IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 11

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Taking a study break after high school and before joining university is very common in some countries. Many people spend their holidays travelling all around or doing full-time jobs. There are many demerits for young people who decide to do this.

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would you prefer to stay in one company or change companies at one point in your career life?What are the advantages and disadvantages for both scenarios?give specific details and examples to support your opinion.

Some people prefer to stay in the same company throughout their lives while others think that switching to a variety of companies is the best choice for them . Although I think that staying in one company may have some advantages , I believe that changing the workplace remains more advantageous for employees .

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with a high wage even if it doesn’t appeal to you at all. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that jobs comfort is much more important than earnings.

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“By definition, charity is generosity in offering money, food, and help to the needy. To some people, such kindness should be boundless, others argue for a limit to it.” Which opinion do you support? In about 300 words, present your arguments.

Intrinsically, charitable work is of the clearest manifestations of human’s benevolence towards one another, regularly seen either in the offer of sustenance, financial support, or help to the needy. While a number of people advocate such kindness ought to be unbounded, others claim the contrary, stating that there should be a limitation to it. From my perspective, I voice approval of the latter, in that I believe

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion You should write at least 250 words.

Some individuals commented that advancement in technologies straightforward the purchases. Although, others oppose the view. Personally, I agree with the statement owing to the fact that these innovations revolutionized the market. However, it has still some disadvantages. This essay will shed light on both sides of the matter and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Some individuals commented that apprentices should take culinary art as part of their school curriculum. However, others argue that solely the most crucial topics should be taken. Personally, I regard the first view as the most relevant for students mental development owing to the fact that it is the earlier preparation for adult life. Although, it is time-consuming. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some believe technology has made our lives too complex and the solution is to lead a simpler life without technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A couple of people thinks that living without technology is easy-going while the involvement of the latest equipment in our life makes it hard. I disagree that simple way is the only solution and this essay will discuss how machinery has made our life easier.

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Nowadays, celebrities earn more money than the politicians do. What are the reasons for this? Is it a negative or a positive development?

This is true that superstars have more revenue than politicians, so recently this has become a hot debate among people in society. This has diverse reasons and in this essay, I cite the main reasons and explain why this is a positive development.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that being a good member of society is crucial. While some people believe teaching this perspective to children is the parents' responsibility, others argue that it is the school's responsibility. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and propose my opinion.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

These days, there is an ever-growing number of product manufacture that brings about environmental problems. In this essay, both causes and feasible solutions will be analyzed.

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Many people think that the government should spend more money on providing faster and cheaper means of public transport. Some other think that there are other important factors to take into consideration like (petrol, cost and environment). Discuss both views and give your opinion?

These days, many believe that governing bodies must plan a budget that will focus on cheaper and faster means of transportation rather than the fuel, economics and environmental issues, which are again the outcomes of accessibility. My essay will discuss both the opinions to a better road-system and I personally strongly support that the cheap means to transport must be given preference.

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Children are engaged in different kind of paid work. Many of people consider it inappropriate and many think it as a learning experience for taking responsibility? Give your opinions and views on this statement?

Nowadays, children are keeping themselves busy with various types of work and are earning money along the way. While some people think it is absolutely unnecessary, others believe that it is an experience for them to gain knowledge or to build a skill which would make them responsible in future. I feel that the children should not work at an early age. I will explain my view with reasons and examples.

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Some people say that it is more important to spend time for developing a career. Some people say that it is important to share time with family and friends. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Time is money, which ought to be invested wisely. Hence, many people believe in spending some extra hours on their careers rather than socializing with family and friends. I tend to agree with the latter and in the forthcoming ,paragraphs the above proposition will be discussed in detail.

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no doubt that paying taxes can be difficult for parents that their children in a domestic school to help the government system for learning. Although some people believe that necessary at this time does to pay that money, I would argue that it is an essential stage to develop the education ways.

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In some countries, a lot of children have health issues and are becoming overweight. Some people think that the government should be responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, since the number of young people who have health problems has increased in some parts of the world, the debate that governments should take a step has risen. I firmly believe that parents and schools have more responsibility for that. In this essay, I explain two main reasons by which obesity could be controlled by parents and schools rather than governments.

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Establishing good relationship in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is commonly argued that the primary goal of everyone is to focus on his/her job duties, while, being on good terms with colleagues is not essential. Although I agree that being productive is more important than trying to befriend at work. I think that is advantageous to have a few friends in the workplace.

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Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or more problems?

The media illustrate us images of famous people on a daily basis. Although their lifestyle is often glamorous and enviable, it is not without its potential troubles. This essay will elaborate on the advantages and challenges that fame brings followed by my own take on the matter.

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being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity has more benefits or more problems?

Fame and its impact on the lifestyle of celebrities fascinate many people. Contributing personality stories in newspapers and magazines can potentially lead to selling thousands of newspapers and magazines. In my view, this status has more challenges than advantages for the people concerned.

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Earlier technology developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent development ever will To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the olden days, advancement in technology had tremendous advantages for common men and altered their lifestyles more than current expansion ever will. I completely agree with this opinion and think that the crowd at that time treasured the invention of automation hence used it sensibly furthermore the medical field got modernised.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Means of transportation have become the basic necessities of people as everyone has to commute for work, study, etc. However, whether more funds should be allocated for railways by the government remains a controversial debate. I completely agree that railways should be given importance as they are fast, economical and environment friendly.

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