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Some people believe that more academic subjects such as chemistry, physics and history should be taught in schools, while others believe that students will derive more benefit from studying practical subjects, such as motor mechanics and cooking.

Nearly all humans think about studying academic subjects are more important than learning language. I think both of them have advantages and disadvantages, however I choose learning science subject, although
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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that in the upcoming years, humans physical condition should worsen than the present situation. I strongly agree with this statement; the usage of junk foods and a lack of exercise would lead them to reduce their health.
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People likes to travel or work in the time between highschool and university studies. What ara the advantages and disadvantages

people likes to travel or work in the time between highschool and university studies, a lot of people likes to travel or work before university studies, so in this essay, we will know the advantages and the disadvatages to work or travel after highschool.
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Today more and more people want things instantle (eg goods, service,...) Why is it? Is it positive or negative development?

It is thought that today people tend to want their demands adapting immediately. This writer believes that it is a positive view due to it can foster the development of the society.
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universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students ni every subject. Therefore, this essay wil show some reasons of argument for and argument against.
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some people think that money is the most important factor in promoting happiness? do you think people can be happy without money? what other factors contribute towards hapiness?

Nowadays, most people imagine that money can bring happiness and it is necessary for them. People who have a good view of life can be happy without money because they have another factor to be satisfied. This essay will explain these two points of view.
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Q; Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental problems mean that humans are destroying the earth's planet by their actions. So, some citizens suggest that the efficient solutionsoulation is to raise the price of fuels for vehicles to reduce the amount of gas emissions. This essay will analyse the point of view and express my agreement or disagreement.
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It is more important to have a good family than to have friends. Family can always compensate for absence of friendship. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Good family can play a important role in the humans lives instant of friends. Famiy always take the friendship place. This essay will analyse both point of view and express my agreement or else.
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In some high schools, part of the curriculum requires students to participate in community work such as helping the elderly or disabled. In what way do children benefit from this? Do you think it should be part of the curriculum?

To begin with, some high schools insists there students to participate in community work such as helping old people and people with special needs. Infact, I have studied in a similar type of school. I would be discussing the advantages of such kind of curriculum.
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People today are more concerned with owning material possessions than with developing friendships and family relationships. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

People nowadays are more interested in owning material things than building strong relationships with friends and family. I agree with this statement because many society only focus on busy work every day without spending quality
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Some people believe that money is the major source of happiness in life. do you strongly agree or disagree?

Many people trust that money is the most source of joy in life. I strongly agree with this statement because almost everything in life need money and without money we not be able to fulfill our basic needs that can lead to unhappiness.
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Today more and more people want things instantly ( e.g.: goods, service, news ) Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there is an increase in individuals wanting get things immediately such as goods, new service. This writer strongly believes that this is positive growth and this essay will explain reasons why.
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The process diagram details the steps by which liquid chocolcate is produced from cocoa beans

The flow chart shows the various stages of producing chocolate from cocoa beans.
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Developed countries should help poor nations . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Improvement in healthcare and education is imperative for poor countries. In my opinion, the help of wealthy countries is important to give a helping hand to poor nations.
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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the era of globalisation and modern technology, in some people’s opinion zoos should be closed down because of its cruelty. However, other individuals believe that zoos can be used forin wild animal protection. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.
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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

A lot of museums receive costs from people for visiting, however, some of them don`t do this. In my opinion, all of them should be on the same level for some reasons which, I will mention in this essay.
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Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s lives and should receive more funding. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's world, news companies spend most of their funds covering global news on the other hand local news is not receiving less funds. However, domestic news is more important to citizen's lives and should receive more money. I do agree with the given statement and would like to deliberate on the reasons below.
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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunities abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Nowadays,a lot of students are inclined to study abroad. As they feel the education abroad is more job oriented. I wouldlike to discuss this trend in details where will be discussing both advantages and disadvantages of this recent trend.
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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Contained in two illustrations is the information pertaining to the changes likely to take place at the Southwest Airport after the next year's reconstruction.
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These days, more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the majority of people prefer to communicate online rather than face to face. It is due to unaccessible friends in physically. In my idea, it might be a negative association, because online friends are not reliable. Moreover, for under ages, people might be dangerous for many reasons.
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