IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 39

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Even more people are interested in wearing fashionable clothes nowadays. Do you think it is a positive or a negative trend?

Looking fit a modern world, we could find, that majority of people want to wear fashionable clothes. That fact has two sides, and the upcoming essay will discuss both of them before my final verdict.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In today's life, A person who has a social status based on what he owns is in a high degree of social acceptance. Our old values, such as honour or trust, have been replaced with materialistic values. Unfortunately, I agree with this notion and explain it in my essay.

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some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the last few decades, there has been a tremendous change in the shopping trends among people. Due to the popularity of online shopping, most people prefer to buy food items through shopping websites compared to few others who prefer supermarkets. This essay will discuss both these views along with my opinion.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. Do or texting do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music is one of the ancient forms of art and it is considered to bring people together from different parts of the world as well as different age groups. Likewise, I strongly agree with this opinion.This essay shall discuss the reasons for my agreement.

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To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. Do you agree or disagree?

Art can make any boring place extremely entertaining. Over the last decade, there has been a tremendous decline in the unique piece of art, and as such, ordinary works are considered great artworks. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement, as nowadays artists are not getting the much-needed attention for their effort.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at that they find most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A set of individuals opine that young adults ought to focus on the entire curriculum of the school,whereas,others believe that teenagers should concentrate only on the subject on which they are more interested .The aim of this essay is to outline both sides and convey my opinion.

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In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's modern world, people spend more time in the digitalized world with the advancement in technology. Therefore publishing organizations have shifted their work area from traditional paper-based to cyberspace areas. It not only reduces their production cost but also increases in readers rate. Hence, I do strongly support the idea that paper-based books or journals will be replaced by online sites in the near future.

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Some people think that children should start school sooner while others believe that they should not start it before the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is undeniable that youngsters need to focus on studies for their excellent future to live a standardised lifestyle. Several people opine that juveniles should begin with schooling at an initial period of age; however, numerous believe that young ones ought to attend school after turning seven. Both aspects have their perspective, and the upcoming essay will discuss both views before my final verdict.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In this day and age, in a wide number of nations, more and more people are revealing the desire to trace the origin of their current house or building. There are numerous motives for their action and several ways to achieve this, which will be illustrated in this essay.

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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today world our job is one of the most important aspects of our lives. When it comes to choosing a career some people believe that we should pursue what we desire most, but others say that the amount of money we get is more crucial for life. While I understand why income is so important, but I think enjoying a career is more essential.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

Over the recent years, solar energy as a source of power in homes is gaining popularity worldwide. A number of people are switching to solar panels for electricity because of the positive impacts on them and on the environment. In this essay, I will first be discussing the benefits of using these, then identify the drawbacks before arriving at a conclusion.

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It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that a child's development is affected by surrounding factors like Journalism, western culture and peers; diametrically opposed to this, others opine that in the upbringing of a toddler, family plays an indispensable role to pass cultural values. Although both sides have an equally compelling argument, I am personally inclined towards the second notion.

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Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and books from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or negative development?

With the development of the internet, people’s lives have been changed drastically. Now with a single click a person can download patent music or books without paying any fees. I believe, although this advancement could be considered as a positive evolution, there are some drawbacks as well.

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It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is generally argued by some that external factors have several significant impacts on a child’s development; diametrically opposed to this, others propound the idea that the dedicated upbringing of parents plays an important role in children progression. Although both sides may advance equally compelling arguments in support of themselves, I personally incline towards the latter for the rationale that follows.

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Companies that have a long average working time are more economically successful than those companies that do not have a long working time. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often said that corporations prolong the average working time, which would seem to be more successful than those that do not have the same. Personally, I strongly disagree with this statement, I believe that this adverse trend has huge impacts on both companies efficiency and personal life of staff.

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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

At present，computers and other kinds of technological devices are developing quickly and they also can be used in educational services. In my opinion, human teachers will never be completely replaced by technical advancements. This essay will illustrate some reasons to support this statement and explain it with some relevant examples.

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Some people are afraid to leave the house because of crime. Some believe that more can be done to prevent crimes, while others think there is little that can be done. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to have more strategies to improve security conditions or not. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then explain why I believe the arguments to keep finding ways to prevent crimes are stronger.

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Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore receive funding from government in order for them to continue with their work. To what extent do you agree?

The occupation of an artist is to practise or perform any of the creative arts, using the conscious use of skill and creative imagination. Despite being expressive through their talents, artists are not well-paid. Should there be any financial assistance from the governments? I am of the opinion that regulators ought to act as enablers rather than directly funding craftsmen to pursue their careers.

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Some psychologists think that the best way to overcome stress of everyday life is to spend a portion of the day doing absolutely nothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Who does not want time to relax and chill out? US famous article stated that the best method to relieve daily stresses is to have a break time to relax and do nothing. Although calm and relaxation have a positive impact to overcome stresses, I believe that there are other ways to relieve them.

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Some people believe that without ethics human civilization cannot thrive. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

A set of people believe that the human race cannot continue without moral values.I totally agree with this opinion.The current essay would elaborate on my opinion.

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