IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 373

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Some societies believe that children must be taught to be hard-working people so they can obtain everything they want. This attitude obviously contributes to their success. However, there are also some disadvantages that one must be aware of. Both views will be discussed in the following paragraph.

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem?

Some types of animals are nearly lost from the environment, and a good number of others are on the way to this danger. One of the crucial reasons for this is deforestation. However, there are many solutions for this problem available, one of which is law enforcement.

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Some people think that activities during the free time should be planned while others disagree. Discuss both sides and include examples and relevant data from your own experience.

It is often argued by many that the masses should plan activities for spare time, whereas others believe that there is no need to plan things. This essay will discuss both views as far as I am concerned I am in favour of the former notion.

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Caring for children is important in any society. All parents should be required to take childcare courses. Do you agree or disagree?!

Children are an important part of any society. Taking care of them is essential for the proper growth of the community. It is believed that parents must attend childcare courses to help them nurture their children without any discomfort. This essay agrees with the statement and discusses why it is important for parents to attend such courses.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they lie in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Nowadays, many individuals are showing attitudes towards the history of the place they live in. This phenomenon is rising globally and thus the need for finding proper ways to gather data. In this essay, I will explain some major reasons behind this trend as well as how to search for related instruction.

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The job market today is very competitive and it is best to choose a career or field of study early in order to get a good job later in life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s highly competitive job market, opting for an occupation in advance is primarily seen as a key factor in securing a decent job later on. While I agree that early planning may not be suitable for everyone, I firmly believe that it is one of the key factors leading to success.

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Young people are often influenced by their peers. This is called peer pressure. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is important to consider that peers have the greatest influence to lead a life. Although associate strain has some demerits, the merits are more reliable.

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People living in the twenty-first century have better standards of living than people who lived in the past. To what extent [completely/ absolutely --- partly/ somehow] agree or disagree?

It is believed that the society in the twenty-first century has higher standards of living compared to the previous generations. From my point of view, I strongly agree with this statement. Furthermore, the improvement of technology and the higher level of purchasing power of people living in the twenty-first century are the main factors of their better living standards.

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Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age. This is called "peer pressure". Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages?

Some people believe that youngsters can be influenced by their peers and call it "peer pressure". Meanwhile, others think that the advantages may outweigh the drawbacks. It is argued, that kids at the same age exert negative pressure on their friends. In this essay, I will shed some light on the issue and highlight the main pros and cons of "peer pressure".

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Should parents be held legally responsible for the actions of their children? Support your opinion with personal examples.

The impact of being legally responsible has sparked major controversy in society. While some people believe that parents are held legally responsible for the actions of their children, others claim that the opposite holds true. This essay will elaborate on both sides of the debate and thus lead to a logical conclusion.

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the mani aim of advertising is increasing sales of products that people do not really need. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, advertising has played a crucial role in promoting the products of some stores. Some people argue that the primary purpose of advertisement is to push the sale of items that are unessential for consumers. In my view, I partly agree with this statement. And I will shed light on the issue in the following essay.

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In many countries, the role of education is continuously evolving. Some people believe that traditional education methods, such as lectures and examinations, are the most effective ways to learn. Others argue that new technologies should be incorporated into the education system to enhance the learning experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people prefer using advanced features to improve their study experience. However, it is believed by some people that students learn more effectively with standard education methods. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence as to why an education system with technology is necessary for modern students.

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Waste production and management have been a cause of concern globally. These days there has been a significant increase in the amount of rubbish. This essay will discuss why this might be the case and how the problem could be alleviated.

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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that celebrities should be respected by the media and have a private life, while others believe that being a famous person leads to the media group the right to invade their privacy. In my opinion, I believe that although the Newspaper, Radio, Television and social media have the right to base their work on fame, invading the private lives of those who achieved the highest point in their journeys becomes non-respectful behaviour from the media.

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8. Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s modern society, children necessitate fundamental changes to educational platforms. Although traditional subjects such as Math, Literature or science are undoubtedly significant, personally, I strongly believe that schools should incorporate practical life skills like baking, dressmaking or wood-making into education systems.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, in the modern world, people are facing various conditions in everyday life. Some of them are in constant bad situations, especially at work, including the lack of job satisfaction or low salaries. While some individuals accept it, there are others who think that it is better to change it until it gets better. I agree with the latter, it is worth it to take risks in case of improving life.

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People aim to achieve balance between work and other activities of their lives, but few are able to do this. Suggest problems in balancing and some solution for over-coming such problems

Over the last two or three decades, lifestyle and how people work have changed dramatically. People try to balance their work life and personal life but are unable to do so. This essay will discuss why this might be the case and how this problem can be alleviated.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which view point do you agree with?

One of the social concerns today relates to how to react to advertisements. While it is widely believed that advertising encourages people to buy things that they really do not need, others believe that advertisements tell consumers about new products that may improve their lives. In my opinion, advertisements are quick selling ways from the producers.

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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The growing prevalence of English as a global language has sparked debates on its impact on societies worldwide. I strongly agree that the advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. The language's widespread usage fosters international communication and business opportunities.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of whether financial aid from rich countries effectively addresses poverty in poor countries has led to discussions on alternative approaches. I strongly agree that developed countries should offer other types of assistance, in addition to financial aid, to help alleviate poverty in poorer nations.

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