroying lakes and ponds. This essay will discuss the above two points in detail.

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There is a problem today that copyright materials such as music, films and books are freely available on the internet with the result that the owners of the works lose money. Do you feel that this is a good or bad thing?

Through the widespread of information transformed via the internet, there are many different topics that have been send and received. The problem arises when these transformed materials are illegally have stolen by the owner. There are movies, music, and many books that can be downloaded without getting permission or purchasing. Not to mention that this activity can be presumed a kind of robbery, and the rights of the inventors or publishers are neglected. I strongly believe that it is not acceptable. Although, there are some unusual situations that should be considered.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are several environmental issues on the globe that we are dealing with. According to some, reducing a certain species' population is the most important one. However, others defend that the main reason is pollution in the habitat and sea which is also behind the extinction. I definitely agree with this with considering all kinds of garbage and nuclear poison on the environment.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Nowadays, the popularity of the crime novels and TV series is increasing in a huge number of nations. This essay will discuss why such TV shows and books are becoming popular, and how as well as what negative impacts they bring.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this day and age, many citizens think that talent is decided upon birth, but there are also citizens who stand up to that point and believe that an individual can learn it. This essay will view both sides of the argument, and how being a hard worker had its charms.

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The best way to resolve the international environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that one of the most effective ways that alleviate environmental issues is raising the prices of fuel. While I agree that this method would contribute to improving the environment, there are also many other ways to protect our Earth.

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Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Traffic congestion is rapidly on the elevating mode by the sunrise worldwide.In this ,regards only some people believe that demotivating individuals to move from village to suburb is the resolution of this issue. Nonetheless,I strongly accord this idealogy apart from this government can impose strict traffic rules and erect infrastructure.this articulation will elucidate affiliated justification of my standpoint in the forthcoming paragraph.

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Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

If someone is a public figure such as a movie star or professional athlete, that has both downsides as well as perks. While there are possible advantages to being a celebrity, it is my opinion that the disadvantages are more significant.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

Natural calamities are inevitable and will shake the country which faces them. Some opine that during such disasters economically sound nations should provide foreign aid to poor developing countries.I completely agree with this notion and the same shall be discussed further in this essay

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

It is always better to learn a foreign language for every student. However, some intellectuals say that this training ought to start from the primary level of education only. In this essay, I will exhibit how the benefits outweigh the negative consequences of this trend.

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Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities.To what extent do you agree ?

It is believed by certain individuals that local communities should be offered games and social amenities by organizations. In my opinion, I completely agree with this perspective as enterprises can not only earn free advertisement but can also gain social recognition for serving humanity.

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School teachers should stop using books in teaching rather use video games computers and TV as children find books boring. To what extent do you agree

In recent times, children find brochures boring and would rather prefer teachers to cease the use of textbooks and incorporate the use of video games and computers in giving lectures. A notion I kick against, as cessation of the use of books would bring about the death of the habit of reading.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-emploed rather than to work for company or organization. Why might this be the case?. What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In the contemporary era, there are many people who want to start their own business. They don't like jobs at any company. They want to develop their business. There are myriad advantages of this step. I will discuss the advantages in the upcoming paragraph.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, social sites are becoming more familiar among people of different ages. Despite the fact that social media has many advantages such as better communication and entertainment, some people claim that it has drawbacks if users share their personal data unwisely. From my perspective, I believe that the pros of social media outweigh the cons for the reasons that will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's world, due to the advent of technological devices, many individuals' calls and behaviour are checked for different purposes. Although the country can benefit from this approach in order to improve the country's immune system, I believe that there are several disadvantages that can bring dire consequences.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

The invention of computers is a proven boon for human beings. That being said, it has been argued that excessive use of them by children has many adverse effects on their well-being. Although there are some positive aspects of computer learning, I believe, with constant use, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages in terms of eye health, logical development, and psychology.

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Loneliness is an increasing problem in many societies, especially among the elderly. Why is this? How might it be remedied?

Isolation is a universal human emotion that is both complex and unique for each individual. Nowadays old people face this issue a lot all over the nation. In this essay, I would discuss the factors of insulation from society and how to tackle those problems.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, in the era of the covid-19 pandemic, a large number of people have prolonged office hours which leaves no time for recreational activities. Going forward in this essay I will emphasize the disadvantages of this work culture.

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Many people say that they believe it is important to protect the environment but make no effort to do anything about it themselves. Why do you think this is the case? What action do you think individuals should take to protect the environment?

Preservation of the environment nowadays become a heatedly topic that everyone discussed, but no one gives top priority to improve the environment. In this essay, I will discuss some of the main causes of this phenomenon and elaborate on some possible solutions for it.

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