IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 254

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets. There is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films, need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these,views and give your own opinion.

Some people argue that the best way to watch movies it through our phones or tables while others believe that the cinema is the best option to enjoy a film. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail, and show why I believe that wacthing movies from our technological devices might be better.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

More and more people think that some career like engineers and doctors should to work in the city wher they did their Studing or training. However, Other say that they should to employe in any place. It dependent on the person himself.

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The world of work is changing rapidly. Working condition today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on taking one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestions for how people should prepare for work in the future

Nowadays, there are a lot of changes into the world of work, technological advancements have led people think that they can develop their tasks in another way and companies have realized that innovation is the best way to face the challenges of market. Those ideas need to merge in a common point which allow to advance in a process inprovement and the creation of a new industry with the best parts of both worlds. In this essay we are going to discuss what are the principal causes and some advices for working in the future.

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Many people try to create a balance between their professional life and their personal life. However, very few are able to achieve such a balance. What problems stop people from achieving a work-life balance? How can these problems be overcome?

In the current days, finding a balance between professional and personal life begin to be a common goal that many people try to achieve. However, despite the efforts that the person put to manage both work-life balance, only a few portion of people succeed in maintaining this equilibrium.

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Rising university fees and scares employment prospects for graduates have led some people to say that universities should not teach arts subjects, like philosophy and history, and only offer practical degree courses that maximise chances of employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Due to high inflation around the world the unemployment is a great issue faced by people. Education is proving to be very expensive with a significant rise in tution fees. Some people have suggested that Educational institutes should subsitute subjects related to arts so that the graduates have higher chances of getting a job. I completely agree with this and in this eassay, I will support my opinion with examples.

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both side individuals and companies to shopping online ?

Digital market has been increasing widely, with the increase in trend number of individual prefer to do digital shopping rather than window shopping. As each individual busy in their lifestyle to save their time and to move with the fast fashion, preference is given to online shopping while, the drawbacks are individual can be spent thrift with it sometimes and the fashion brand can have a loss in its value by various factors. This essay will discuss the positive and negative impacts on indivduals and company.

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The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Generating revenue is the first priority of businesses, and social work is not what they must need to do. I wholeheartedly agree with this statement and I will support my opinion with arguments in the essay below.

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Some people argue that to make healthy foods like fruits and vegetables more affordable, they should be subsidised by the government. Others believe that it is better to tax unhealthy foods. Discuss both views and give your option.

There is no doubt that these days the price of healthy food purchases became more expensive and should be supported by the government in order to betterment the level of nutrients for individuals in different ages .While others assume that to reduce the amount of unhealthy products the government should be encouraged the market which buy unhealthy food to pay the tax.The questions is what are the most effective solutions to increase the number of healthy food purchases and reduce the amount of unhealthy food in markets and food seller shops? .

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The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Over the decades the world has been changing significantly and individuals are concerned that their positions at work might shift into a situation that they do not like. Nowadays new machines and tools are invented in order to ease the tasks for people but besides these advancements, humans positions in work environment are being in danger. Although problems have arisen as a result of this, there are solutions.

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Some people think the death penalty is a good choice to handle and reduce the crime rate and make society safer. However, I think it is not a big deal solution because every person makes a mistake, and it is against human rights.

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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Numorous of peoples says that goverment should spend budget for support private school. Due to, it will help development education system. In my opinion, they should not be fouded by public money, private school already have highly profitable from school tuition and private school are a bussiness created to seek profit like other bussiness.

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The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is an inevitable fact that nowadays the environment of work is advancing significantly there are several reasons for such a change and also some circumstances which has been resulted due to this issue of worldwide change. Both the reasons and the influences are elaborated further.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

There is so many people who are living doing work for which they have no passion or skills.

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Avarege minutes men and women spent on unpaid work and leisure activities

The provided table gives information on the typical amount of time that both gender counterparts spend on leisure activities, namely sports, reading and multimedia resources like TV,video and radio, while the bar chart represents household activities for females and males, which include cooking and washing, shopping,repair,clothes washing and ironing.The units are measured in numbers.

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Do you think it is important for children to be taught art?

Couldably, without a doubt, art has played a key role in developed society. While some believe that it is not necessary to teach art for children. I strongly think it is essential.

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Studying togerther with friends in the school give more merits rather than demerits in comparison to studying at home. There are three reasons behind this position. First, studying in classroom with many students enhanced energy of the students. The blurting and vibrant vibes of classroom energenized the students. Me and my friends shared the same view that other student voice can revive its energy when experienced its boredom. In other words, learning online doesn't have some type of distraction that influence the students.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The price and accessibility of technology prompted juveniles and adolesents to work from their homes. Despite its well-known benefits, I think it is a negative development. The more affordable technology makes people more stressed, distracted, and reduce their willingness of asking questions.

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What are the reasons behind rising crime rates in urban areas, and what solutions could reduce this trend

The issue of occuring more and more offenses in cities is rapidly escalating worldwide, raising alrm due to its wide range of negative impacts. The predominant factors contributing to this problem are poverty as well as peer presure and lack of parental guidance to young people and I am firmly convinced that increasing social benefits to aliviate poverty, coupld with teaching adults to shun criminal and anti-social behaviours, serve as effective strategies to tackle and alleviate this problem.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, we can see all of the crimes happening in all around the world. When we watch the news, mostly it’s crime news that are broadcasted on TV.

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Some people believe that individuals today spend too much time following political news while others feel politics deserve greater attention. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some youngsters are never been more interested in political affairs than both internal and external matters of countries Nowadays. Due to high demand in the technological field and deployment of advanced 5G networks significant youngsters do have access to all the political pieces of information via various social media applications such as YouTube, Meta, and Twitter.

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