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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Other believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather that compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary epoch, there are several debates over whether a sense of competition or a sense of cooperation should be emphasized in children's upbringing procedure. In the following essay will be discussed both standpoints and elaborateed on the advantages and disadvantages of these viewpoints.

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The number of obese children is growing over the past years. Some say that parents should be punished for letting their child becoming fat. Discuss and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that child obese has significantly increased over the past years. While it is commonly held belief that parents must be punished because of thier overwight child, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that family did not let thier kids become fat on purpose cause maybe it is something hereditery.

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Is it important for people to take more risks in their professional career and their personal lifes. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Is it important for people to take more risks in their professional career and their personal lifes. What is the advantage and disadvantage of taking more and just staying nicely and doing nothing for their future in the professional career and their own life.

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The below diagram shows information about the university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

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As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling, there is growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

Due to growth of numbers in tourism, the need for flights has increased. This essay will discuss the problems associated with growth of flight due to more leisure travel and will provide some solutions to those problems.

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Some people think that people commit crime because of poverty and social problems, while others think it is because of their bad nature. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Nowadays the rate of commiting rime soar day by day. Many think that it is caused by people who are bad in nature. Whereas, others believe that poverty issess is main cause of committing crime. In this essay, both views will be discussed in the following paragraphs . However, I am solidaritly with the letter view.

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The growing number of overweight is putting strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved.some people think that the best way to deal with this issue is that introduce more physical activities in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Many companies solely depend on interviews for the hiring of new staff. While few people believe that there are many other ways of choosing the employee for the company. I wholeheartedly agree with this stance because employees should also be hired on the basis of academic background and experience in that associate particular field.

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Interview forms the basic selection criteria for most large companies. However, some people think that interview is not a reliable method of choosing whom to employ and there are other better methods. To what extent do you agree?

Many companies solely depends on interviews for the hiring of new staff. While, few people believe that there are many other ways of choosing the employe for the company. I wholeheartedly agree with this stance because employes should also be hired on basis of academic backgroud and experience of that aassociate particular field.

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Modern technology is used in many workplaces today. How do you think technology changed the ways people work? Do you think there are any disadvantages of relying on technology at work?

I am sure that last scientific achievements need for all professional spheres on our days. I like it, because we can see stability progress. Consequently, today we are participating in many process, learning new professions and seeing modern world.

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As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people traveling, there is growing demand for more flights. What problems does this have on the environment? What measures could be taken to solve the problems?

There is a sound on the internet saying ‘’catch flights, not feelings’’. This sentence already confirms the popularity of traveling by planes and how people spend their free time. A sheer amount of people are now, this second, searching for cheap flights to see something new without even thinking of how plane travel worsens our environmental issues. This essay will discuss why planes are not the best transport and what are the alternatives to it.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some say that governments must to give more money for building railways rather that roads. This essay totally disagrees with that statement, because roads are main transportation of people and products like food and clothes exports mostly on the roads.

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Computers are an essential feature of modern education. Some people believe that certain subjects, such as mathematics, are better taught using computers. Others however think that there are aspects of education in which computer use is inadequate. Discuss both these views and discuss your opinion.

Technology is becoming an essential part in our day to day life. In this advance world, evey field of work is using electronic products such as laptops and computers to make things easier because it helps to store data, prepare documents in schools, office and other fields. whereas, some people and I believe that use of computers in schools is better way to teach the students and other opposed that it is not benefical in other aspects of education. I will explain both viewpoint and my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that having sports lessons at school is a waste of time. Write an article for your school newspaper, giving your views.

Many people believe degrade sports because they think it’s not a carrier for the upcoming generation. Much as they hate it they love it as well. There are an estimated of 7 billion people and I’m sure that 95% of the people love sports. The question is are sports a waste of time?

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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

In the new era, people easily have the oportunity to access higher education; for instance, the new fashion is to have more than two careers as a chance to ear more money than having just one or even nothing. That phenomenon has to be evaluated depending on the country to be analyzed. To illustrate it, it is not the same, study two careers in Colombia and one in Europe. In this essay, I will explain pros and cons to having many careers and compare in these two countries.

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Many government thinks that economic progress is their most important goals, some people however thinks that other progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

A number of states believe that economical growth is most essincial aims, while other think that all progress are also impotant for a nations. I firmly believe that finacial stateabulity is more imoprtant for every nations but other development also necessary for getting good revanue.

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (eg. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or desagree ? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people said that small size businesses struggling to compete with supermarkets which has been increasing at a very high pace resulting in the death of local businesses. I strongly disagreed with this statement because this comparison is not up to the stauts and local businesses serve the needs of the local community and play a vital role in the economy of the state.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is an argument that improving quality of life should be the primary purpose of science. I strongly agree to this view and I will elaborate more on this essay.

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Many people these days prefer to have their own businesses. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Alot of people these days like to have their own businesses and having a high income. but there are also drawbacks to be taken into account.

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Some people think secondary school students should learn international news as one of their subjects, while others believe that this is a waste of valuable time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Without the shadow of doubt it can be said that students play paramount role in our life . Student are nation bulider . Some masses believe that learner should read or learn international news as it should be their subject but some are againt this view . I intend to discuss both views.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

In this day and age, it has become increasingly prevelent for people to believe that young generation should be alert regarding differences between right and wrong, and parents should punish their child for their mistakes. I personally agree with this notion and there should be a line related to punishment.

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