IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 38

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries . Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

With the surge in crime rate among teenagers, many countries are concerned about it. There are multiple rationales behind it and the following expository paragraphs will expatiate the possible solutions with lucid examples.

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Dieting can play major role for keep healthy life .Do you agree or disagree.

In recent years, most people begin to consider eat well and maintain the nutritions they consume on a daily basis. A number of the general public claim that a healthier lifestyle can be attained by implementing diet programs. In my view, I personally agree with this strategy as good meals management might benefit society for the following reasons.

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The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that in order to shrink the number of vehicles in the central areas of a country, it is required to lessen the purposes for which the public come on to the main road with their motorcycles. I am in total favour of the given opinion .The aim of this essay is to elaborate on my opinion.

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Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

With the advancement in technology, the trend of online shopping has increased dramatically over years, and now consumers can buy almost everything on the internet. This essay will include both its merits and demerits; however, from my perspective, the advantages of online shopping are significantly greater than its disadvantages.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be usefull in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are two different viewpoints regarding the courses to be learnt by the undergraduates at the university.A set of individuals believe students should be given independence to select their subjects,whereas ,others suppose that pupils should concentrate on the channels that are useful to them in the upcoming years.The aim of this essay is to outline both views and convey my opinion.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can a lack of sleep cause? What can be done about the lack of sleep?

In the past few years, there have been more and more people with insomnia, which is a problem where an individual finds it difficult to fall asleep. There are many reasons why the problem persists. This essay will delve into the reason why a few people suffer from insomnia as well as the solutions to remedy the situation.

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Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in arts?

Every nation across the world is considering art as a crucial part of its culture. While the majority of people are keen on concentrating on other streams like science, technology and business: very few are focusing on arts, which is a rising concern. In this essay, I will discuss the important reason behind this and suggest the possible solution to increase interest in art careers.

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Human activities have negative effects on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, the natural resources have been over-exploited by humans causes climate changes considerably. It is argued that people are unable to alter this status while some scientists have given many detailed actions for governments, companies, communities to recover the living environment. In my opinion, I do agree that there are still emergency solutions in order to save Earth.

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Some people think that children should start school sooner while others believe that they should not start it before the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Nowadays, more parents want their children to have education earlier before they are aged seven. Children can acquire the knowledge of communication skills and experience of real-life in school. However, others reject sending their child to receive early education. In my opinion, I prefer delay of schooling if possible.

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Prevention is better than cure. Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Every country pays prudent attention to scientific research and the cure of diseases. Many experts opine that a major proportion should be invested in the prevention of diseases. Personally, I am not in favour of the aforementioned notion and the following expository essay will expatiate my stance with lucid examples

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Even more people are interested in wearing fashionable clothes nowadays. Do you think it is a positive or a negative trend?

Looking fit a modern world, we could find, that majority of people want to wear fashionable clothes. That fact has two sides, and the upcoming essay will discuss both of them before my final verdict.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In today's life, A person who has a social status based on what he owns is in a high degree of social acceptance. Our old values, such as honour or trust, have been replaced with materialistic values. Unfortunately, I agree with this notion and explain it in my essay.

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some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Over the last few decades, there has been a tremendous change in the shopping trends among people. Due to the popularity of online shopping, most people prefer to buy food items through shopping websites compared to few others who prefer supermarkets. This essay will discuss both these views along with my opinion.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. Do or texting do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music is one of the ancient forms of art and it is considered to bring people together from different parts of the world as well as different age groups. Likewise, I strongly agree with this opinion.This essay shall discuss the reasons for my agreement.

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To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. Do you agree or disagree?

Art can make any boring place extremely entertaining. Over the last decade, there has been a tremendous decline in the unique piece of art, and as such, ordinary works are considered great artworks. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement, as nowadays artists are not getting the much-needed attention for their effort.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at that they find most interest. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A set of individuals opine that young adults ought to focus on the entire curriculum of the school,whereas,others believe that teenagers should concentrate only on the subject on which they are more interested .The aim of this essay is to outline both sides and convey my opinion.

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In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's modern world, people spend more time in the digitalized world with the advancement in technology. Therefore publishing organizations have shifted their work area from traditional paper-based to cyberspace areas. It not only reduces their production cost but also increases in readers rate. Hence, I do strongly support the idea that paper-based books or journals will be replaced by online sites in the near future.

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Some people think that children should start school sooner while others believe that they should not start it before the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is undeniable that youngsters need to focus on studies for their excellent future to live a standardised lifestyle. Several people opine that juveniles should begin with schooling at an initial period of age; however, numerous believe that young ones ought to attend school after turning seven. Both aspects have their perspective, and the upcoming essay will discuss both views before my final verdict.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In this day and age, in a wide number of nations, more and more people are revealing the desire to trace the origin of their current house or building. There are numerous motives for their action and several ways to achieve this, which will be illustrated in this essay.

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Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today world our job is one of the most important aspects of our lives. When it comes to choosing a career some people believe that we should pursue what we desire most, but others say that the amount of money we get is more crucial for life. While I understand why income is so important, but I think enjoying a career is more essential.

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