IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 490

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people prefer to work same job throughout thier life while others like to change jobs . Give you opinion.

Nowadays, there is tendency for most people to retain the same occupation while others would want to shift to a new job.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Healthy nutrition in today's Society is a huge topic. The amount of sugar in multiple manufactured food and drink products are an often discussed problem. It's scientifically proven that it can cause several health issues such as diabetes, high blood pressure or heart problems. Some people think that the price of sugary products should be raised so that customers are encouraged to eat and drink less sugar. I don't agree and believe that there are better ways to do so. An alternative way to eat or drink less sugar is using sweeteners. A good example of reducing the amount of the sweet sin one consumes is drinking sugar-free soft drinks instead of the original variant. You can also use a variety of sweeteners at home for instance in your yoghurt or the morning coffee. A problem is that some people have intolerances to artificial sweeteners but these are less harmful than the diseases real sugar can cause. Raising the price for goods that contain high levels of sugar w...

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Museums and art galleries should focus on works that show the history and culture of their own country rather than cultural of other parts of the works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that museums and art galleries should show the cultural value of their home country rather than other countries.I completely disagree with the formal statement. this essay will discuss it in detail in the following paragraphs.

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People who decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it are more likely to have a satisfying working life than those who change jobs frequently. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The issue of satisfying working life has polarized public opinion .Few folks opine that human should staying in one job rather than they chinging the function's frequently serves the interest that it is presance in an advantageous way , while other cliques of men divulde that it is contemptible of society or people and only brings drawbacks with it . Therefore , the main reason of this essay is throw light on the pros and the cons of this dubious matter .

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Some people believe that studying online is more effective than studying on campus while others disagree. Discuss both views.

In the past few years, many youngsters are more inclined toward studying online rather than attending classes in colleges. There are several reasons why youth tend to follow this option. In this essay, we will discuss both views and give our opinion.

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Some people believe that women should be treated as equal as men when applying for a job with police or the military.Others think women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

In bygone days, there were only a few career opportunities for women. However, as times are changing the whole scenario regarding this matter is also modified. Nowadays, it is believed by various people that women should be given an equal chance in selection for jobs that are related to army and police personnel while others are opposing this view. This essay will shed light on both the perspectives before stating my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Every individual should have the right to end his or her own life.

Normally each person should have complete right. However, some experts suspect whether every individual should have the right to end his or her own life. To this issue, many people support this practice; on the other hand, several thinkers oppose it strongly.

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In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?

Happiness is an element that everyone longs for, but not everyone can achieve this spice of life. Among them are some young adults who feel less jubilant despite their wealth, health and longevity. Several factors may drive this phenemenon, and I feel an intense need for immediate action.

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Some people think that individuals today are more dependent on each other. Others believe people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A clear, confident speaking voice is an essential life skill that fosters self esteem and personal confidence. It is widely argued that youngsters had better acquire giving speeches and make presentations while are at school curriculum. This can be determined by several factors, but I believe that these skills should actively encouraged and developed in pupils by their schools.

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Some expert believe that it is a better for children to begin learning of foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this out weigh the disadvantages.

The world has become a global village, with dialects being spoken all over the world. With this in mind, children being exposed to foreign languages at an earlier stage have an added advantage, over those who are not. The essay will highlight the pros and the cons.

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Some people believe that allowing children to male their own choices on everyday matters(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are different opinions about whether parents should let their kids decide on their daily basis and some agree to this but some are worried if this would produce self-centered people. Personally, I think that we should let them decide but this should not be on the edge.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school.

There are various different opinions on studying after high school. While some people see that it is an

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes their.

The population of this world is soaring at rapid rate and having a place to live is one of the basic necessities of humankind. As the availability of plots to build the houses in the center of the city is scarce, people have started to construct them in the suburban area far from the city. Some might argue that this trend has to be stopped to preserve the villages. I stongly agree to this view and shall elaborate on the details to substantiate my stand in the following paragraphs.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Today’s world is filled with entertainment media and gaming websites, which allures toddlers to stay alone indoors and engage in gaming activities. Some individuals might propose that urging the youngsters to participate in activities performed in groups, while few others might counterargue that these youngsters must be given freedom to engage themselves on their own. My opinion is gravitated towards the viewpoint of the latter group. I shall elaborate on both the points and substantiate my grounds in the following paragraphs.

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Do you agree that education will change a criminal?

Education is the fundamental core of human civilization, it helps people not only gain the essential knowledge, but also learn the common rules of the world, respecting lives, races, rights do matter. Education can purify the soul of a person, furthermore, it can help criminals become a better person.

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Many people believe that today there is a general increase in antisocial behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

It is unfortunate that in the midst of vast progress in every field of life there is also a growth in the antisocial behaviour and people have become less respectful of each other. This essay intends to analyze some causes of this phenomenon and suggest some ways to ameliorate the situation.

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Education and health care should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Education and health care are basic necessities for everyone. Without proper education and health care system, no nation can prosper.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There are more than approximately 5000 languages in the world, to assume. So not all languages are commonly used or spoken according to researches. And the most commonly used language is English. For which, other languages are not being practiced or spoken which is leading to extinction of some of the languages. And according to major part of the population variety of languages out there are better. I would totally agree with the major part of the population. There are the reasons:

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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why is this? Who benefits more from this, the communities or these young people?

Ostensibly, an increasing number of youngsters are inclined towards spending time volunteering in third world countries in order to provide education and shelter. There are multifarious reasons behind this such as self contentment as well as a help in their research work. Certainly, this trend assists communities more than such individuals.

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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending time in communities in poorer countries doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses. Why is this? Who benefits more from this, the communities or these young people?

Ostensibly, an increasing number of youngsters are inclined towards volunteering work in third world countries. There are multifarious reasons behind this such as self contentment as well as a help in their research work. Certainly, this trend assists communities more than such individuals.

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