IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 616

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

The problem of bullying on campuses has been a serious issue in many regions for a long time, which could be caused by various reasons, including the distinction in family backgrounds and characteristics. In my perspective, educational institutions play essential roles to encourage young individuals to embrace different opinions and the capacity of telling right from wrong.

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Some people think the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others think that it is the responsibility of the individuals to protect themselves. Discuss both sides

During all time, laws and rules around the world have changed and varied. Society has divided into two parts, where some people believe that government should face all criminal issues, but others claim that everyone ought to care about their protection by themselves.

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Scientific developments in farming always bring major benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this modern era, The development of scientific research has brought several benefits to farming. Some people state that with the advancement of ,knowledge gardeners will always gain more benefits. From my point of view, although it is undeniable that studies have provided many advantages to farming, it also brings a demerit which will be explained in the following paragraphs.

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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

In today's world people face a problem with animals' extinction. It is quite common due to logging, unlicensed hunting and urban development. In my opinion, it is essential to protect animals. Only humans are responsible for their protection. There are a lot of ways in which people can preserve animals. I think governments should bring in the law about the prohibition of illegal hunting and deforestation.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay to attention on it. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Over the past few years, advertising businesses have been growing rapidly and have been successful in attracting a diversity of customers, which I also support; however, the opposition argues that viewers do not need to focus more on advertisements. In this essay, I will discuss both points and justify my opinion.

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Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost everyday of the week in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development of shoppers and local communities?

When compared to how many hours shops stayed open in the past , it is obvious that shops end business very late every night in the week recently. While in some ways this development may seem reasonable to the community and people, I personally believe that it ultimately has negative consequences.

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Every country should have a free health service even if this means the latest medical treatment may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree

The issue of whether the government should pay for healthcare expenditures to their citizens, no matter how much the medication cost is, has long been controversial. Although it is obvious that a large proportion of the population may not have enough money to secure health problems, I believe that some of them, but not all, are still able to pay for themselves, as the huge demand for health expenses imposed a heavy burden on society.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Newspapers have always been the main source of knowledge for many until the internet became more accessible and rendered news reports obsolete. This is probably due to the fast-growing potential of this technology, which allows users to access news content fast, from their own comfort space and free of charge. I believe that the internet has enabled more people to stay up-to-date than the press ever did before.

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Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popular in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest

In this generation mostly gyms and a sedentary lifestyle is promoted by the media and it has become an integral part of the rising debate in the modern world. While proponents of the arguments are in favour. Even though, the opposite side people are completely against the gym and sedentary culture. In my opinion, Even though too many gyms are there but being physically active is more important.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many people argue that the reduction in the number or disappearance of species is the main environmental problem. In my opinion, however, there are more urgent environmental problems.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some professionals argue that the primary level is the right time for children to study a second language. Although it is beneficial to know a foreign language at a young age, I personally believe there are more drawbacks than benefits.

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Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly argued that international tourists should pay a higher price for traditional and historic sites. Personally, I completely disagree with this view for a variety of reasons.

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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, education and training are better solutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, the most basic way to solve crime is by putting criminals in prison. On the other hand, there is an opposing opinion said that education and training are more effective solutions. From my personal point of view, I agree that jail is a suitable way for solving crime since teaching and training criminals can possibly have some undeniable limitations.

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Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do agree or disagree?

The emergence of the internet as a supporting tool for education today has sparked controversy among the public about the necessity of schools. Some may argue that students can access online study via various networking-connected devices at home weakens the role of educational institutions. Personally, I hold an opposite view to the statement due to the following reasons.

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. do you agree or disagree?

It is being said that the future generation will be more inclined towards travelling in their own nation rather than spending time exploring new countries during their vacation. If questioned, I strongly disagree with the viewpoint. My inclination is justified in the following paragraphs.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that gasoline cars have to be prohibited and must be substituted for plug-in cars as fossils are the major cause of pollution. There are many environmental benefits of opting for electronic cars So, I agree with this statement. I will articulate this view with a plausible explanation in the following paragraphs.

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Over the past few decades, international travel has become more affordable and many people now choose overseas holidays. As a result, tourism is becoming a profitable industry in many countries. However, despite the benefits, tourism can also create problems. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism?

Tourism is a thriving industry that contributes significantly to the economic growth of many countries. While it brings in a range of benefits, it also poses some challenges. In this essay, I will examine both the advantages and disadvantages of the tourism industry.

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Some people believe that printed books are no longer necessary in this digital era as all writing can be stored electronically, others think that printed books can still play a crucial role. Discuss both views and give your opinion

People have various views about the role of physical books in our modern society, where electronic material and digital content are prevalent. But, others argued that paper writing is still essential in today's era. I will discuss both notions in this essay before going to a logical judgment in the impending paragraphs.

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Some people think the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the best course of action to enhance road safety is to increase the minimum age for operating two-wheelers and four-wheelers. I believe it is a good possible alternative but there can be other ways. I will articulate this statement with a plausible explanation in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while others believe that children learn teamwork. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Trees in the city are playing important roles. Some people believe that if there are any empty spaces in the city, trees should be planted while others say that building more houses there would be a better idea. I completely disagree with the idea of having more houses in a vacant area of the city.

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