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Should companies (businesses) ensure that they employ a quota (or fixed percentage) of women in all jobs, or is this an impractical concept? Discuss both sides of this debate, and reach a conclusion based on your own opinion.

A firm becomes one of popular in this area for young people, while the number of employees should be a fixed percentage of all women. However, this is things that inaccurate to provide in the business.
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Some people suggest that schools should pay more attention to academic subjects for children because these subjects are useful for their future career. They think that subjects like music and sport are not useful and should be reduced. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, many people believed that schools should strengthen their role in orienting a good future career for students by concentrating on educating academic subjects and eliminate such excessive subjects like music and sport. I agreed that academic subjects are necessary for future jobs, but the minor subjects are crucial too.
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Nowadays, people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat balanced diet. What are the reasons behind this? Suggest possible solutions to control this.

In this modern era, a large number of people are observed to be negligent of their health as they eat unbalanced diets with no control of their bad eating habits, leading to health related issues later on. This essay delves into the requirement to establish reasons for these poor habits and to develop various solutions to address this problem.
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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

It is irrefutable that the university education is becoming increasingly popular these days.Some people believe that universities should enrol both genders equally in every course.This essay will argue that why it is not feasible to accept equal proportions of male and female students in every subject.
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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

PEOPLE TEND TO THINK DIFFERENT ON A SINGLE ISSUE AS SOME SUGGEST THAT beating IS SOMETIMES CRUCIAL FOR CHILDREN TO GRASP THE DISTINCTION BETWEEN RIGHT AND WRONG WHILE OTHERS HAVE THE MINDSET THAT SUCH SPANKING MAY HAVE DETRIMENTAL EFFECTS ON CHILDREN. IN MY OPINION, AS BEATING AFFECTS CHILDREN NEGATIVELY, TEACHERS, AS WELL AS, PARENTS SHOULD BE VERY CAUTIOUS REGARDING THIS ISSUE, AND PUNISHMENT SHOULD BE AVOIDED BY ANY MEANS.
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As earth runs out of natural resources, we have started to look to space for solutions. However, some people argue that this is the wrong thing to do, and instead we should look for alternative solutions here on earth. To what extent do you agree with them? What alternatives might there be to exploiting space for natural resources

The speed at which natural resources on Earth have been getting depleted is alarming. Whilst it is believed by some that seeking an alternative solution in space is the best option, I concur with the notion that humans have to confine this quest to our planet only, for the former idea is not sustainable or cost-effective. What would be more appropriate in this situation is resorting to renewable energy.
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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is thought by some people that the more complicated hobby is, the more pleasurable experience it would be. Although I agree with this view to a certain extent, I also believe that other non-sophisticated hobbies are enjoyable too.
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Some parents are worried about the increasing level of violence in TV,vido games & other types of entertainment for children's leisure. How does this affect children? How do you think problem can be tackled?

Many parents are worried about the rise level of nuisance through digital gadgets and several entertainment ways. Its effects on the child's behaviour and leads towards the bad ways. The problem can be solved by proper monitoring of the child.
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Some people believe that the only purpose of films is to entertain. Others say films should have educational value. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

While some people consider films simply a source of entertainment, others agree that films should be educational. Personally, I believe that films can be both amusing and educational; however, it is up to what kind of the film is.
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In many countries imprisonment is the most common solution to crimes. However, some people believe that better education will be a more effective solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether imprisonment or education is a more effective ways to deal with criminals has long been a heated debate in many parts of the world. Regardless of some benefits of the former, I still believe the latter would produce more long-term results.
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Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing( for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras. In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Emerging technology has impacted on today's generation and some devices have ability to capture all the scenes on the spot where these machines are fitted to get information as well as most of the humans do not aware that they are being captured and tracked. I will discuss both positive and negative sides in the upcoming paragraphs.
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Essay writing. More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is irrefutable that an increasing number of people show a preference for high-end brands over those locally-produced counterparts. Personally, I believe this trend of consumerism might be attributed to the dominance of advertising and the desire for social status. While there are some drawbacks that can arise, I consider it to be far more beneficial.
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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree with this view?

A few people think that, government is spending huge amount of money on arts, which is of no use. While, others think that, money can be invested in others useful sources. In my opinion, I don't agree with this statement, because the arts have an immense potential, and it is the only immortal form that can always be lucrative if used appropriately. In this essay, we will go through the stated opinion elaborately.
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It is better for young people to get advice from old people than young ones. Do you agree or disagree?

In the human lifespan, individuals need an advice at various stages which plays an essential part in their life. Some people believe that elders are better at advising when young generation is in tribulation. I am with the opinion and shed some light on this with relevant examples in the following paragraphs.
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Some people think the best way to stay fit is joining a gym/helath club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, physical activities become popular in many parts of the world. However, although there are people argue that being a membership in a gym is healthy, there are other who believe that physical exercises are equivalents. I agree to some extent with this statement, and I will justify my view below.
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Since most information about culture and history can be found online, museums are no longer needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that the internet has risen in popularity over the past few decades. Although burgeoning information about traditions and past values can be found on the internet, I believe that only by going to museums, people would realize the real exuberance.
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Wild animals have no use in the 21 century and trying to preserve animals now is just wastage of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree with question

The issue of whether preserving wildlife is wasting property has been widely debated because some people claim that these animals are no places and useless in the 21 century. However, I totally disagree with this statement because there are some beneficial reasons in terms of biodiversity value which I will discuss in the further essays.
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Nowadays children watch too much TV. Why is this happening and what can be done to prevent it?

All over the world, the number of children who are watching TV has increased drastically over the past few decades. This essay will discuss various reasons associated with this trend and propose possible solutions to prohibit this trend.
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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It's an unequivocal fact that technological developments have exerted a huge impact on our life, especially in the way we obtain the information: surfing online news, ebook digesting, all on your smart devices. There is a believe that in no time the traditional publishing industry with printed products will die out and end up being replaced by the free online articles.
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Some parents buy their children a large number toys of toys to play with , What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys

Parents nowadays are more attracted towards buying toys for children rather than playing with them. This however has many advantages along with its disadvantages.
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