IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 491

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many people believe that today there is a general increase in antisocial behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

It is unfortunate that in the midst of vast progress in every field of life there is also a growth in the antisocial behaviour and people have become less respectful of each other. This essay intends to analyze some causes of this phenomenon and suggest some ways to ameliorate the situation.

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Education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Education and health care are basic necessities for everyone. Without proper education and health care system, no nation can prosper.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are more than approximately 5000 languages in the world, to assume. So not all languages are commonly used or spoken according to researches. And the most commonly used language is English. For which, other languages are not being practiced or spoken which is leading to extinction of some of the languages. And according to major part of the population variety of languages out there are better. I would totally agree with the major part of the population. There are the reasons:

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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why is this? Who benefits more from this, the communities or these young people?

Ostensibly, an increasing number of youngsters are inclined towards spending time volunteering in third world countries in order to provide education and shelter. There are multifarious reasons behind this such as self contentment as well as a help in their research work. Certainly, this trend assists communities more than such individuals.

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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why is this? Who benefits more from this, the communities or these young people?

Ostensibly, an increasing number of youngsters are inclined towards volunteering work in third world countries. There are multifarious reasons behind this such as self contentment as well as a help in their research work. Certainly, this trend assists communities more than such individuals.

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Some believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can benefit teenagers and the community as well . Do you agree or disagree.

Some believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community jobs in their spare time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well.

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Some people say that no one should do the same job forever, while others believe that doing the same job is beneficial for the individual company and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this fast-paced world, working in the same field become a major issue among people. Some believe that individuals should not do the same job lifetime. However, others opine that one should remain in the same post is crucial for them and society. In my opinion, one should follow the trend of the latter one. This essay will intend to discuss both the views and present my own opinion.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

Recently, the debate on whether universities should provide skills which are useful in the workplace has been heated. While some people argue that providing knowledge which is needed in the workplace is beneficial for teenagers, other claim that giving access to knowledge is the main purpose of universities. As far as I am concerned, learning useful skills may be the main function of a university.

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Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches.

Nowadays, most of the countries not prefer to go for work or travel by students studying in high school. It have disadvantages than adavantages, that will be disscussed in the further paragraphs.

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It is important for people to take risks, in both their professional lives and personal lives. Do the advantages of taking these risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There are two type of people in the world, One who take risks ,and another who try to play safe. But like many successful people says "no risk, no gain". If people do not take risk in their lives they might miss many opportunity of growth in personal and professional. This essay will explain advantages of take risks and some disadvantages.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it legal requirement. To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycled more of their waste?

The waste is really harm for human life. There are many disadvantages that able influenced the environment due to the spread of waste. Several of general public assume that it is not enough if the waste recycled from homes. While other people argue that the most useful way to increase recycling is governments should make rules. Personally, it seems to me that the good environment is not only from homes recycled but also from good regulations.

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Is it better to teach a child at home or in school? discuss the disadvantages of both topics

Nowadays, it has been a widespread argument that homeschooling is effective for children. However, others believe that school is a proper place for pupils to study. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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Nowadays on-line shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

THESE DAYS THE INTERNET HAVE TAKEN THE SHOPPING INDUSTRY BY STORM AND INCREASED THE POPULARITY OF THE ONLINE SHOPPING.THIS ESSAY DISCUSSES THE ADVANTAGES AS WELL AS THE DISADVANTAGES BEFORE REACHING A CONCLUSION.

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Some people feel that boarding schools whoare an excellent option for children while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, some parent also wants to give their son or a daughter studies at a high-quality school as enough confidence to send a child to the prestigious education system. Others supposes that the boarding school is the best choice for student. In the other hand, some people deny that suggestion for different prejudices. This statement will discuss to be clearly known.

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Nowadays on-line shopping has become more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent decades, by developing online shopping patterns, folk have been shopping online more and more. Also, the population tends to purchase goods without going outside. In this essay, both sides whether the improvement of online shopping are advantages or disadvantages.

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Some countries are struggling with increases in crime rates. Some believe that having more police on the streets is best way to reduce and combat crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a no-brainer to say that illegal activities are becoming more in this sophisticated era. It is often argued that increasing the number of police officers is the foremost option to mitigate

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Some people feel that responsibility for providing education should borne only by the government and private education should be banned. What are the main advantages of banning private education? Are there any circumstances where private education should be allowed? What is you opinion on the matter?

The responsibility for providing academic learning should be handled by the law-maker whereas individual teaching systems must be prohibited is becoming a controversial statement nowadays. In this writing, I will try to expand on both advantages and disadvantages of the controversy and then conclude the situation which may provide some ideas to sort out from it.

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some countries, some residents claim that it is essential to spent finance on building new railway lines to make the trains faster. However, some people think that the budget should be spent on public transportations which have existed.

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Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertisements are surrounding the present public which affects what people think is necessary and also have a negative impact on the population. In this essay, I will support this given statement but also mention the negative causes with relatable examples.

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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of technology and transportation. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

the chart above explaining about the export earnings between 2015 and 2016 and the percentage of each category compared with every year. Overall we can see that the export earnings from 2015 to 2016 gradually increased.

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