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These days young children spend a lot of time using computers, tablet and smartphones. Some people think that introducing children to technology at a young age is beneficial. Others believe that they would benefit more from traditional games. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.

Children Nowadays are more advanced than our previous generation, a significant population think that it is better not to introduce smart technogies in early age. In my opinion, It is benificial for children to accomodate with currrent technology. To present my opinion I will provide some examples to support my statement
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Nowadays we can watch entertainment performances for the screen and no need to watch in live. To what extent do you agree or disagree

These days majority of people can look at some activities on TV screens or on the computer and mobile phone and they do wanted watch live. I totally agree with this and I will discuss it.
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There are many zoos around the world these days. What are the causes of it? Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays there are many zoos around the world. The reason of that from ancient times people tame wild animals. Thus, this tradition saved for these days. From my opinion, for animals better to live in natural environment then to be keep indoors or it should be large area close to natural.
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Multicultural societies, where people of different groups live together, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whith the growth of population, the number of multicultural societies are increasing dramatically all around the world. Societies that people who are from different nations is belived to be more beneficial. I completely disagree with this statment so multicultucultural societies cause not olnly cultural demage but economical issue as well.
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One of the consequence of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The medical field is expanding and improving over time,and life expectancy is growing and people are living longer,the access to good health care is in the hands of everybody,with the developing technology worldwide and better disease management.While it is now easier to get health insurance the fees could be expensive for some people causing a huge financial stress.
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Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It has been an argue that the presence internationall student and their interaction with local students in the school is beneficial or not. while some indicate it as advanterous and beneficial,ohers are not supporting this topic.This subject will be discussed by me in the following essay.
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IELTS Regional household recycling rates

The line graph shows 200 the percentage of levels of regional household recycling in three countries, namely (France, Germany and the UK) between 2005 and 2015.
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Most high level positions in companies are filled by men eventhough the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50%female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain % of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays women are equally capable to fit in high level positions in great companies. It's critic to focus on this matter and encourage companies to fit more women in important positions. Also there should be an organization to check companies and their percentages of hiring women for crutial positions. In this procedure, it's good to educate more women mentaly to believe that they are capable to work in big positions. Also, managers need to be trained about trusting women and their potentials on acting in important roles. Every persons potentials are different. That's why we can't say that exactly 50% of women should be hired for important roles. In one company 70% of employees might be women or in another corporate might be 30% women and 70% men. Furthermore, it can be a brilliant idea to encourage employees to study and update their abilities and then compare them with their abilities and their knowledge. It's a better way to find competable people for the right positions and not...
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Some belief that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's globalised world some consider that money should spent on better modern gadgets, other think that it is better spent on teachers. In this essay I will discus both wievpoint and include my own opinion.
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Some people think that the government should be responsible for crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of each individual to protect themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is commonly believe that the government ought to accountable for crime prevention, although some people are of the opinion that the responsibility of the person to take care themselves. I considered that prevent crime should be on government than on individual.
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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, travelling has been becoming rapidly more common than before. It can bring some benefits on individual and society. Furthermore, it can influence on people's pyhsical mentality and their general knowledge.
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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the science. However, the most essential target of science is to prompt the life of human beings. This is a controversial issue. From my perspective, I don’t think such a given argument can be justified.
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In achieving personal happines our relationship with family, friends and collegues are more important work and wealth. Do you agree or disagree.

In today's globalised world some people consider that for being happy it is important to surround yourself with good friends. However, others believe it is important to be wealty for real happines. I agree with first statement and I will explain my viewpoint.
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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups, while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued by some people that it is more better for particular group of adolscents to study with classmates together on a project, while for others better to study themselves. Despite studying alone can gives more freedom for students making tasks more individually, to study in a collective more beneficial, for having more interesting process, and communication skill development.
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Cooking food is a waste of time in today's hectic life. Fast food restaurants are helpful in modern living and it is less stressful. Do you agree or disagree?

The importanct of cooking which was always debate now become more serious topic which many people claiming in recent year. This essay will future elaborate my views of favoring the positive/negative impact and thus, will lead to logical conclusion.
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With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such areas？

Human beings need to search energy and gas supplies from distance, and that places should not be used before, because of growing the demand energy sources of oil and gas. This essay will discuss why pros could not be as important as cons.
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Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowaday,urban people see some limit condition for use private vehicle,whereas tickets of pubic transportation are published in cities.in this essay i try to get you viewpoint of pros and cons of this decitions and then get my opinion.
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Some people think studying in groups is better, while some think self-studying is better for school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Studying with other people is belived by someone to be more significant rather than self-studying. I completly agree with this statment as groups have not only socaial benefits, but also psychological benefits as well.
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Crime rates in most countries is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. What do you think? What can be done to reduce crime rate?

It is argue that large figure of nations hane more louder crime offinse parcentages in cities than vilages. This essay is totally agree with this statement because decreasing rates of applaying low and this difficulty could be tickle by promoting restricted implement legalations.
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Some people belive that the personal information of violent criminals should be made available to the public. Others think that this information should be protected. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

It is a common belief that the private information of violent criminals should not be opened to the public due to their human rights. However, it is a more persuasive argument that the personal information of capital criminals should be made available to the public to proect reoffending crimes in the future.
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