IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 13

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

No doubt, with the advancement of technology, more and more nations are getting their interest in science as well as a business rather than just craft. While profession and craftwork have become a significant part of culture worldwide, I assume, that there are numerous reasons why the public is losing their involvement, still there are some measures that can be used to motivate society toward the craft.

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The nuclear family is well adapted to moving due to its size. Do you think children benefit in any way from moving? Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvanta

Nowadays, most families are nuclear, hence, it is easier for them to go from one place to another. Children in these kinds of brood might gain some benefits. However, in my opinion, in such a situation the cons outweigh the pros.

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Some people think that schools do not do enough to teach young people about how to look after their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

People are considered to think that during studying at a school pupils do not get enough information on how to take care of their health. In my view, it seems to be false, because there are schools where well-qualified teachers learn looking after the health as well as solving mathematical problems. In addition, school education consists of various subjects which help to understand how a human being's organism is working.

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Some peopleSome people believe that adults get motivated to exercise and play sports because of the major sports events on TV such as the Olympic Games and Football World Cup. Others say that there are many ways apart from TV to encourage them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Experts throughout the world have debatable whether sports events, whose people watch largely from all parts of the globe, increase the practice of exercise. The substantial importance of lifestyle has sparked over how to rise the expenditure on body activity. In my opinion, the population do not do more sport just by watching events.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

It is believed that computers devices should be introduced in the schools using their software for lecturing motives. However, computer addiction could hinder teenagers' development. Personally, I advocate the first view opposing the last owing to the fact that human beings are entering the machinery world which requires computers abilities in the earlier stage of their career. Although it may probably cause adverse effects. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Experts throughout the world have debated whether modernity improves the way humans communicate. The substantial influence of the Internet, laptops and mobile phones has sparked over people´s lifestyle in recent years because of that some believes that they socialize better than before. In my view, those networks allow for people to be close while close ones become distant.

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Space exploration costs tax payers’ an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration?

In modern life, the universe is discovering with a huge of interest and citizens all around the world are spending a big amount of cash for this research. This essay will be discussed about pros and cons of expending a huge amount of money on the exploration of space.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss Both views and give your opinion.

Companies using advertisements in order to market their products have become extremely popular. While some individuals believe that this practice has been successful in convincing the customers to purchase a variety of items, a sizable group claims that the advertising has become usual to an extent that it no longer receives the same attention. In my opinion, the fact that it has become common has lost its standard value. This essay will discuss both views and provide details to substantiate my view.

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Governments should spend less money on restoring old buildings and more money for new housing and roads development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Municipalities must not use resources on reviving aged structures but invest them in fresh houses and road refurbishment. I partly agree with this statement because new houses and roads would be easier and less expensive to construct but old buildings are equally important because they form the core of the identity of the place. These factors are discussed below.

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Advertising is all around us it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life some people say that advertising is a positive part of our life to what extent do you agree or disagree

It is known that most companies have creative departments to increase their sales. Nowadays, advertising is part of everybody's daily routine. While some people do not like this type of strategy, others believe that it is something good for people's life. I partially agree with the statement due to the negative effects that commercials could cause on some customers.

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Today, the quality of life in large cities are decreasing, what are the main causes and it's solutions?

Nowadays, a trend is seen in the diminishing of the quality of life in the urban areas. The forthcoming paragraphs will highlight what are the different causes behind this and a few potential measures to resolve it.

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television.However, television can not replace the book as a learning tool,which is why children are less well-educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Young people today invest much of their time in observing content on the television's screen, the reason why they are not so learned today, yet the reading of books remains more important than the former as a conduit of education. I totally disagree with this statement because so much can be learnt from television and hard copy books are now outdated given technological advancement. These are discussed below.

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Shopping is the favourite free time activity for many young people today. Why do you think this has happened? Should young people be encouraged to do different activities in their free time rather than shopping?

Admittedly, shopping is now considered as a new favourite pastime most adolescents pay attention to since it gives them pleasantness. There are immense factors why this circumstance happens including the influences of media and celebrities. However, excessive shopping will bring about other problems later so, in my opinion, they should be encouraged to do other beneficial activities.

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Task 2: Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

it is said that formal learning should be provided to kids in their earlier years, but many people argue that they should come at the age of seven to join the school. I think that it is an imperative decision to send children to school at an early age. I will discuss both statements in the upcoming paragraphs and give a conclusion at the end.

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Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Rich nations must welcome many asylum seekers and support their welfare. I totally agree with this statement because they have the resources and helping refugees is an act of kindness that prevents harm to them. These issues are discussed below.

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Some people think that government should provide free education at every level. However, some say that individuals should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is often argued that bureaucrats should make policies to impart studies free of cost at all stages, wherein some are of opinion that students at the college level should pay for themselves. As far as my opinion is concerned, I agree with the former as not everyone can afford tuition fees and eventually students have to give up their aspirations. I will be elucidating both views in the subsequent crumbs of writing.

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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration. To what consequences can it lead.

Moving to another country leaving their native place has become extremely popular these days. Immigration has shown a major effect on society. This essay will provide details about the causes of this situation and the consequences that are likely to be seen in future.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advances in technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Issues related to the crime rate are frequently discussed these days. It is argued that because of the development of technology, criminal situations have been fallen over recent years. I totally agree with this assertion and the explanation will be shown in the following paragraphs.

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some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed among some people that children should be taught to behave themselves well mostly by parents while others think that school is the best place to do that. This essay will discuss both views. In my personal opinion, both school and family must provide a child with knowledge of how to be a good member of modern society.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

For some time now, it has been an ongoing debate that the majority of people prefer to be self-employed rather than working for other companies. In this essay, I shall discuss this statement with suitable examples.

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