IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 487

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Plastic bags plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment What time is does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals To solve this problem?

,Plastig bags packed are so harmful to the environment.How long does it take to complete the environment? What can the government and individuals do to solve this issue.

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Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create , while others struggle to survive . governments should take steps to resolve thiw unfair situation . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The art industry is a free market, which rewards only the best and government intervention would take away the incentive for hard work and perseverance and therefore rob us of some great works. For this reason I strongly disagree that governments should take steps to fix the unfair situation.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

Since the Industrial Revolution, environmental pollution has never ceased to draw public attention as well as provoke debates. Though there are various causes for this phenomenon, it is human activities that are the main culprits. In the following essay, the problems and remedies will be thoroughly discussed.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school whilw others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both ideas and give your opinion.

Some people believe that art is an important area to be explored by children at school whereas others think it is irrevalent. Let us discuss both these views before giving my opinion.

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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. what are the advantages of this trend? do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Over the last few years, The usage of Preprocessed items has increased especially among the urban population. They are used mainly because the time taken to prepare them is less and the shelf life is also more. Others prefer not to use them because they are concerned about the chemicals which are used to preserve them. They in turn have harmful effects on the body. In the below section I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using canned meals.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Nowadays, the increasing trend of working longer hours in youngsters is at his peak. Due to cut-throat competition, some are forced to work more than normal hours due to fear of loosing the job. However working extra hours has its merits, I will further discuss in my upcoming paragaraphs.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages

It is often said that people need to get risks inorder to achieve success of their lives and professional curriers. There are positive aspects and negative aspects. This essay will provide clues how taking risk will be good asset even there is some drawbacks.

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The free movement of goods across national borders has long been a controversial issue. Some people argue that it is necessary for economic growth, while others claim that it damages local industries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. You should write at least 250 words.

There is no denying fact that nowadays exports and imports of things across the borders have become debatable. Some people believe that it is a good thing whilst others consider that it damages local residents. I am in the favour of former one instead of the latter and will clarify my viewpoint in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Parents and schools are now majorly responsible for children to behave good.But that which one is supposed to take the lead is under discussion.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages??

Nowadays, education is more developed than old days in the past. In the education curriculum, foreign language is the additional subject that should be learnt by children in primary school until university. This essay will discuss about the advantages of learning a foreign language for children at primary school rather than secondary school.

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World peace is maintained through the threat of nuclear weapons. Nuclear power also provides cheap and clean energy. Therefore many people say that the benefits of nuclear energy outweigh the disadavantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of nuclear technology and give your opinion.

There is a debate concerning nuclear technology and whether its advantages outweigh its disadvantages. Although some people might think that nuclear power can be dangerous to the human beings, I would argue that it can be useful in the recent world.

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Nowadays some parents pressure their children to be successful in a specific field. What are the the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

School curriculum teaches children many subjects to prepare them for the future. Some parents think that some fields are more important than others; therefore, they force their children to be good at them. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons behind that action and argue why it is a bad decision to do.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Accepting risks is essential in both sides of people's lifes. Those sides are their works and personal lives. Taking risks has benefits for people like getting higher job positions and improving skills but it has some drawbacks which will be discussed in this essay.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Technological advancement plays a vital role in our life. Even though charge operated vehicles have been introduced in the market, public is still being adhered to run their automobiles based on petroleum or diesel. I concur with the fact that commuting via usage of natural gas should be restricted as it is leading to global warming along with the abolishment of natural resources.

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social networking.

In today’s fast-paced world, the issue of using social networking has stirred up a number of heated debates among people of different opinions as some people come up with the idea that it brings several benefits to the society, nonetheless, the remaining do not accept the idea. So that, the advantages and disadvantages of this issue will be discussed in the following paragraphs in turn.

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The best way to reduce poverty is to provide at least 6 years of free education for all children to learn to listen,read and count the number.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent yearly most heated aruguments on poverty in several nations. The main way to reduce it to provide free education to childrens for atleast six years so, that very young people can able to read, listen and count the numbers.I completely agree with the given statement. In this eassy i will explain this point in details with relevant supporting ideas and examples

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some people say that the Government should not put money on building theaters and sports stadium. Others say that they should spend more money on medical care and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Most people believe that curtural and sports should get more attention from administration, however others advocate that healthcare and education should be improved insted. In my view, medical services and education system should be of more emphasis.

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It is believed that children from countries with a high level of unemployment should be offered just with a primary education and not with a secondary education as they in any case will not get a job in the future. Do you agree or disagree?

Recruiting in a desired job is a challenging wish for graduates from universities particular, in nations where there is an insecurity to providing jobs for youngers.So, it has risen the idea that engagement in the tertiary course is a way of wasting money and time,even, if it may be right in some situations and some people allege that there is a better way to invest wealth of youth for earning income ,but ,I believe the academic education can survive the society from many problems in future such as finding a solution for insecurity job position and poverty in their country in a long time.For analyzing this idea ,I am going to bring the numbers of pieces of evidence about the deficiency of professional persons is so harmful to the community and the vast numbers of specialities can be able to produce solutions to tackle some issues such as reducing unemployment.

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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is no argument that free health service is one of the fundamentals for every government should put into priority policy.

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Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

Despite the fact that reading news on the internet is becoming more popular, some people still believe that newspapers will continue to hold the most vital position among readers. From my perspective, online news has a number of advantages which can outweigh those of traditional newspapers. That is the reason why reading news online will dominate eventually.

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