IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 40

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Young people say that travelling to different countries benefits them and the society. Do you agree or disagree. Give your opinion.

Most youth contends that foreign tours are extremely beneficial for the public and community. There are certain pros and cons of this phenomenon and I will discuss them in the next few paragraphs. But I believe that the positives of tourism are far more than the negatives.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion

It is an often debated topic regarding the method to teach children. Some people argue that learning at home is best for them, while others contend that school education benefits toddlers. This essay will elucidate on both the views along with my opinion.

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Nowadays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to make families closer?

It is obviously clear that relatives are becoming unfamiliar to people who are staying in one house during these days like they were familiar before. In this essay, I will analyse the reason behind this trend and suggest possible ways to make families inseparable.

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at the primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

A few individuals assert that performing arts are to be given equal importance with remaining subjects like science and maths necessarily at the elementary sections.I support the given point due to the fact that think these creative subjects helps in increasing the inventive capacity in the pupils.The following paragraphs will elaborate on my opinion.

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Some school leavers tend to go for travelling or work for a period of time before directly going to university. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages?

It is undeniable that many people, especially students, nurture to have a gap before enrolling in college after finishing their schooling. During this break, learners like to wander around in a tourist spot or engage in extracurricular activities like personality enrichment classes. The forthcoming article will discuss both merits and as well as demerits before I make my final verdict.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

A set of persons like to live their life doing routine tasks without any change,whereas, others opine that doing a variety of things is all the times better.Both viewpoints as well as my opinion will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some school leavers tend to go for travelling or work for a period of time before directly going to university. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages?

It is undeniable that many people, especially students, tend to have a gap before enrolling in college after finishing their schooling. During this gap, learners like to wander around in a tourist spot or engage in extracurricular activities like personality enrichment classes. The forthcoming article will discuss both merits and as well as demerits before I make my final verdict.

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Some people think that all the lawbreakers should be taken into the prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives. (for example, doing some work or learning some skills in the community). Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to a set of individuals , persons who do not obey the rules laid by the constitution should be sent to the police station ,whereas, others opine that instead of arresting them,there are some other ways to teach them the norms like allowing community work etc.,The following paragraphs will outline both the viewpoints and place my opinion.

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Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Do you agree or disagree?

Parents have a significant role in their children's progress, especially when they are in school age. Some help students with their homework while others don’t. I have mixed opinion about this issue and will discuss in this essay.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operative rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give yours own opinion.

Few individuals contend that students must develop competitive attitudes to excel in their future endeavours. Whereas opponents advocate that they should learn co-operation rather than a skill to defeat their counterparts. I will shed light on both viewpoints and I am in the favour of health competitions.

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The prevention of health problems and health illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree.

There are a plethora of health issues these days, avoidance of this is vital rather than curing with a remedy or therapy. Government must disburse the finances toward it. I strongly agree with this statement and will elaborate on my views on this in the following essay.

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Some believe that people will purchase a product based on their needs and advertising is not needed.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Marketing and advertising have always been an integral part of the sales process. While many argue that advertisement serves no real purpose as necessity motivates all purchases, others are of the opinion that advertising has an impact on sales. I agree with the latter view as advertisements offer many other benefits to the manufacturers.

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Nowadays, some workplaces tend to employ equal numbers of men and women workers. Do you think it is positive or negative development?

Today, an equal number of men and employed by some of the multinational companies across the globe.In my opinion, I think it is advantageous progress particularly to provide employment opportunities to females and treating them as equal as men while it has negligible disadvantages.

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The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

There comes an argument that the finest way to resolve the issues related to the environment on this planet is to upraise the price of power generating materials.Even though I see a point in it , I cannot totally agree with it for the reasons listed below.

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Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, the most important aspect of life is to survive and being financially independent. While this is true in every sense, hence, people should be trained at the initial stages of career. I am of the strong opinion that students should be taught the basics of financial planning so that they can face money specific challenges in the real world.

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Advertisements are influencing us in a negative way; to what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument that product promotions are creating a bad impact on the population .Even though I see a point in it, I cannot totally agree with it.I will elaborate on my opinion in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Food choices are been changing dramatically these days. The majority of the population in few countries are consuming more junk items which are consequently leading to health issues. Hence, the government should be imposing heavy taxes on unhealthy foodstuff. I completely agree with this idea and will be elaborating my view on this further in this essay in an exemplary manner.

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A gift (such as a camera, a soccer, or an animal ) can contribute to a child's development. what gift would you give to help a child develop? why? use reasons and specific examples to support your choices.

It is certainly true that presenting beneficial gifts builds the ability of young people’s achievements. Even though these benefits allow them to lead a wonderful life rather than educational qualifications. If I receive an opportunity to grant something in order to, I would prefer something similar to a valuable one. It will boost their activity and creative mindset. Furthermore, this essay is going to show the related ideas that agree with this statement.

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Some people believe that children at secondary school should be streamed, i.e. taught in classes according to ability, rather than being taught in mixed-ability classes. Do you think the advantages of streaming children a

Whether streaming is good or bad for senior school children has different opinions since there is no chance of mixing of different levels of students. However, I personally think that this system exceeded more benefits than mere drawbacks.

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As housing is a basic need for people, government should provide free housing for everyone who cannot afford it.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that every country should have their own plans to uplift the standard of the poor. There are some advocates who think that helping needy families by giving free houses is a solution.In my opinion, I completely agree with this standpoint because this improves both individuals and society as a whole.

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