IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 12

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can be benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disgree.

Although youngsters usually have more leisure time than adults, they do not always invest it intelligently. Many are asking for an unpaid community service developed by teenagers in their spare moments. I completely agree with this kind of job because it could be advantageous for them as part-time employees and for society as well.

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Some people say that in all level of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that students are thought only from textbooks and do not get hands-on experience on the subjects from lower school grades till they acquire degree education. I completely agree with this opinion and believe that the pupils should be allowed to learn through practice by performing experiments on the facts thought.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Medical issues associated with heavily weighted populations are straining medical delivery worldwide. Several individuals imagine that revising educational content to include more exercise and sports-related activities would be ideal to resolve this problem. I totally agree with this statement. This position will be discussed in the essay below.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people. Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

It is arguable that the advancement of the medical care scheme undoubtedly soars the life expectancy of many. Thus, communities have to look after several older individuals. In my opinion, the closest parents will deal properly with that since it is their responsibility to care for them. Although it will press the health structure. This essay will shed light on both sides of the matter and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view

Certain individuals think that it is cruel to keep non-human species in confined spaces like a zoo whereas the other outlook points to the advantages for both human and non-human species. I tend to conform to the second view but both will be discussed in this essay.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

School education is an important part of people's lives. The content of each educational program is authorized by experts. While some individuals believe that History is part of the basic subjects, other's think that nowadays other lessons are more crucial as Science and Technology. In my opinion, historic events are as important as science and technology subjects due to the specialised role of each in society.

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Nowadays people around the world are choosing to self-medicate rather than seeing a doctor and using conventional medicine. What are the growth of self-medicate could be a serious issue all over the world.

Today, many citizens in the world often self-medicate at home instead of going to the doctor and using conventional medicine. This essay will give the cause and effect of the problem.

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In some countries, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some countries, people are calling into question stimulating offspring to be more hard-working and being more successful in their life. Although there are a number of drawbacks involved with this belief, the benefits accruing to people who are in their childhood are by no means negligible.I believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

It is believed that the environmental protectors are alarmed concerning the overwhelming increased environmental pollution on streams, ponds and the oceans. I believe that environmental contamination brings adverse effects on aquatic wildlife and human social lives. This essay will shed light on the motives and their consequences providing evidence to prove the arguments.

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The Internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that online communication channels assist communities throughout the world to remain in touch irrespective of where the person is located. However, some argue that online networks set the public aside and discourage them from creating social bonding. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that an international chain allows us not only to remain in contact with family and friends but also to build a chain and interact with a large population.

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Television dominates the free time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Currently lazy activities, like watching television take a significant part of the free time of many individuals. This tendency could decrease people’s activities and undermine socialization processes. In my perspective, persons should have the right to spend their free time as they want and if watching television enjoyed them, they might watch it and any the social opinion should not have an influence on them.

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Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, globalization is affecting every aspect of life. A coterie of the masses thinks that cooperating as a team will benefit individuals in the future while others believe that accomplishing tasks isolatedly has much better potentials. From my perspective, team-building activities surely will be good foundations for further developments.

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Many people believe that spending a lot of money on weddings is fine, while others completely disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion and examples.

Nowadays dumping huge amounts of money into wedding expenses has become a usual thing.Whereas another group of people has different perspectives on this matter.But in my point of view, it is unnecessary to spend much on marriage or even any other family functions. I will explain my stand on this further with detailed points.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

In many developed countries, the average life period of each person is significantly improving. However, the grey population can lead to various issues for individuals and society and it should be dealt with by some effective solutions.

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in some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positives or negative situation?

Nowadays, citizens are investing an enormous amount of money in buying land so that it will help their future generations. Although buying a house is much more beneficial but people like to rent a place in specific nations. I believe that it depends on many factors whether it's a positive or negative situation.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. discuss both these views and give your own.

Ups and downs are part of life and there is no constant poverty or richness, it's actually varying parameters. It is believed to be the best to face hardships like having poor work or sparse treasures. It is argued to be better to do hard work and make better the worst things. This will highlight both sides of the argument and then I will put forward my own perception of the matter.

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Some people say that the best way to imporve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others , however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, citizens are more engaged in yoga and meditation to balance their mental health as wells as to stay positive. Few people think that several other measures are needed to enhance public health rather than the increment of sports facilities. In this essay, I will look at both sides of the argument and give my opinion.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

It is believed that computers devices should be introduced in the academy using their software for lecturing. However, computer addiction could hinder teenagers' development. Personally, I advocate the first view opposing the last owing to the fact that human beings are entering the engine world which requires computers abilities in the earlier stage of their career. Although it may probably cause adverse effects. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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Today people are using the things and throwing or replacing it with latest models or latest fashion. Do the advantages of throwing away society outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, people seem to change their stuff by the newest type or recently presented fashion. In my view, the former benefit of replacing some devices is that the latest versions are much better than a previous model. The latter advantage of buying new clothes is that the new fashion style is more suitable for the present time and more corresponding to society's views.

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

No doubt, with the advancement of technology, more and more nations are getting their interest in science as well as a business rather than just craft. While profession and craftwork have become a significant part of culture worldwide, I assume, that there are numerous reasons why the public is losing their involvement, still there are some measures that can be used to motivate society toward the craft.

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