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In poor families, teenagers may have to work part-time as well as study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this for these teenagers

In recent times, education has become costlier than in ancient times to get a qualification. One should work hard to pay the enormous amount of fees of the schools if one belonged to a poor family. By doing part-time work with application, juveniles have some pros and cons. The advantages and disadvantages of these types of children are articulated in the ensuing paragraphs.
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Nowadays people have cosmetic surgery to improve life. Why do many more people choose these operations? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, there has been a significant increase in the number of people turning to cosmetic surgery. This phenomenon is caused by various reasons and it has stirred up many heated arguments on whether cosmetic surgery is a positive or negative trend. Personally, I see myself siding with the former.
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Tourist -positive or negetive development..it has become easier and more affordable for people to travel to other countries ,do you think it is a positive or negetive development ? Give your opinion and revent examples from your experience

Just every coin has a flip side, tourism brings both positive as well as negative impacts on our life. I would elucidate the pros and cons of tourism in the following paragraphs. But I opine that there are more pros than cons.
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To what extent do you agree that people in high positions should get paid more than those in lower positions.

In the working field, the employees on the upper side of the scale get a higher paycheck than those in the lower positions. I moderately agree with this idea and this essay will discuss the arguments that support my point of view.
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Life has become much more stressful compared to our parent’s generation. As a result, stress-related illnesses are increasing around the world. Why is stress such widespread in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?

The world is changing every day, and mental illnesses are becoming more and more populated. Recently, many people are experiencing bad mental health conditions. The reason why stress is so widespread in the modern world and how to overcome it will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
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People today sleep less and less. What are the causes of this? Do you think this is a positive development?

There have been ongoing debates regarding whether or not many people have a tendency to sleep less nowadays. This essay will elaborate on the cause of this surge in population and the reason why I believe that there is more negative development than positive.
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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people often argue that it is good to make friends who think the same as them, but some opine that friends should have their view whether it is opposite to theirs. Having the same point of view keeps the arguments away and strengthens the bond, whereas different opinions could lead to arguments, but sometimes it is interesting to learn new things. I shall discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs, followed by my opinion.
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Topic: a great city should not be confounded with a populous one. Discuss the above statement and give your own opinion

A great city not necessarily is a populous one, since a small town can be more comfortable and calmer. Nevertheless, a big city is full of activities and possibilities. Therefore, while I agree that villages can be enjoyable to live in, only populous metropolia are called great by me personally.
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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while other do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend

In recent times, most people are using e-book devices instead of paper books. The main advantage of this trend is that it helps to access any information immediately and the main drawback is that it is unprecedictabal their life span. Using e-books has several merits.
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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects, other people think that, in today's world,subjects like Science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the present world, people are moving to learn science and technology, but some people believe history is most important than science and technology. I agree with both are essential in the present world, and these reasons will be discussed in the below paragraphs.
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Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. Therefore, it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that reading the newspaper and watching television news programs are a waste of time since they have no association with people's lives. I strongly oppose to this statement and will give my reasons below.
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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural areas, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, with technological advancements, it is easy to reach hidden areas. Similarly, scientists and travellers can migrate to natural remote locations like the southern parts. This essay will explain its benefits and drawbacks and will analyse them before forming an opinion.
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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that businesses need to make a profit in order to not declare bankruptcy. Some people have opinions about whether businesses should have public responsibilities. From my perspective, I totally agree with the statement.
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A gift (such as a camera, a soccer, or an animal ) can contribute to a child's development. what gift would you give to help a child develop? why? use reasons and specific examples to support your choices.

Nowadays, children love to spend their childhood time with a gift. Some might opine that children will be more developing via the gift that they received such as a camera, a soccer or an animal. This essay will highlight my preference regarding the suitable gift to assist the development of the child as well as the reasons behind that.
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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantage and disadvantage of giving this message?

Occurred that some cultures may force their children in order to achieve something that they want by working hard. As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages and disadvantages and this essay will discuss them based on my personal opinions that can be given below.
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The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school, to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is a hot topic in discussion, how to teach students about being cooperative. It is often argued that group sport is the best method to teach students to associate at an institution. I strongly agree with this statement and I think that teachers can also find other methods to teach children to cooperate. I will explain my reasons for it in the upcoming paragraphs.
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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Advertisement is commonly used by organizations. Few people believe that promoting the products motivates people to buy things that they are not really required but, other feel that it inform people about the new features that could enhance their lives. I strongly believe that the promotion of products always tries to sell the brand and it targets children for business.
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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

Recently, mega malls and large supermarkets attracted more customers than the smaller ones which lead to their closure. Although some believe such development is quite positive, others including me think that the side effects would outweigh the benefits. This change would affect the local businesses and their economy, while may monopolising the shopping industry. Both ideas will be discussed in this essay.
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Some employees want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

Work is the ability to do something and for this ,reason individuals or institutions employ other people to work for them and be paid. Some of these job givers expect their employers to be available for them at all times, even on ,days they are not supposed to be at work. I think the downside of this is more than the upside. In this essay, I will highlight both advantages and disadvantages.
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2. It has been claimed that workers over 50 are not responsive to rapidly changing ideas in the modern workplace and that for this reason younger workers are to be preferred. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that due to the rapid changes occurring in modern workplaces, it is better to employ younger than older folk. I do not believe that this is the case.
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