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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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In a public-funded health care system people who are willing to pay for the best and fastest treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Health care is one of the vital sectors of any country. The government health care system is public aided by the tax they pay to the government, however, it does not mean that any random person can pay huge fees in order to gain access to early and reliable treatment. I completely disagree with his thought and will be elaborating my opinion further in this essay in an exemplary manner.

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Stress-related sicknesses are constantly increasing. Do you agree? Discuss possible solutions.

Undoubtedly, complete physical and mental wellbeing has been the aim of every individual. However, research has shown, that stress-related illnesses have been on the high side more so, very common in society. The following paragraph will delve deep into causes and possible solutions to this phenomenon.

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Write about the following topic: Some people think that cooking is an important skill for young people to learn. Others believe that it is better for people to learn how to cook after they become adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Cooking is an essential skill everyone needs to have. The argument over start to learn cooking in childhood days as opposed to after the school years has not been settled yet. I think it is always better to learn cooking at the early stage itself. First of all, we live in a fast-moving world. Nowadays, people in the world often find it so challenging to allocate time for making food. Therefore, they tend to lean towards fast-food items, which lead them towards diseases and fatigue. Children should have a healthy diet every day. If we do not find time to furnish it up, we may teach our little ones how to do; so that we could intake healthy dishes if we are not cooking that day. I have taught my daughter how to prepare food in my absence or if I am sick.

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Some people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Participating the elder people the work-life is always argued. Some do not support this situation, while others agree and consider that this can be permitted relating to their choice. This essay will discuss both these points of view.

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Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is thought by some that acquiring tertiary education helps in securing of job, while others think experience and soft skills are imperative. In my opinion, a university degree is indispensable in professions, such as Medical and Science, however experience and soft skills matter more than the degree in the field of business.

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Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycle is better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There are different views that people hold as regards means for travelling, some are of the opinion that vehicles are the best way to travel, while others believe the bicycle is a better option. In this ,write-up i will expatiate on both views, but i strongly believe van are the most preferred way to travel.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that in today’s world subjects like Science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Primary education has always played a major role in building the foundation of knowledge. Students study various subjects to enhance their understanding of different areas of life. past is one of them, which provides us with knowledge about our past. Some people believe that past must be taught in primary schools, whereas, other think that priority should be given to the subjects like Science and Technology. I will discuss both views in my essay.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that many food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, so in the long-term, people would have many adverse health issues. I disagree with this statement because although sugary products are bad for people who consume them, they are still cheaper than healthy food, which some people cannot purchase. Therefore, the price of sugary products should be increased to discourage people from buying them.

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students at school and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources( such as internet and television). to what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, students have ample ways to learn their study subjects such as from the lectures, internet and television. Some critics point out that new advance technological sources are more reliable than traditional ways of learning. However, I believe that still teaching in the classroom is the most effective method of learning for pupils.

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Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into the society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. do you agree or disagree?

Compared to the past, more and more people are migrating to new places. Yet, there is constant disagreement among individuals whether to accept new norms and customs to live in an adopted country. In my opinion, I do agree to learn new laws and rules but in terms of ,customs we should not leave our traditional values.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that History is one of the most important school subjects. However, some others believe that in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. In my opinion, each view has its own merits in that case we have to separate into two halves to discuss these statements.

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Some people believe that children at secondary school should be streamed, i.e. taught in classes according to ability, rather than being taught in mixed-ability classes. Do you think the advantages of streaming children outweigh disadvantages

Whether streaming is good or bad for senior school children has different opinions since there is no chance of mixing of different level of students. However, I personally think that this system exceeded more benefits than mere drawbacks.

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Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Human intervention has affected the environment on large basis. However, some parts of society opine that major steps should be taken to protect nature by the present generation and that can largely benefit the younger generation. I entirely support this position as it is the duty of the people to save the environment before it gets extinct.

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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

Women are a very important component of any society, playing multiple roles ranging from homemakers to business executives. They have proved their abilities in all the fields they entered. Organizations that encourage female staff to work equally as males are respected everywhere in the world. Although allocating a quota to the female workforce is still not the best idea as anyone competent applying for a position, senior or junior should be given an equal chance to prove themself. In my opinion fixing a number to the employee ratio is not very suitable as this would restrict the HR staff from hiring the best talent for any firm.

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Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural area find it is difficult to access the university education. Universities should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that being enrolled in higher education is rather difficult for students from suburban areas. While I do agree that universities and governments should provide these students with necessary financial supports or subsidies, I do not think that other requirements for the enrollment of the university, such as academic requirements, should be made different according to students' background.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Governments have numerous duties to provide requirements for getting better citizen's life in every field from art to technology or financial investments. Although, some citizens defend that public services have priority, the country's development is also dependent on cultural expenses. Country's open their culture to the world with their artists and sports person because they have no language. Therefore, I definitely don't find it over expense to investing money for art.

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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree?

Community service is the best punishment for people who commit certain crimes. While some individuals argue that they should be kept in the jail. This essay will give arguments in favour of the alternative sentence and provide a logical conclusion.

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With deforestation, urban development, and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat, and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

There is a common belief that many animals face serious dreads relating to losing their habitat and more importantly, becoming extinct due to cut down trees, sprawled cities and unlawfully shot animals. I certainly think that it is essential to preserve all kinds of animals (wild and domestic) and some urgent measures should be implemented in this regard.

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Some people say that traveling abroad is necessary to get knowledge about other countries, while others suggest that TV and the internet can also help people know about foreign countries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this contemporary era, gathering knowledge about the world is not only possible through travelling but also from the broadcasting media and the internet. Resultantly, whereas some individuals claim that it is now possible to know about all countries around the world by watching TV programmes, others contend that visiting abroad is paramount in order to deepen the knowledge. I, too, wholeheartedly feel that without having any practical experience, it is next to impossible to acquire solid ideas about other nations.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many languages go into extinction on an annual basis. While many would argue, and I completely disagree, that it is not essential as life will be better with fewer dailects across the globe. This essay will explain further.

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