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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are more than ten thousand different linguists around the world. I believe that the world may be benefitted with less languages, while I agree that they represent heritage of a nation should be preserved.
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Some people feel that entertainers (eg film stars, pop muscians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of jobs should be paid highly ?

Throughout the history, craftsmen (artists or musician) in the entertainment industry have had a significant place and prominence. As a result, these people were paid high wages. While some believe that there are other
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All people should go to university, even if they are not going to use that education In their job. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s modern world, education always been an important element in every individual people’s lives in all corners of the world to achieve success In their careers whether the occupation related to degree that a perso
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In many societies, elderly people often live in retirement homes. This is not appropriate because families should always care for their ageing members. Do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

With the advent of advanced technologies, social liberation and fast paced life, family structures have considerably changed in order to adopt to environment they live in. One of the common family patterns which have eme
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Some people say that technologies such as mobile phones are disrupting social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?

All around the world, technology has advanced significantly. Due to technologies such as mobile phones, some believe they are having a negative impact on humans and social interacting. I agree with this statement and wil
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Animals are in danger of extinctions. Some people say we should protect only those animal which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree ?

Many animals are indeed threatened by the risk of extinction. Some hold a belief that humans only need to safeguard certain species that benefit us. I personally disagree with this point of view because I believe that ma
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Some people believe that to give opportunities to the new generation companies should encourage employees who are older to retire. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that giving a job opportunity, to young peoples' organizations should motivate their older staffs to retire early. I disagree with this argument because aged staff members have considerable knowledge an
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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, the question of whether life will become more straightforward when some languages disappear or not has been receiving a great deal of attention. While several commentators argue that the world can more easily i
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People’s lives are now surrounded by advertisement. This affects what people consider important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this era of unprecedented technology, there are plenty of advertisements in the surround of our lives. Slimming products, lavish products, and makeup products, to name but just a few. Some individuals may claim that p
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Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?

It is widely believed that nowadays, higher positions are prevalently conducted by senior people in many corporations. While some argue that young individuals would demonstrate better leadership. In my opinion, senior ma
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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In recent years, many people argued that memorial houses and art museums can be observed online; therefore, the necessary of museums and art galleries are denied. From my point of view, I totally disagree with this opini
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‘Prisons are an expensive way of making bad people worse’ To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are several generally accepted beliefs about prison. Firstly, that prison is a social defence against anti-social people. In short, it keeps us safe. Secondly that prison punishes wrongdoers through their loss of f
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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to get a satisfying in their career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

in this globalized aeon, without any qualms it is accepted that job is essential part to provide satification in career life, sothat a section of society coincide that people whobacome employee in the early age aquire sa
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Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it would cause problems for younger. Do you agree or disagree? I

I totally agree that this might be a big problem for the younger ones, i would explain with two different reasons.
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The subjects that children are taught in schools are decided by central authorities. Some people say that teachers, not politicians, should be responsible for this task. To what extent you agree or disagree with this

In recent years, education system is becoming a concern in the society. Although some people argue that teacher should be responsible for designing the curriculum, others think that it is better for the central authoriti
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Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument that nowadays, the lifespan of humans lasts longer if being compared to the past, therefore the retirement age should be higher than it used to be. Personally, I totally agree with this statement bec
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Nowadays children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some people think that these activities are not good for a child's mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many parents try to reduce their children's addiction to TV and video games. They claim that these entertainments could harm the mental health of the children. Although I agree that watching TV and playing video games ar
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Some people think that books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that books are worthlessness source of information and entertainment. I am partially agree with this statement because books are still main source of information, and entertainment for older people and losin
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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Good handwriting of pupils is one of the essential skills for their academic success. The dominance of technology has changed many people's views on teaching students the art of writing. But I personally disagree that mo
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It is more important to spend public money promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree of disagree?

Of course it goes without saying that prevention is better than cure. That is why, in recent years, there has been a growing body of opinion in favour of putting more resources into promoting a healthy lifestyle. I agree
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