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Some people think that children should be homeschooled when they are very young, while others think it is better for them to attend a school. Which do you think is better?

academy plays a very important role in daily life. offspring learn a lot of stuff such as behaviour, how to become a responsible man etc. In this essay I will discuss the homeschooled is better or whether attending school is better at a young age.
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The plans below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now,and how it will look after redevelopment.

The plans below illustrate the layout of the university’s sports center now and the expected expansion of it after redevelopment. Overall, it can be seen that there is only a gym and a pool at this time, and it is set to extend to have more sports.
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*Living in a country* where you have to *speak a foreign language* can cause *serious social problems*, as well as practical problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Nowadays, it has become trend to move into another country after completed high education however, living into nation where people have to speak international language, faced nember of issues like home-sickness, communication probelm and many other which I will explain in further paragraphs. I agree with this statement .
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In many countries wedding are getting bigger and more expensive than the past. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, large and expensive wedding events are increasing around the globe compared to the bygone days. In my view, this trend is a negative developement as ample reasons to substatiate it. In this essay, I will explain my view with relevant illustrations.
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Some people think more public money should be spent on roads and motorways than on public transport systems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is agued that more public funds should be invested on making roads and motorways rather than use them investing on public transportation.I totally disagrees with the arguement of road and mortorway expenditure instead of encouraging public transport because it causes trafic congestion and environmental pollution.
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Nowadays, many people with families leave their country to work abroad. Do you think the benefits of this trend outweigh the disadvantages for the families?

Recently a multitude of people move abroad with their families in order to work. In this essay, I will be discussing both the negatives alongside the positives, in order to establish an outcome.
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Most companies and organizations requires their employees to wear uniforms to work. what are the jobs that need uniform? what are the disadvantages of wearing uniforms to work?

There is an ongoing debate about mandatory uniforms in several organizations and theie draw backs. The following paragraphs will discuss the type of work which requiers uniforms and the disadvantages this matter possess.
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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent days,among many children spending their time on social networks or playing different games on phones or computers is starting to reach a concerning level these days.As a result, children have not knowledge and interest in a subject or a profession. I totally disagree this statement because this situation is increasing day by day and children are becoming indifferent to the people around them.
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The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university (Đề thi ngày 25/07/2020) Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The plans above illustrate the architectural layouts inside a one person dormitory room and accommodation for 2 individuals. Overall, while the room for 2 people has more space, the opposite was seen in the one for an individual.
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School uniform should be abolished from schools. to what extend do you agree or disagree with it?

Many people think that, school uniforms are totally dispensable and it should not be compulsory to wear. They want to abolish school uniforms from school. But, I totally disagree with this phenomenon. In this essay, I will describe some pros of wearing school uniforms and will give my opinion regarding this.
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The plan below shows the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The plans above illustrate the village of the city named Pebbleton 2 decades ago and nowadays. Overall, the main changes to the village is the addition and removal of some buildings and facilities in the area.
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The process below shows the Human Resources (HR) recruitment process for a company. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The flowchart illustrates how the company recruits its employees. Overall, there are three main stages in the process including creating a job listing, and after that, the candidates can submit their application. In the last stage, there will be some information as the outcome regarding their application.
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Archaeology is partly the discovery of treasures of the past, partly the work of the scientific analyst, partly the exercise of the creative imagination. Do you agree or disagree?

The aim of my project is to examine what are the favourite school subjects among teenagers in Zetland. To achieve this goal I have found a table considering some revelant opinion polls. In this essay I will describe my findings and express my opinion.
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People believe that is better to build new meseums and town halls instead of renovating the old ones.Are you agree or desagree?

Nowadays, people believe that it is better to build new meseums and town halls instead of renovating the old ones. I am desagree because if we build new meseums and town halls we are wasting the money and we are loosing part of the city´s history.
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In some countries, young people do not take care of their elderly relatives. Instead, they appoint trained professionals who take care of the elderly. Is it a positive or a negative tend according to you?

In sevral countries arong the world professional services are obtained to take care of elderly parents by their younger relatives. I belive this is negative development as ample reasons to substantialte it.
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Schools should stop teaching children with books which students think boring, and use films, TV, video games and computer instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Opinions are divided on whether use films and computer in class. Nowadays, the educational technology develop rapidly, children may enjoy computer for leisure, so some normal studying books may lead students feel boring. But in my opinion,using books are still the positive way to help students to learn knowledge, and the computer and films is just tool. So I partly agree that stop teaching children with books.
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Do you agree that mindfulness practices should be integrated into educational curriculum?

Some kids have trouble paying attention in class, due to the fact that they are not able to stop thinking into something negative that happened before. I believe that mindfulness practices should be included into education, via meditation, journaling, gratitude practice and listening, as kids might be able to let their negative thoughts go and start directing all their energy to their tasks.
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Do you agree that the use of bioplastics is a crucial step towards reducing plastic pollution?

Plastic is the third most common derivative of petroleum in the world, each year, 200 million tons of plastic are consumed in the planet, and it is contaminating and non-biodegradable. As the problem continues to rise, we have figured out some plastic alternatives, such as bioplastics, some argue that they are a crucial step towards reducing plastic pollution and I completely agree, as they reduce carbon footprint, they are 100% biodegradable and dont change the flavor in the contained food.
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Some people believe that technology has made humans more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is an opinion that the technology utilization in daily life has helped people to be more social. In this essay, I do agree with this point of view as the current communication technology has improved the way people maintain their relationship and expand their networking.
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Some people say that advetising is extremely succesful at persuding us to buy things. other people think that advertising is so common that we nolonger pay attenion to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In every country, some people say that adverting is very effective at influencing consumers buying decision,whileothers claim that is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. The interent has made advertising more common than even before.I think it is a powerful source of influence.
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