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In today’s world, private companies rather than the government pay for and conduct most scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

In recent times, private cooperations are fueling and conducting most advanced scientific research as compared to government entities. In my personal opinion, scientific research in private companies have more advantages than disadvantages. This essay will futher de-cypher my standpoint in detail.
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People believed that being literate in English allows you to acquire better jobs and thus allows one to have access to a better standard of living. Up to what extend do you agree or disagree?

Yes I am agree with this statement, due to the fact that now a days to educate in english medium will give you secure jobs, and that allows people to live in higher standards.Here will explain there in details.
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Nowadays many jobs are more stressful and the working day is longer. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees?

The line graph illustrates information about the number of people without a job in the United States and Great Britain in the year 2008 and 2015.
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1- Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

In a current era work became most important part of everyone's life.People need jobs to spend their life without hussles .At a present time folks like to become there own boss instead of working under any company because of some reasons that are i going to explain in following paragraphs .
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People use too much phones nowadays, so they think they may have a negative influence. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Cell phones nowadays are one of the most essential components of people's lives. People spend much time on them, so that there is a belief about cell phones' negative impact on humanity. I agree with this belief, because there were many conducted experiments which prove it and I've experienced such influence on myself.
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The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The journey to the moon in 20th century is accepted as one of the greatest and significant events throughout the whole history. Even though some assert that their lives didn’t change even a little bit after “the moon walk”, as far as I’m concerned, people should evaluate “this step” as a symbol opening the mysterious door of the outer space to the mankind so that means it’s a of paramount importance occasion and it has altered our lives forever.
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The number of people suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people believe that alternative medicine can help. Do you agree that alternative medicines are effective?

In recent times, the need to seek alternative medications is an issue all over the world. Nowadays, it is believed by some that modern lifestyle could cause serious helth problems, which could be coured with alternative medicines, such as yoga could help release stress, different type of diets to cure alergies, and homeopathy medicines, as to cure different health issues.
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Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

In this generation, fast food is more accessible to humans. It is readily available everywhere, at anytime of the day. This is considered as an unhealthy food to consumed but due to the convenience it is being patronize by people. Readily available meal is for busy people.
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Doctors recommend that older people should exercise regularly. However, some people do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

Health experts like doctors recommending senior citizens to do a regular exercise. But, some of them is not following their recommendation. In this essay, it will be tackled what are the possible causes why oldies are not doing their daily exercise and it will be given solutions to the corresponding causes.
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Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions?

In these recent years unemployment is one of the most common issues the world is facing now. Youngsters and elderly people with regards to job hunting are having problems in terms of their skills, length of practise or experience, educational attainment and capabilities.
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Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved?

The following diagram shows the process of bricks production and explain the steps.We can see that brick is made using only one material, and that the manufacturing process consists of six steps. It requires seven steps until  the last step, delivery.
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There is an increasing number of anti-social behaviours in recent years; people generally believe that society is to blame. What do you think the causes are and who is responsible for this?

Nature of behaving disorderly by human beings has been increasing immensely .whereas,some people blame the society for the lawless behaviour of individuals. In this writting , i will put forward some causes as well as practical soulutions to this issue.
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Many people believe that social networking sites are not good.

It is often argued that social networking sites, for instance Facebook, have had a detrimental effect on individual people as well as to society and local communities. However, while I believe that social networking sites are mainly beneficial to individual people, I agree that they have had a detrimental effect on local communities.
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Some people think that space exploration is waste of resources, while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are many arguments that exploring space demands huge funds and time, therefore it should be used to mitigate the woes of people.
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More and more people are buying fashionable clothes these days. Does it have more negative or positive effects? Give reasons.

Fashion plays a major role in contemparary world. There is an increasing trend in people spending more money on clothing. The notion further proved when analyzed the incremental growth of the world's fashion industry over the last decade. In my opinion, the said trend has both good and adverse implications.
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The uses of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Facebook,Twitter which are some instances of social media have made people habituated to virtual contact rather than physical contact.I do not believe social networking has more benefits rather than its drawbacks.
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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A glance at the given graphs illustrate the information regarding prices, promotional discounts, and advertising budget by the 7 various tablet stores.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Life is all about up and downs, in which some people think it is better to accept a bad situation whilst others believe that people should try to improve situations. Both points of views is explicated in succeeding paragraphs along with my own opinion.
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An increasing number of children have become hooked on fast food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?

Nowadays youngsters are more addicted towards junk foods & carbonated drinks. Which has led to number of overweight. This essay will deal with the main factor of excessive body fat & some feasible solution.
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Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children are obsessed with computer games, which has become a serious concern for parents. They think that it has no value in education. At the same time, it has many negative effects. I am a strong advocate of this argument and shed some light on this topic.
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