IELTS Writing Samples Band 2

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The development of technology have caused a phenomenon that children keep they attention at watching smartphone nonstop for many hours per day. To be honest, I can conclude that this trend have no positive side at all right in the opening and it must have a serious consideration especially from parents all around the world. To be more specify, I am going to explain to you why this problem should be remove right the way.
society is in continuos transformation. Women are part of this changing and if they used to give birth at a very young age, now they are more independent and there is less pression from the society. Therefore the average woman doesn't give birth before her 30s anymore.
the chart illustrates the persentage of three food substance in typical meals where thay maybe unhealthy if they are consumed together.overall, as we can see in the bearkfast it is the lowest percentage in all of them ,whereas dinner have the highest consumtion rates except added sugar .
The millennium is the time when the internetboom. Someone said that newspaper is official. It can prevent the fakenews while the opponents argue that social forums is more convenient. In my view, checking news on the online platforms outweight the press.
It is argued that modern communication technology iss having some disadvantage influences on relationships, especially social relationship. In my opinion, i am in argument with this view.
We are living in the salad days of the gender equity, where people call for equal opportunities to both gender. It is often expostulated that laws should be enacted that garner equal employment chance for both male and female in the business and state services. Although I agree that equal opportunities are pertinent, there are certain sectors that cannot guarentee uniform chances. In this essay we delve into the reasons for the statement.
Proverty in the underdeveloped nations has always been an humanitarian crisis. Many people believe that the most optimal way to tackle this issue is to establish trading relationship with developed countries. While I completely agree with this view, it is also crucial for the international communities to provide technological support.
The number of people who eating out at fast food reastaurants in the USA between 2003 and 2013 years. They diverged six gruops , depending on how quickly eats in the fast food cafes.
In todays world the consumption of plastic and other hazardous chemicals has drastically increased by the humans to produce goods and carry their day to day tasks which has ultimately depeleted the our living standards and has caused negative impact on environment. Causing pollution, low quality of fertile soil and global warming.
The steps involved in the production of sugar using sugar cane are illustrated in the diagram. Overall, there are 7 main steps which takes over a year through it sugar canes are harvested and crushed to make juice and after some process such as purifying, heating, centrifuging, drying and cooling on it, we can obtain sugar.
According to the lecture, altruism, a type of behavior which oppose selfishness, is not always only a matter of benevolence.
The given diagram illustrates the Human Resources application and recruitment process for a company.Overall there are 7 or 9 steps depending on whether you are invited for interview or rejected after assessment is completed. After the interviews and assessment process only successful applicant will be offered the job. Applicants and applications which are rejected will get an email about the condition.
Buildings and housings used to be the source of cultural and economical variety but in today's world, all skyscrapers look the same which results in the generation of same kind of cities.There are many reasons behind this but i completlely agree that buildings should be constructed according to the modern architecture.
Policy makers debate wether carry guns lead to mishaps. Many people believe that carying weapens is harmfull issue while anthors claim it as undengourse behave. This essay will argue both side and why I patially support this notion.
The low airlines tickets prices is a big motivation for people who love to have news experiences traveling because if the airlines companies have cheaper flights gives economic beneficts to safe money to the travelers who love meet and explore new countries, safe money having good descount to buy tickets help to the contries to active the tourist economy also beause they will receive people who will spend money visiting them countries.
The pie charts show us how people in two countries Germany and Nigeria finding out the news in a typical week. These diagrams provide different ways of getting information, though there are some similarities and differences.
To start, in my opinion about these controversial problems, I think it is connected for many reasons like the air contamination by the companies and the plastics production by the factories are the first response but companies and the governments really do not care about our planet earth, they just are interesting to many money to have good ''economy'' but the environment is a problem who affects everyone including the animal who do not have voice to communicate and those is the reason many species and animal are disappearing.
This graph highlights the information about the UK’s multimedia audiences on one day in 2018. It is clearly noticeable that the highest raise in the involved population rate was both at 11 am and at 11 pm for radio at 29% and television at 45% respectively. According to the graph, until 3 am more people used to listening to the radio then watching the the TV, and after that the TV spectators’ number’s dominance was plain. Having been fluctuated between 2 and 6 percents, an amount of people who watched the TV in the morning from 6 am to 12 am, increased sharply until reaching its’ peak at 11 pm. There was a downwarding trend in a television audience percentage from 10 pm to 6:30 am of the next day in 10 times from 40% to 4%. Regarding to a radio audience, there was a flowing decrease since its’ the only one raise at 11 am, thus gradually tending to only 3% at 4 am.
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