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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To wah extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, it has been believed by several people that music makes various generations, traditions and also cultures get near together. In this essay, I will discuss some proofs which strengthen this kind of outlook and explain why I agree with them.
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The best way to tackle the problem of obesity is to educate people about healthy eating. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, Obesity is a chronic disease for a people. Due to obesity, people become fat, chubby, etc.
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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that having a stable profession/career early is much better than changing jobs frequently. While this trend could be beneficial to workers to some extent, I would argue that those who frequently try different careers tend to be more satisfied.
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Some employers reward members of staff for their exceptional contribution to the company by giving them extra money. This practice can act as an incentive for some but may also have a negative impact on others. To what extent is this style of management effective? Are there better ways of encouraging employees to work hard? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is quite common that employer give some extra money as reward of their subordinates. In most of case, it did work to encourage the staffs to keep working hard and make more contributions to the company.
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To be labelled a ‘Work of Art’, a painting, sculpture or other art form should display certain qualities that are unique. However, over the past century there has been a decline in the quality of prize-winning artwork and it is now possible for quite ordinary pieces of art to be labelled ‘masterpieces ’ whilst true works of art pass unnoticed. Do you agree or disagree?

The graph illustrates a variety of in-house training courses learned by the manager and secretary. While the pie chart compares the portion of training hours in different classes in a large financial company.
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In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partners. Discuss both systems and state which you think is better.

Marriage is a crucial factor for a success of a person. Therefore, parents involvement for the marriage would happen in some countries, especially in Asian countries. However, some people find their partner by them self. Throughout this essay, I will explore both ways and express my own opinion on the matter. Firstly, I will discuss about the weddings arrange by parents and secondly I will share my idea regarding people, who find their better half by them self.
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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their parent. Other believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

It is true that family play a crucial role in children's over all growth development but It is argue that few individuals think that juvenline should spend all their spare time with their family but some opine that this is negative thought. Although I personally believe that children should learn various kinds of thing from their parents and my view points will be discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
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Scientist say that future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think it is a positive or a negative social development?

Scientists are the one who is doing lot of research and they are capable of making invention that is fruitful for the future. However, I don't think so people will rely on any specific language in the coming years.
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Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same roads causes some problems. What are the problems and what can be done to reduce them?

In recent years, the population in the countries has risen dramatically, the space is not enough for most of the people to maintain a high quality of living and the harbors are too intense for cyclists and van drivers to drive simultaneously. In this exam, I will show the problems that may cause and three strategies can be done to reduce the tragedy.
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Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same roads causes some problems. What are the problems and what can be done to reduce them?

In recent years, the population in the countries has rose dramatically, the space is not enough for most of people to maintain a high quality of living and the roads are too intensity for cyclists and car drivers to drive simultaneously. In this exam, I will show the the problems what may cause and three stratigies can be done to reduce the tragedy.
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Many education systems around the world give more importance to the subjects of maths and science than to the subject of art. Some believe that art is an essential part of society and should be given more importance.

In a society, we humans, as a social creature, mainly interact each other by words/verbally. We do this to transmit our messages of feelings, emotions, ideas and so on. To extend this message, we illustrate our words by art works. Art works are one of the most powerful decision-making and persuading tool. However, we can not totally deny the role of math and science to create magnifigent art works.
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" Today developed countries are increasing the number of tourist industries. Why it is happening? What are the benefits of this situation?"

I lost my brew coffee equipment.
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In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

A comparison on the way which money was spent on various types of entertainment activities in the USA when compared to Europe and Asia in 1995 and 2000 is depicted in the given chart.
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Some say Parents should be the one to make their children a good citizen in society. Others say it also the duty of schools. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is a general opinion that both parents and teachers have a duty to put children in direction. Although some think parents should take full responsibility to teach everything, others think teachers also have a part in order to make children a valuable asset in our world. This essay will discuss the role of a parent and why teachers give immense support to parents to put their children on the right path.
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All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earlist grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Learning a foreign language is required due to the whole world, it is undeniable that non-native language at the present time is very important for everyone in society. Every people think that most children should start foreign language at elementary school in the early years. From my point of view, I agree with this statement there be can a lot of benefits for offspring in their future life.
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Museums and art galleries should focus on works that show the history and culture of their own country rather than works of other parts of the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the entire word we have symbol of our ancient which have been protecting from them on museums. Some people belive they have a priority target only on their art product wich is produce in their own society in spite focus on foreign country's art. I belive we have to defense of both of them and i want to explain why in next two prinsiple.
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The crime rare nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

Yes i agree with that. Technology can prevent and solve crime, but only physical crime. Nowadays, people put the camera in shoping area, public area or home. Example, if there is large of area in The shope, people can monitor each building in the shope. When there is a thief that want take something in there, we easy to identify where the building that mean. Other advantage is when we leave home and nobody there, there is a thief that take our important thing, the camera help us by recording video activity inside or outside building. When we have video, we can easy identify the thief.
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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving older railway lines. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many countries, people think government need to spend large amount of money on establishing new railway lines for high-speed rails to travel between cities but some people be of the opinion that money should spend on ameliorating the existing public transport.
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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidences.

The two floor plans illustrate the changes made to the park called Grange from 1920 to the present. Overall, it is the tangible changes that not only the recreation areas but also the natural environment have seen considerable changes.
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Many people say that globalisation and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

Of course, I like to watch the sky, especially on sunny days. White clouds have many shapes, sometimes they look like the scales of a dragon, sometimes look like a Buddhist, or a phoenix. I can imagine a lot of different images from the clouds. So amazing.
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