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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 7.5

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IMPROVEMENTS IN HEALTH, EDUCATION AND TRADE ARE ESSENTIAL FOR THE DEVELOPMENT OF POORER NATIONS. HOWEVER,THE GOVERNMENTS OF RICHER NATIONS SHOULD TAKE MORE RESPONSIBILITY FOR HELPING THE POORER NATIONS IN SUCH AREAS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

It is true that in modern society some developing countries are struggling to improve the basic rights of the citizens such as healthcare, education, and etc. The assistance of developed countries in improving live conditions would dramatically help societies in many ways. In this essay, I will discuss why richer nations should support the development of poorer nations.

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Modern technology has made it possible for people to view exhibitions at home, so museums and art galleries will disappear soon. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technological advancements have made so many impossible things to become possible including the remote monitoring of cultural exhibitions at times. This phenomenon is eventually leading to the closure of museums and galleries. I completely disagree with this view as they represent the culture and heritage of a country and also the physical visit has its own benefits. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons with necessary examples.

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Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is very prominent that issues and less important news are being highlighted by electronic and print media in daily bulletin ignoring the development and other good things which are useful to the public. Though many people watched the bad news some argue that it is not a healthy sign to viewers and communities. I also agree that the media should publish good things than negative news and will furnish my supporting views in this essay.

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Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

Few individuals contend that the incomes of sports and showbiz celebrities are far more than other professionals. I completely agree with above the statement but this is a negative development. Teachers and the worker of essential services must have maximum wages in order to bring prosperity to society.

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Some people think that children should be involved in any kind of sport while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Although some people believe that participating in sports activities is not necessary for children, it is considered that the young generation ought to do any physical exercises. In my opinion, some appropriate kinds of sport are essential to the children's harmonious physical and mental development.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Not all human think in a parallel way, everyone is different in their own way. This same theory applies in the field of education but, there are two schools of thought. That is, some believe that students should be only focussed on futuristic subjects science and tech in order to attain the best scope while, others think that students can decide the subject they are interested in. In this ,essay we will discuss both of these topics and will share our opinion on the latter.

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Learning about the past has no value to those of us living in the present.Do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

History has always been a fundamental part of our existence, therefore the study of the human race would definitely be incomplete without it. While some believe learning about the past is not necessary for those living in the present, I do not agree with this and this essay would further discuss reasons why it is essential for people to know about the past.

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It is not necessary to go to a place to know about the place because we can see the places from book, TV and internet. Do you agree or disagree?

Travelling to different regions is no longer mandatory to get to know other culture varieties, though we can get knowledge about such cultures from books, TV Shows and the internet. However, now, people have the tool as internet, which has various websites and satellites. I think these two approaches are equally interesting.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

It is debatable whether or not expanding the number of facilities involved in sport is beneficial to community health. From my perspective, I would argue that there are several detrimental impacts from these. Although it is thought by some that increasing sports facilities will bring some advantageous effects on resident's health.

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Television news contain more bad news nowadays. Some people say it is a negative development. Do you agree?

Every day, more devasting reports are being televised for the general public to see. Many are of the opinion that this is not a positive development; while others believe that it is in fact, a good thing. I completely agree with the former; however, I will explain why I believe some are of the opinion that this is good.

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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. what factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? would it be better if more good news was reported ?

In media, channel editors make decisions as to what kind of news needs to be telecast and need to be printed in newspapers. Considering the television rating points and current social incidents affect the decisions of what story to be posted. In my perspective, people used to hear negative news and it would be better for society if good news is reported too.

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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, it is argued that the high sales of popular consumer goods are due to the power of advertising and do not represent the real demand of people in society. However, in my opinion, the sales growth is dependent on advertising and also on consumer demand.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is true that people prefer owning a property to renting one in some parts of the world. There are a variety of possible reasons, and it can be explained from two aspects.

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Some people think that hard work helps in achieving financial success, while others think it is not the only thing which contributes to financial success. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Despite the fact that it has been argued that success in finance is achieved by hard work, other people consider that working hard is not the only criterion leading to financial success. I completely agree with the latter idea as apart from hard performance, other elements such as luck and investment skills should also be taken into account.

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Some people believe that mobile phone conversations should be banned in crowded and social places. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued by many people that in public places the use of cell phone should be prohibited while others reject it. In my opinion, electronic gadgets should not be abolished in all crowded regions but should be restricted in some areas because the use of mobile phones may lead to dangerous consequences.

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It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

the issue of whether public money should be used for promoting the style of human’s health has been raising a lot of debates. Some might say that it is important to invest this moneymoney to take care of people's health in order to prevent illness because if too many humans ill, the chance of curing the disease will be low because the doctor can not afford it On the contrary, others insist on the opinion that government should spend it on a strategy to cure citizens who are already ill. Viewing from a general perspective, I personally agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreighn language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many immigrants claim that there are lots of issues socially and practically, which they need to deal with on a daily basis when they live overseas where a foreign language is used as an official language. I totally agree with this statement, and in this essay I will discuss the reasons in more detail.

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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In the modern world, safety is one of the main constraints for adolescents. It is widely noted that some parts of America imposed curfews, where they should not be outdoors unless without an adult. In my opinion, I disagree with this point as, during this particular age, they are bound to be free.

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The best way to help underachieving pupils is to have compulsory after school activities which they must attend. This way they will become more involved in school and their grades will improve. To what extent do you agree?

Extracurricular exercises are the best way to help lagging students and improve their grades. They must attend it because they will become more involved in education and their grades will improve.

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Many countries thought that children have to do homework in their free time while other say children should do more outdoor activity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

So many nations throughout the world are in an opinion that kids have to finish their homework in their leisure hours. Some other countries believe that they need to spend their free time doing outdoor activities. I strongly disagree with the statement that the children need to spare their free time for studying. Studying after school hours will give mental stress to children and playing will enable children to stay fit both mentally and physically.

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