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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

In the present world, we hear lots many style's of music. Music make us relax from various daily life tension's and became mandatory for most of the people life.Lets discuss in detail about different types, in the following paragraph's.
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Increase in tourism is causing English to become a common language.This advantages and disadvantages. Discuss in detail both.

Owing to the gaining popularity in tourism industry, english has become a widespread language. It is commonly being used as a means of communication, while this has various advantages,it has quite a few advanatages too. In this essay, I will highlight a few merits and demerits.
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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Celebrities are those, who has done some amazing job in their job. Nowadays, media tend to focus on those people, in order to acheive highest TRP rating's. In this process, they are creating some inconvience to them. Lets discuss in detail in the latter part.
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Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries.Do you agree or disagree?

Developed countries benefit of trade should be acknowledged to talented and brilliant worker's migrating from underdeveloped part of the world
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Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health. Do you agree or disagree.

The importance of health education in the prevention of illnesses such as diabetes, obesity and cardiovascular diseases in crucial. Despite that, I believe scools do not spend enough resorces to teach our children about the importance of a healthy way of living.
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Essay topics: In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?

Now a day’s it’s becoming normal in western society to have no children, despite from western country many couples even in Asian countries start planning to not have children’s. Well it all depends on their future planning’s and targets in their life. They might be thinking to spend their precious period of time with each other’s.
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International tourism has become a huge industry in the world.Do the problems of international travel outweigh its advantages.

It is irrefutable that tourism has taken the economy of some countries to a mammoth dimension.This essay seeks to discuss the advantages of international tourism as it outweigh the disadvantages.
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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

Nowadays, Poverty became major problem in almost all the developing countries. Family with less income earning which cannot support the basic requirements of the people, is known to be a poor. There may be many reasons for this cause, some of them will discuss as following.
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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

There is no doubt on that when the vast development in the computer technology that leads to increase the usage of computers in education field.To get more cede in education computers are used because they use
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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

School plays an important role in each every person life, so do the parents. Almost all of us learn lot many of things in school, which we will implement through out our lives, One of such thing is discipline. Being a parent nowadays is a difficult task which each one of us is facing with our families.
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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.

To my knowledge, Advertising not only plays a key role in product sales, but also provides information to consumers about the product. I disobey with the statement that promotions encourages the people to buy their products. Let us discuss in detail about my point
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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree?

Now-a-days, media is source of all sort of information. Its not only cover the news regarding health, weather, technology but also celebrity daily activities. Coverage of popular personalities life, has its own advantages and disadavantages on general public especially on children and teenagers.
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some people believe that children should be given lessons on how to manage money in the school Do you agree or disagree?

Now a days, children are not aware of money management. I agree with of point of providing lessons at school to the children regarding money management. Children will spend most of their time in school rather than at home.
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Some say the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful to society. Others say the purpose of education is to help people achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

Some people argue that the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be more useful to the society but the others take the view that it is to help them to achieve their personal goals. Education gives the people a deeper undestanding about how the world works, so it serves as a personal gain but at the same time when people have a better view on the working of the world through education, it also eventually leads to being a good member of the society.
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In order to solve traffic problems, Government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution?

It has been said that Governments have the responsibility to revive the public transportation system by taxing on private car drivers. However, this phenomenon has both benefits and drabacks. This essay will address both of the views with explanation
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is always hot debate of music influencing different people of several ages and it’s cultures. I firmly believe that music has power to bring the people closer as well as distant. I will be discussing the potentials of music in harmony and love in next paragraphs.
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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should teachers and parents be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

One important stage in child's growth is the development of conscience, which is linked to the ability to tell the right from wrong. Some people, propose the use of force to teach the children this difference, I however, disagree with the recommended idea, and i think it is detrimental for youth development.
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In most developed countries shopping is not only about buying the goods you need, it is also perceived as entertainment. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples based on your experience

In economically developing nations, way of delights is window shopping instead of buying something from stores. I believe that people go out for shopping as well as an outing.
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Some peoples say that it is right to use animals for our benefit,other say it is not good to exploit them.Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In the era of constant development and rapid climate change have adverse effects on all living beings and especially animals.Whether it is good to exploit animals or not will be discussed further in upcoming paragraphs.
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Some people believe that in 100 years time, life will be easier for us while others are unsure about it.What is your opinion.

In the recent years, many changes have been seen in the way of living. The standard of living has become higher and the way of living easier. Hence, some people are of the opinion that in that next 100 years, life will become way more easier. On the other hand,some disagree with this.
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