IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 262

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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􏰖 􏰈􏰕􏰥􏰎 􏰒􏰎􏰕􏰒􏰔􏰎 􏰘􏰍􏰙􏰚􏰦 􏰘􏰍􏰑􏰘 􏰘􏰍􏰎 􏰥􏰕􏰗􏰘 􏰙􏰥􏰒􏰕􏰐􏰘􏰑􏰚􏰘 􏰘􏰍􏰙􏰚􏰏 􏰑􏰓􏰕􏰜􏰘 􏰓􏰎􏰙􏰚􏰏 􏰐􏰙􏰣􏰍 􏰙􏰗 􏰙􏰘 􏰏􏰙􏰠􏰎􏰗 􏰑 􏰒􏰎􏰐􏰗􏰕􏰚 􏰘􏰍􏰎 􏰕􏰒􏰒􏰕􏰐􏰘􏰜􏰚􏰙􏰘􏰧 􏰘􏰕 􏰍􏰎􏰔􏰒 􏰕􏰘􏰍􏰎􏰐 􏰒􏰎􏰕􏰒􏰔􏰎􏰤 􏰝􏰌 􏰚􏰌􏰍 􏰈􏰅􏰁􏰊􏰊 􏰌􏰁 􏰑􏰂􏰎􏰈􏰅􏰁􏰊􏰊􏰞

There is no denying the fact that money is essential to help other people. While it is a commonly held belief to being rich is it provide a person the ability to help other people, there is also an argument that opposes it is not just about being rich to help others even the poorest people could be afford help to others. In my opinion, I consider that ethical and moral it is important to assist others not just about the financial status.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the contemporary world, different types of music transmit around the world, which leads the majority of individuals enjoying the music. While some people agree that music is able to gather people together from different countries, I partly agree with this opinion.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests comma and whether they are married or single. some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The essentials method of working any industries company which is the part of your life. working is a source of your wealth for your future and present personal stuff to handle. But aso you're capable for this job and being able to perform both the personal things and professional level of work to do in simultaneously.

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Social media helps people to keep in touch with friends and stay on top of news and events. Do you think the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

In the last decade, it is extremely difficult for people to meet someone. However, these day, the development of social media, all of us can keep in touch with friends and update tops of news and events easily. In my opinion, I assume that the pros of social media outweigh the cons due to social media not only save time, but also help humalife become better and quickly.

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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend?

In earlier times, shopping was viewed as necessary domestic responsibility, but today, many people consider it a leisure activity. I believe this has both positive and negative aspects. On the one hand, shopping as a hobby can be an enjoyable social activity, but on the other hand, it may lead to unhealthy consumer habits.

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The percentage of overweight children in Western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effect of this disturbing trend.

There is no doubt, that the issue of obesity in advansed countries is crucial, especially the problem among children. This essay will observe the reasons of the phenomenon and the outcomes of issue on society.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

Children are one of the crucial stages of development, namely the golden age. At this time, there are many aspects that can be stimulated and developed so that their development is more optimal, however there are many inhibiting factors that can become a nuisance for children, one of which is a smartphone when not used wisely. Nowadays, smartphones have become a part of life in every circle. However, special attention needs to be given to children so that they can provide more optimal education to children.

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some people think that young people should choose the jobs that they want but other people think they should be more realistic and think more about their future. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Young generations have two ways of choosing their future profession: either by pursuing what they are passionate about, considering their interests, or by carefully thinking about their future career. In this essay, I will discuss both the positive and negative aspects of these two approaches and provide my personal opinion.

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Many people think that the behaviour of professional sportsmen/sportswomen on or off the field is not important as long as they are good players.To what extent do you agree or disagree with it ?

Sports is an important aspect in every nation. A large number of people say that professional sportsperson's behaviour is not Vital point whether off field or on field as long as they are good players. I strongly disagree with this statement, and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons..

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Question. Happiness is considered very important in life,why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness. Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own knowledge and experiences.

Happiness is crucial in every individual life. It is difficult to define due to every person has their own view regarding with feeling happy. From my point of view, the most important consideration to be happy is enough feeling and receive faith from God. In this essay, I will discuss these factors and include relavant examples.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a huge stress on youngsters to get better attainment academically.Some of them argue that non-academic subjects including physical education and cookery,should be eradicate from the school curriculum since children are likely to be engaging on academic without any distractions. I agree with this noble idea, since that helps to improve children performance and becoming in better position in their lives.

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Some people claim that it is justifiable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings, while others argue that it is unethical. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some would argue that the use of animals in science for people advantages is necessary because is not possible to use humans for this porpoise. Others say that is a non-ethical activity because animals have rights. I believe that the use of laboratory animals under humanely conditions avoiding sufferings is possible.

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Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

many people believe that governments have to impose some restrictions in order to decrease the(effect of ) rate of pollutants affects on environment and housing complexities to avert the widespread miscellaneous types of disorder. I subscribe to the notion that some illnesses derive from building maintenance conditions such as bacterial and fungal diseases. ,meanwhile, a range of disorders result from the environmental pollution in which humans play direct and indirect roles leading to a quiet number of waterborne plus soil-borne diseases; even though all illnesses are not limited in those categories because of the genetical disorder have great proportions which officials should be aware of them.

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IELTS Topic: Nowadays famous people are photographed by professional photographers everywhere they go. Some people Say this IS a good things because thé public are interested in their lives. Others people think that photographers are wrong to follow famous people. Discuss both thèse views and give your own opinion.

It is always a matter of debate that, whether following celebrities is logical or illogical. In this essay i would discuss the both points along with give my opinion.

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Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Musical instrument are fun and nice to learn.but I wouldn't necessarily say they should learn it. Students who wish to major in arts and music school are often the people who insist on this idea. However people with no interests in majoring in such stuff would mostly agree. From my standpoint, i strongly disagree. Learning music should not be as necessity in school in any way shape or form.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. W hat are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

It is observed that people around the world are getting eager and keen to learn about the facts and figures of the place they reside. In this essay, I will mention the motives for this trend and also the sources/tools to extract the information.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

Technology become a basic need for human daily activity from at early stage of human being. I strongly agree that using smartphones for hours of our daily life could give some negative impact, especially for children.

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Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?

It is ture that many children have a lot of playthings. Play benefits have much more, but having a large number of toys has many advantages and drawbacks. I describe it below in detail.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities around thw world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you thing this statement is? What measures can governments takes to disocurage people from using their cars?

Nowadays the tenance of a car is more common than never, this increase has happend so quick in the last thirty years, that now many cities around the world are overfilled with traffic. As I see it, this affirmation is veridical. In this essay we will discuss how this problem affects society and what measures can the powers that be take to discourage people from using their cars.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Buying printed newspapers or books in the future is not worth it because everyone able to access the articles or books for free. I disagree with this statement because reading online newspapers and books for free will decrease quality of the news and lowering income both for journalists and books author.

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