IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 271

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Aircrafts have been increasingly used to transport fruit and vegetable to some countries where such plants hardly grow or out of season. Some people consider it a good idea but some people oppose it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that, some people believe that use of airplanes in transportation of goods like fruit and vegetable is important while others think it is purposeless to use aircrafts .I agree with the statement that Aircraft is a sourceful way of transportation of fruit and vegetable.In this essay i will discuss both point of views with the relevent examples.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today

The plans illustrate the development of Grange Park when it first opened in 1920 and Grange Park today.

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The age of information technology has taken a lot of people by surprise. While it has become a way of life for some, others know very little about it. Eventually we will have a polarised society and this will lead to serious social problems.To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Some individuals see that the age of information and tech possess a great impact on how revelationary it can be. well, some think it will ornament the future some would say it will cause significant communal difficulties. In my own opinion, I would say it makes the community a better and more educated place.

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Some people believe that having sport in schools is a waste of time and resources, whilst other believe that sport in school is a vital part of education. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In my opinion to agree or disagree with the statement that is Some people believe that having sport in schools is a waste of time and resources, whilst other people believe that sport in school is a vital part of education. Is an important issue to discuss. First, I will present some agreement supporting this description after which some aspect against that will be discussed..

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Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries.Explain the main causes and effects of this problem,and suggest some possible solutions.

At the present time, toddler's obesity is becoming the main problem in many societies around the world.This essay is discussing the negative causes of childhood obesity and providing some solutions.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a trend that more and more people are living in bad situations including working on a teerible campany, earn a few salaries. Some people tend to accept this phenomenon but others argue that we need to change the bad status. I absolutely support the point of view latter.

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In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing high speed railway lines for inter-city travel. Others believe this money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

When it comes to allocate fund for transportation, the debate between spending money on high speed railway versus on improving existing public transport is a prominent one. This approach has both positive and negative implication and this essay discusses both the approach before giving final opinion.

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More and more people buy a wide range of household goods like television,microwave open and rice cooker. Do you think this is positive or negative development ?

People are increasingly buying a variety of household items such as television, microwave and rice cooker. I think this is a positive development because these electronic household items have made our life comfortable and easier and they save our valuable time.

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One of the challenges faced by international students is studying in Australia. Write a paragraph about some of the difficulties facing international students when they study in an Australian environment, based on your own experience and the experiences of other students in the class.

Many overseas students in Australia are facing challenges while they are studying, related to their languages and cultures. First, language issues are a common problem among the students. One of them is finding a new home, such as an apartment, unit, or house for rent. It could be difficult for them. The process starts with apps for rent, and houses, and many should have good reading skills to present an impressive application, ending with reading long residential contracts to accept the offer. In addition, many students have a different background from the Australians, which might cause them culture shock. This leads to several health disorders, such as anxiety and depression. In conclusion, problems such as communication or culture shock need to be taken more seriously.

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In some country, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweight the disadvantages.

People across the world are starting to live with their parents even after completing their educations and having jobs. This essay will acknowledge both advantages and disadvantages of the given topic.

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Some pp believe that public building should be moved out ò the city to promote citizen's well being and better economic growing, while some argue that the planning will cause more harm than good. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There was a plan that public building should be moves to out of city. It can lead to two main benefit is provide citizen's health and support more for economic growing. While some argue that planning will cause more harm than good, i stand in the opposite mind. From my point of view, that plan have more advantages than dis because.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is compulsury to teach children about the clear concept of right and wrong things which can lead them. In this regardings, this was suggested by Some experts that punishment is the way for kidds to learn the differences between right and wrong. However, I completely disagree the former view. In my point of view, there are more technique to teach the childrens rather than punished.

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The Best way to reduce poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disage?

In this modern world, there is no denying about one of the basic need of human right which is education. There is a general claim that poor nations should invest their fund on free learning for their people up to 6 years in order provide them with some basic life skills such as reading, writing and handling the numbers. It is agreed that this sould be a good idea for any nation in the world. Analysed the long-term benefits of this investment as well as the economic outcomes that it can bring to any country will prove this.

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In the future, all cars, buses, and truck will be driverless

In the next decades, all automobiles, buses, and trucks will develop to driverless, hence, it has only passengers in these vehicles. I think the merits not outweighs the demerits, and this essay will discuss on both sites.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowdays, some people argue that an advancement in techonology has made kids lack in creativity compared with the past. While some people say that technology provides positive benefit in children's creative ideas. Although the first statement is justifiable, I believe that technology advancement in present day offering an immense benefits for creativity among kids.

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It is better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world?

With the world in a continuous economic turmoil, many of us face difficult in managing our money. Personally, I fell that saving is better than spending, and I will explain why.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Money has been an essential part in each and everyone's life from a long period. Overall, saving money for the betterment of the future has become a need. According to my opinion, I believe that it should be followed by everyone including the youth to live a fruitful and a secured life. hence, this essay will discuss my veiw points with relevant examples in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Many people nowadays spend a large of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the present day, a number of people who using smartphone in their leisure time is increase, due to a various benefits smartphone has offer to the users. I believe this phenomenon will pose catastrophic consequences to the present socity.

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Some people believe that educational qualifications will always bring success in life. Other people say that educational qualifications do not necessarily bring success. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some individuals think that a high educational qualification can be an important part of a successful life. While others think that a successful life doesn't depend on schooling. In this article, I will explain both sides.

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps illustrate the transformation of Porth Harbour in its current condition and 20 years ago. Overall, it is evident that some of the infrastructures were relocated like marina and fishing boats throughout the period, and consequently some features were added such as cafes and shops.

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