IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 41

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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The government should pay the cost of the course to everyone who wants to study at the university. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Getting an education is one of life’s important milestones. It is the responsibility of the government to pay the course fee for those who are looking to study at the university. While I agree that it provides an opportunity to all the people, I also believe that individual contribution is essential.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

It is often thought that the regime is spending a lot of wealth on the artwork. However, some are of the opinion that they should use the money for more important things. In my point of view, I totally agree with this and believe that they should use the money on more necessary subjects.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A controversy exists between the role that physical ability or intelligence contributes to a successful sporting career. This essay will discuss both viewpoints. However, I am of the opinion that mental strength is germane to achieving success in an athletic event

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Immigration has a huge impact on the society. What are the main causes of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

Due to globalization, travelling to other countries has really become easy.Population's migration towards foreign lands has a huge influence on both communities.This essay would outline the reasons behind the immigration scenario and its outcomes.

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Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns as it increases the crime and violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

As gun violence has been increasing in society for the last few decades, it is often argued that revolver ownership should not be allowed to common people. I support this view to a large extent since this may prevent getting rifles into the wrong hands. This essay will support my views and give a proper conclusion at the end.

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Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer

A group of individuals opine that females are needed to be given equal job opportunities same as males, in fields like military, navy and air force.Although I agree with this opinion, I also think that some of the departments in these fields are not suitable for ladies.The reasons will be illustrated in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that it is important to spend money on family celebrations such as weddings and birthdays, while others think this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to have events to celebrate relatives birthdays and weddings or not. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then explain why I believe the arguments to celebrate are stronger.

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Many countries face the problem of low voter turnout in their democratic elections. What are the problems associated with it and suggest solutions?

Voting is the civil right of all the citizens of the nation through which they can elect a deserving ruling party. However,Low voter turnout is a common problem worldwide in democratic elections because of apathy in politics and mistrust in the government.This essay shall throw light on the issues associated with a decrease in voting and possible remedies to solve them.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A set of public stick to a single office throughout their careers ,whereas, others believe that it is beneficial to switch to various companies while working.I am more inclined towards the latter view.This essay would outline both arguments and explain the reasons for my opinion.

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Tabloids and current events program is the mains source of information but nowadays there is a rapid decrease of numbers on readers and viewers. The young generation is no longer interested in reading journals or watching news programs on television. Thus, in this essay, I will illustrate the many reasons behind this behaviour and recommendations to fix this problem.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Nowadays, it is often argued that giving a lot of important information to each other has beneficial effects on the academic field, while the others think that evidence and statements have to keep in private because it is too precious and too valuable. This essay will examine whether those should be shared freely or not.

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Convinience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and preparatory methods.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Will traditional foods be replaced by convenience foods? This is the most arguable issue in today's era. Some are of the opinion that since processed eatables are quickly prepared and time-saving hence, will become more common and later be a substitute for traditional cooking. However, I am of the opinion that ethnic cuisines will never be set back as they are the most healthier delicacies made at home with experience. This essay shall discuss why the ancient dishes will never be replaceable further in detail.

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Some are of the opinion that people are naturally born as good leaders while others feel that leadership skills can be learned. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that good leadership skills are inborn while others say that it is what anyone can master. In my opinion, although natural talent can give individuals certain advantages, everyone can become great leaders by learning.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

In this contemporary era, It is irrefutable that most people like cleanliness at their home and workplace. As mentioned in the statement, this is very important to keep your home and workplace clean and well-organized. I believe cleaning is the most essential thing in our life that we can try to maintain everywhere. I will discuss my opinion in the below paragraphs with an example.

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Some people think that children should start school at the age of six or seven while others think that children should start school as young as possible. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that youngsters need to focus on studies for their excellent future to live a standardised lifestyle. Several people opine that juveniles should begin with schooling at an early life; however, numerous believe that young ones ought to attend institute at the age of seven. Both aspects have their perspective, and the upcoming essay will discuss both views before my final verdict.

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Many people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether elderly people should not work anymore or not. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then give my own perspective on the matter.

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Some people think that television has made people’s life more interesting and beautiful. Do you agree or disagree?

In today's world of advancements, surviving can be a daunting task for a person overwhelmed by the pressures of family duties and needs any entertainment resource to rejuvenate his mind. While it is important to be entertained with a TV set, it is essential to focus on other activities, especially for young children. In the following article, I have discussed the idea with the help of examples.

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These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Undoubtedly, in today's fast-paced era, the trend of immigration has been skyrocketed. The majority of young adults leave their birth country while being matured. This phenomenon has its own boons as well as pitfalls. Notwithstanding, following disquisition delves into both outlooks, and subsequently explores why drawbacks supersede the benefits.

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In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Unfortunately, there is a massive discrepancy among progenitors and their infants in few nations nowadays, which is a practical matter of content, with numerous pros and cons associated from various perspectives. The upcoming article discusses both benefits and drawbacks; previously, I formulate my final verdict.

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When employers choose the best person for a job they should consider personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Getting a job opportunity in the current competitive world is a challenging task. It is believed that when choosing the right candidate, instead of considering the experience and the education, the employer should focus on personal qualities. I disagree with this statement for two reasons. One is why the qualification is important, and the other one is how experience plays a vital role during employment.

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