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You recently bought an electronic gadget for home purposes. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: -What is this gadget -What do you think about it -Give advice about other alternatives your friend can buy

I am writing this letter to provide you with an overview of the Amazon Echo 2, that I have bought last week. It falls under the portable speaker category, but with an advanced voice recognition feature and can connect with the internet. Furthermore, you can play any music simply by giving commands to Alexa.
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Some people think parents should control the behaviour of children from a very young age but others think we should give them more freedom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is common belief amongest most people that we should manage the attitude of kids while others have a different opinion that the kids should be better with liberty. I believe both control and freedom together. We will discuss both point of view.
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Please kindly help me asses this essay It is widely believed that people's ability to learn new things decreases with age and that companies should actively recruit younger employees who have great potential to learn. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The Chart given illustrates the changes in four methods of travel in Metropolis over the period from 1985 to 2010.
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We have long imagined the possibility that life exists on other planets. Do you believe that there is life in the universe outside of earth? What would be the implications of proving that alien life exists? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Some people think no life exists on other planets. It is only earth which has the life that exists. On the other ,hand many experts believe that earth is not the only planet that has life exists. Outside our world, in space, they are so many things such as planets, stars and galaxies. From my viewpoint, I believe that there is life in the universe outside of earth.
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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situations outweigh the disadvantages?

As we all know, youngsters are the future of every country and they play vital role in the development as they have more opportunities and time ahead. On the other hand, elders have more experience and they have seen the world and know things better but personally speaking, In this era, having more young people than elders in a place has more benefits than drawbacks and I will state them in my further paragraphs.
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"Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay"

It is claimed by some that learning by themselves is better whilst others reckon that having a teacher is always prefferable. In my opinion, learning alone is an efficient way of excellent understanding and provides long-term memorizing skill rather than working with teacher.
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Some young people like to copy the behavior clothes of famous people. Why might this be the case? What problems might it cause?

Ms Mae Hall CBC Health Center 125 Parra Avenue 5098 September 24, 2022 Re: Mr Peter Black, 62 years old Dear Ms Hall, Thank you for seeing Mr Peter Black who needs urgent attention. He was diagnosed with suicide attempts and needs your care. Mr Black has been addicted to gambling since 2 years ago, which resulted in debt and depression. His family cannot fathom this situation, they are angry but also exasperated regarding suicidal attempts. Consequently, Mr Black lost his friends. Currently, he has notable fatigue also no remorse seen and non-suicidal ideation. Mr Black is a retired bookkeeper in a car company. He is a chain smoker, smokes forty sticks a day and is a regular social drinker. Additionally, his wife works at Coles, and his son lives in Lyndon City. It is beneficial to book an appointment for gambling addiction therapy for his depression, in addition, please stress the importance and assist him to join the Gambling Addiction Action Group. Afterwards, advise hi...
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Large businesses have big budget for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problem does this cause? What can be done to encourage people to buy local products?

1. I think the significant changes phase which encompasses the earliest 19th till 20th century indicates the flourishment of the History of Azerbaijan with the relief of Abbasgulu agha Bakukhanov who was the prominent author of “Gulustani Iram” and others. As a matter of fact, one of his innovations seems to be the chronology of Azerbaijan history. Another possible reason was an enlightening civilization which was driven by Mirza Fatali Akhundov, Seyid Azim Shirvani, Hasanbay Zardabi, and others.
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What is the significant remark from Azerbaijan History.

1. I think significant changes phase which encompasses the earliest 19th to 20th century poses a new era for the History of Azerbaijan with the relief of Abbasgulu agha Bakukhanov who was the prominent author of “Gulustani Iram” and others. As a matter of fact, one of his innovations seems to be the chronology of Azerbaijan history. Another possible reason is an enlightening civilization which was driven by Mirza Fatali Akhundov, Seyid Azim Shirvani, Hasanbay Zardabi, and others.
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Nowadays, it is becoming more popular to see animals to be kept in captivity, for instance, the zoo Do the advantage of keeping animal in the zoo outweight the disadvantage?

Animals are very indespensible part of the environment. In modern era, keeping animals in the zoo for watching them is very common. There are many pros than cons of the zoo for the humans and animals that will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
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Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extend do you agree?

In society, scientists and experts seem to be more important than musicians and artisits. Modren society affects due to musicians and artists rather than scientists and technology experts.
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Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion?

Most of people thinks that women and men are the same rights. They are able to do any kind of job that they want. However, others assume that men and women are not the same that is why there are certain jobs that women can't do it.
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Nowadays young people watch too much violent programs and are exposed to a great deal of negative news. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

On the other hand, the community have an opinion that these programs create awareness among the people. Through this, society gets to know about numerous ways in which a wrong could have happened, along with the preventive measures in such situations. To illustrate, in Indian television a program named "Savdhaan Bharat" shows actual criminal incidence like online frauds, rapes, murders, etc. happened in past and narrate the possible circumstances or their triggering points. Also, the preventive measure that might be taken in those malicious activities around you. Hence, instead of impacting the youngsters in a negative way, these kinds of shows spread awareness among them.
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Lots of difficulties mankind will face up to in 2030. Do you agree or disagree?

With the time the technology have been advancing, but also the scientists predict humans may be face plethora of problems up to next eight years. Personally I believe , human beings will be face for host of problems up to 2030. The ensure paragraphs of this essay will discuss about reasons for this issue.
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Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Therefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Today's children are tomorrow's future . Education plays a significant role in the progress of the human race . It's very crucial to educate the children as they are the backbone of the nation. It's very sad to see that today's pupils are influenced by the new fashion trends as it distracts them from their studies. An immensely controversial phenomenon in the contemporary epoch today relates to whether pupils should pay more attention to their studies or wear fashionable clothes in school. One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people who believe that all pupils have to wear the selected uniforms. As far as I can see it's more justified to agree with the statement. In further paragraphs, I will not only shed light on both sides but also elaborate on my point of view regarding the statement.
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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.

While the economic section plays an important role in the country but we can't let economic growth if we can't develop our resources like human potential. So I totally agreed with the sentence that other types of progress are as important as the development of the economy.
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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Nowadays many individuals prefer to choose a work as a self-employed than working in general companies. I suppose that people tend to believe that developing of their own startups has more possitives than working in companies as empoyee.
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Parents are the best teachers. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people are of the opinion that most educators are most often mom and dad.This essay agrees wholeheartedly that parents are the best teachers in the world because they prioritize the moral basis and development of children.
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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why this might be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being sellf-employed?

In recent times, many people prefer to work as freelancers instead of working as employees in companies or organisations . In this , an essay I will discuss why freelancing is considered more flexible and the main drawbacks of being self-employed.
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Describe a meal that you enjoyed eating in a restaurant?

Well, I am going to talk about a meal that I enjoyed eating in a restaurant. In the meantime, I live in an apartment under proof with my friend. So we can not afford to eat in a restaurant very frequently.
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