IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 10

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product such as a cell phone and services like medical treatment. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays money is an influential factor in everyone's life. Therefore, some people ponder over the price to be the vital thing to consider while buying a mobile and services like medical care. I would argue that this is not necessarily the case always which will be discussed in detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty per cent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife round the world?

Experts throughout the world have debated how to protect species from extinction. Over and above this, the substantial importance of being environmentally friendly has sparked in recent years. Additionally, humans must have a responsible attitude to preserve the world.

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In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a partuclar time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

For some time now, due to the rapid growth of urbanization, the public has been encountered by the scarcity of residency. In this case, some people argue that buying their own residence would be financially safe and secure, while others have a counter-argument that renting one would be much easier for temporary purposes. In this essay, I will discuss the main key factors along with my viewpoints.

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crimes by Minors are on the rose in recent times. the psychologist claims that the fundamental reasons for this is that children these days are lacking the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers. To what extent do you agree / di

The rise in child crimes has been attributed to the lack of socialisation in the home and school environments. I totally agree with this statement. This position is discussed more in the essay below.

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increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution. to what extent do you agree and disagree?

To prevent traffic congestion and air pollution, the government likely to increase fuel rates while there are numerous other ways to tackle this issue. To date, traffic and pollution have been a worst-case scenario but still, one way to make this condition controllable would be to have fixed outlaws on transportation facilities. In this essay, I will argue that increasing the price would certainly reduce the usage of vehicles but it would also make it entirely unfair.

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Some think that it is better to get information or advice from other people, while others believe one can get any information or advice from the Internet or books. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Getting information from the masses regarding some significant matters is recommended by a few people, while some argue, that attaining awareness online as well as from academic records is more efficient. Although, experienced individuals suggested to others by their own personal facts, I personally believe, that the data which is collected through the internet is widely known. Let's delve into detail.

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Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs. To what extent do you agree?

It is often argued that many believe that individuals should accept local traditions and cultures when they travel to a foreign country. I strongly agree with this statement because humans can able to communicate with populations from different cultures and develop themselves in the community.

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Some people believe that life in a big city is difficult while others say that it is more convenient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities?

Most population think that survival in metropolitan cities is hard. While others disagree and believe that it is more easy and suitable. Living in developed cities will aid in better job opportunities and convenience but there also will be some drawbacks.

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Some people think personal happiness is closely related to economic success, while others believe that it depends on other factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People hold conflicting views about whether the happiness of each person is based on various elements. While some believe that peace of mind is connected with economic prosperity, I would argue that well-being come from a range of aspect of our life.

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Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country develop faster. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that having people from other cultures contributes to the faster development of the country they live in. This essay will discuss why do I personally agree with the provided statement and relevant arguments to support my position will be provided.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is often accepted by some people for any kind of situation like dissatisfied work or poor financial condition, whereas it is asserted by others to plan for improvisation on the same. Although it is really tough to change the workplace frequently or get a promotion in the current work, I agree with the latter notion and opine that everyone should always keep motivating themselves to uplift their position to get good financial status along with job satisfaction.

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Some people think that environment problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the last few years, there has been considerable degradation of the environment. Many people believe that this problem can be resolved nation wise. However, in my opinion, it is a global issue and must be dealt with globally. The forthcoming paragraphs will elucidate both views in detail.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting University studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of your people who decide to do this

In some countries, students are been encouraged to take a gap of a year from their academic career, either to travel or work to gain experience. In my opinion, such practice has some pros as well as cons which will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Many retired people today are choosing to live in other countries. What are the advantages or disadvantages of this?

There is an elevating trend in elderly folk choosing to live in other countries after their retirement. In my opinion, this approach may have several advantages but also have multifarious disadvantages. The forthcoming paragraphs will elucidate both pros and cons of the above statement.

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Some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product such as a cell phone and services like medical treatment. Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays money is an influential factor in everyone's life. Therefore, some people ponder over the price to be the vital thing to consider while buying a mobile and services like medical care. However, in my opinion, this thought is not from a practical point of view which will be discussed in detail in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Wild animals should spend their entire life in a sanctuary that is much farther away from civilization. Few citizens think that a zoo is a dangerous location for any animal so it must be closed down whereas others believe that it is useful for safeguarding wild animals. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion.

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"These days people succeed in their chosen profession because they are good communicators and not just experts in a particular field". Discuss the reasons and why is the case. Give reasons to your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the ability to establish an efficient intellectual connection with other individuals is a prominent criterion in approaching prosperity, particularly in the working environment. Yet, there remains a controversial debate as to whether the overall effect of this skill can be benevolent in reaching success or the expertise in a career is more influential. This essay will discuss the proposed topic from both sides of view with some detailed explanations.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Evidence suggests that languages are becoming disappear all around the world. Although some individuals advocate that ding out more tongues can lead to having a more convenient life, I completely disagree with this statement and there are two compelling reasons that will be elaborated on in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People are always calling into question the effectiveness of various activities on the overall health level. Although some people argue that reaching this goal can be possible just by expanding sports infrastructures, others, including me believe there are more effective ways. Both these views will be elaborated on followed by my own take on the matter.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Evidence suggests that learning overseas languages in various age groups can reveal various results. However, some scientists claim that instilling foreign languages at primary school is highly likely to be more beneficial. Both the benefits and the drawbacks of the matter will be scrutinized followed by my personal take on the issue.

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