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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There are people stating that the number of sport facilities should be increased in order to improve public health, while others believe in more affection from alternative measures.
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In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In my opinion, a teenager has their own rights, but I agree if “curfew is impos” because nowadays there is a lot of crime everywhere. The parents also protect their children from crime. Curfew in impos its important not to get carried away in a negative direction. Curfew, emphasizes that teenager in the family, if they still have outside activities, must be able to provide information or someone is responsible for these activities. Beside that, there are many kidnappings that happen when you are still outside the house at night. The example is my experience. In my family, curfew is impos, because I'm a girl and can't come home too late. In my family there is a time limit, namely at 10 o'clock you have to be home, because in my city at 10 o'clock and above it is no longer safe, because there are robbers and other crimes.The parents allow to save the children from robbers and criminal. So I agree if “curfew in impos” because it is for the common good.
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In recent years, many small shop have closed because customer travel to large shopping malls. is this a positive or negative development.

Nowadays people prefer to buy in larger shops than in small stores, so a lot of small bussineses have been closed recently.
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The pictures show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK.

The table illustrates the amount of average family earned and paid on food and clothes in a particular city in UK,while the pie chart provide the information about the proportion of money expenses,in 2010 and 2013.
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With the coming of digital education, some people believe that traditional studies may fall down. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Modern technology has become prevalent in the past decade. It is believed that due to the popularity of the online education the traditional teaching methods will not be considered in the future of education system .This essay will discuss both the views
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The pie illustrates the proportion of Yemen and Italy citizens in three different age groups between 2000 and 2050

It is clear that the proportion of people aged 0-14 in Yemen and Italy tends to decrease. Meanwhile, the proportion of population 15-59 of Yemen increase slightly.By contrast, populations 15-59 of Italy drop significantly. In 2000,the percentage of people aged 0-14 by Yemen accounts for more than half,compared just over 14% of Italy.Only a very small percentage of people in Yemen were over 60 at 3.6%,in contrast to nearly a quarter of the Italy population.The largest group in Italy was the 15-59 year with just over 60% while Yemen had 46,3% of its population in this group. In 2050 the proportion of people aged 15-59 years old in Yemen went up significantly to 57,3%,in contrast, Italy fell sharply to 46,2%.the number of people in Italy over 60 years old increased to 42,3% higher than Yemen only 5,7%.At the same time, the number of people aged 0-14 in both Yemen and Italy decreased
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Some people say that we do not need printed newspapers anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In a decade ago, newspapers was the main way of communication. However, this has been dramaticly transmited due to the new and fast channels people begin to use. I totally agree with the notion that we do not need newspapers furthure more. Thus, the electronic one is another story.
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Some people think that in the morden world we are more dependent on each other. Others argue that people have become more independent. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people spend money on sport and cultural event. Do you think this is good or bad?

Am activity involving physical exertion and skill in which an individual or team competes against another or others for entertainment is terms as sport whiles culture is the way and life of people and cultural events are activities that brings two or more families together which educate individuals on how to culture practices are being made therefore I think when people spend more money on cultural events is good whiles sports is also a form of exercise which helps individuals to maintain good health and keep their health condition good therefore spending more money on sports it also good and helps improves the wellbeing of an individual.i will personally like to spend more money on cultural activities so I get to know how culture is been made how it came up and understand the way and act of our daily lives thereby and also culture events helps bring up families together which creates more existing relationships and bond between families and friends .Finally I believe spending money...
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Nowadays, the traditions and customs of the food we eat and the way we eat it are changing what is the way they have change and what do you think about the change.

Nowadays, the style and ways of food we eat and cook are changing. in this essay we will discuss about that how they are changing and whats my opinion about all that changes.
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In their advertising, business nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative developement?

It is a common belief that manufacturers usually focus on the new features of thier product in terms of advertising. Since advertising is one of powerful strategies to appeal consumers to buy products, I personly agree with this trend.
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The plans below show a small theater in 2010, and the same theater in 2012.

The maps represent the layout of a small theatre in 2010 and two years later. Overall , a mini theatre has used its side space by extending and adding rooms to it. In addition, they have replaced a cafe with a restaurant.
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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threanted to the point of extenction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with the problem.

The bar chart shows the percentenge of weekly income used by the family in one country in the year 1968 and 2018. Overall the highest presentege is on food in 1968 and most on leisure time in the year 2018.The others like food,fuel and power,clothing and footware and personal good show a positive state while housing,transport and leisure coming a rise and the remaing catagory stayed still. In 1968,the family sums on food takes highest about 35%,while housing,clothing and footware took on 10%,others like household and personal good ,transport and leisure are the same (about 8%).In contrast, the weekly on fuel and power income was no troulbe for them at 3%. In 2018,the family have change their lifestyle as they cut down food spending at 18% ,upgrade their housing to 19% , spend on their leisure by 22%,costing transportation up to 14%,household goods stay unchanged,Which came to a result that fuel and power,personal goods,clothing and footware have skewwerd down about 5%.
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People living in big cities face several problems. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller town?

It is believed that dwellers these days have to faced many troubles in their daily life , such as financial issue , lack of accommodation or traffic jam ..... And will be elaborate below . From my point of view , i think the government should encourage their citizen to move to smaller resional towns .
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Topic: People living in big cities face several problems. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller town?

In this day and age, huge cities have many issues affecting people's day-to-day life directly. It is believed that today's citizens have to deal with several problems in their daily life. There are some main problems which are discussed in this essay. From my perspective, authorities ought to promote residents to move to smaller regional areas.
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some people say that self-employment is better than working for a company or institution as it gives a degree of autonomy to the person and is not coercive. discuss both views. What is your opinion

In general, having a job and getting a standard salary a month is necessary for any individual. Self-employment can be risky in some industries. In my opinion, self-employment is good only when the person is capable enough to get work and is not a breadwinner for the family at the initial stage of the career. This essay will discuss both the views.
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Research recently shows an increasing number of business meetings and trainings taking place online. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowdays a lot of people work full or part time from comfort of their homes. This system was became very popular in past few years, but especially during COVID pandemic, so since it worked really well for majority of workers and companies, a lot of them decided to continue with it even after pandemic finished.
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The subjects that children are taught in schools are decided by central authorities. Some people say that teachers, not politicians, should be responsible for this task. To what extent you agree or disagree with this opinion?

These maps show the restructuring of school from 1985 to now. School population has increased by 800 students (from 1500 to 2300). This school has undergone a lot of chages since 1985.
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The chat below gives information about global sale of game software cds and DVD or video

The bar chart demonstrates the number of sales of game software DVD has changed in the world from 2000 to 2003.
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Some people think that schools should use teaching methods that encourage students to cooperate. Other people think that schools should use teaching methods that encourage students to compete.

School is a place when we learn about anything related to what kind of school it made for. When we talk about school, we are going to talk about student, teacher and its system. Moreover, the most common discussion on education issues is about how to deal with the student related to their encouragement for cooperating and their passion to compete in the class which lead to the success of class and continued to gain the purposes and reach out the goals’ school. some people agreed that school should use teaching method to encourage student to cooperate with teacher during their activities in the class. Meanwhile, some people agreed that school should use teaching method to compete. In my point of view, teaching method can be tools that make students compete and coorperete in one way. It means through teaching method we can built up students’ passion to compete in the class and more coorperete within the students especially with teacher during the activity. Providing good teaching met...
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