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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Financial subsidies are the most common methods for wealthy countries to solve poverty issues in other nations, however, the situation barely changed. Despite such countermeasures could achive short-term goals, there are better means of solution to cope with poverty, hence, I strongly agree with such opinions.

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Some people say that schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home

The World is getting advance day by day. People used to study in schools and universities however it is being shifted to online classes with the help of the internet and all material is available online for easy access. While some people think it is not a positive development, I think it is a great opportunity for everyone to study.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Nowadays, the world is facing a heating up global. There are so many reasons leading to global warming. This essay will analyze the root causes of global warming and then suggest remedies to protect our green Earth.

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Some people think that children should only read academic books. Others believe that reading books for pleasure is equally important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people are adamant that offspring should only read an academic records, although others think that reading report for entertainment is equally significant. In my opinion, I believe that academic books for reading are paramount,nevertheless fiction books are equally necessary too.

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The Plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

These pictures illustrate the different layouts of Grange Park when it first opened in 1920 and today. Overall, there are various new facilities and relocations from the old ones.

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In many countries traditional food is being replaced by international fast food. This has adverse effects on families, individuals and the society. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

There are moments in our life that remain in the memory for a lifetime. It could be positive events as well as negative events. Details of these moments erase from your memory after awhile and only fragmentary memories remain, like frames from an old movie. I remember a lot of positive events from my childhood, presents for birthdays from my parents, my friends and my school time. No doubt there were some negative events, failures and falls. But usually you memorize positive moments often than negative and keep them in your memory. One of the most positive and memorable events in my life was the prom in the summer of 2000.

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Nowadays many people believe that inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. why is this the case? what can be done about this problem?

Agriculture has evolved over the years, partly due to the advancement in the equipment used by farmers. However, different researches shows that despite the new inventions in the agricultural world, many individuals still suffer at the hands of starvation, in the developing and underdeveloped countries. This essay will emphasise on the reasons for food unavailability and give an insight to the solution of this rising problem.

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Some people believe that good teamwork is what makes companies successful. Others feel that it is more important to have a good leader. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people argue that one good boss is crucial to making the association most successful while some critics think that without teamwork, the company's success is doubtful. This essay will highlight some points on both arguments on this topic. I believe that an experienced chief is more important for the company's triumph.

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To achieve international sporting success, many countries build specialized facilities for the training of top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

To achieve sporting achievement in the world, most of countries contracted facilities for the training of athletes with out sports facilities that everyone can consume. In my opinion, it has been developing dramaticly in last two decades and effect myriad tournaments but it has both side.

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You are living in a city in a foreign country, and a friend from your home country is soon coming to visit you for several days. Write an email to your friend, asking him or her to bring some things from home which you need saying why you need them making arrangements to meet

Dear Nisha, I’m so glad that you’re coming to Montreal next week, as it seems ages since we last saw each other. I hope your family and girlfriend are all well. I actually have a favour to ask you, and I hope you don’t mind. The fact is that I need a few things from my parent's house, and I’d be so grateful if you could bring them along in your suitcase. The first thing is the book of maths calculations which I had in high school – don’t worry, it’s only a small book. I need this because it has all the material I studied for my exams, and I can’t get another copy here in any of the bookshops or on the Internet. The second thing is a packet of those biscuits from the bakery in my old street. I’ve told everyone here how delicious they are, and my new friends are very keen to try them! I do hope that is manageable for you, as it won’t take up much space at all. In the meantime, I’m very excited about seeing you again at the airport on Monday at midday. I’ll be in the arrival...

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These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or events. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Since previous milleniums, sporting events as Olympic Games have been visited by groups of individuals spending money on and having fun from this type of entertainment. Some people believe such events should exist in the modern culture, and others tend to think that it is not worth spending much amount of money on just watching the sport or events. This essay will examine the both views, and express a conclusion on why it is either positive or negative development.

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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

Over the years we have seen massive ignorance from humans in terms of protecting other species. We have been indulged in some grave activities like deforestation, urban development and hunting, that has endangered numerous species and even brought a few to the brink of extinction. This practice should be widely discouraged as the preservation of wildlife is of utmost importance. Steps should be taken at a higher level to discourage these inhumane practices before it becomes too late.

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With the rise of streaming services online, fewer people go to the movie theater to see film. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Today, making a lot of online application that we can see movie.With the increase of streaming services online,fewer people go to the movie theater to see film. This essay will show you there are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Argue both sides and give your opinion.

During the past years an increase in computer numbers has been observed. More and more people are using computers on a daily basis, both at work as well as at home. Therefore some may argue that computers should be used when teaching children and they should be available in classrooms. On one hand, relying on computers and their programs for teaching methods may result in many benefits, for both teaching, as well as learning. Teaching may become much easier and efficient when using computers, for example different students may be undertaking different tasks depending on their learning rate. Moreover, it is also essential for people to become comfortable with using such devices from a young age, as they have to use them in the future at work and for other purposes. Furthermore, children could potentially benefit from such resources, by acquiring new skills and techniques. On the other hand however, introducing such electric devices into classrooms may also bri...

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

These two pictures illustrate the current airport design and the layout for redevelopment next year.

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1.B.Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom. Do you agree? Use personal examples in your response.

every human need merried for the completely human life. recently, many people wasted much money of their marriage party which the bride want to show feel charmed and do anything for their wedding party with paid very expensive for facilities their wedding party. i agree with the statement because every person have decise to remember about their wedding. many people think married for live one time so many bride to decise for happy memorable for their wedding party and their do not think about the budget for their wedding party.

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Computers are being used more and more in the education .some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences . Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your opinion

Laptops are frequently used in learning. Few people believed that studying with smartphones are very helpful while some persons are pessimistic about the effect. This essay will highlight more on the good and bad results of studying with technological gadgets. My own view will be discussed while the later idea supersede the former.

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Many countries want to host international sports event, while other countries think that hosting sports events has more problems than benefits.

Nowadays, many nations are waiting on the chance to host worldwide sporting programs, while others point to the fact that such actions have more drawbacks than benefits. In my opinion, international global sports are a good opportunity for the country to show themself and after competitions put them on a map. This essay will discuss both views and give reasons for my opinion.

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Some governments say how many children a family can have in their home. They may control the number of children someone has through taxes. It is sometimes necessary and right for a government to control the population in this way. Do you agree or disagree?

goverment need tax for the organise the situation goverment in every country but goverment must be transparant to cetizen for output paid. i totally disagree with this statement because not only from children to control massive children but also could be data regular for check the number of children a family. we know taxes always family paid to goverment, but it not logical because every family is not rich, so the goverment must think about how the poor family and whether the situation family is a good or bad.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats to mankind, wildlife, and the ecosystem worldwide. This issue stems from a number of causes, and several solutions will be proposed in this essay.

There are several reasons why the temperature on the Earth has become more intense these days. The main cause is due to human activities such as building factories, driving more cars, and increasing number of airplanes. Since these activities make a significant contribution to releasing carbon footprint. For example, human burns fossil fuel to create energy, leading to the rise of greenhouse gases. Another factor is related to the act of cutting down trees in excess and damaging the natural habitats of wildlife. The atmospheric content of CO2 also depends on deforestation because trees are a huge reservoir to reduce carbon emissions.

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