IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 593

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Nowadays, people who live in cities have to encounter many problems. What are these problems? What can be done to solve these?

Nowadays, a lot of people move to city and often encounter with troubles. And I guess that people can face with problems to find accommodation and a new place for work. I think that the solution of it could that people should be more careful and before they will move to another city firstly they should find a new place for living and person who can support and help with workplace.

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world history suggests that violence and the conflict where more evident under men leadership than a female leadership.so for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership.what are your opinion on the above topic?

Nowadays, we can see through world history that violence and all kind of war conflicts were always led by men's leadership, therefore it should be the best option to choose a woman to get peace .

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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for children's future. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

I would write that it is true that many parents want schools should teach practical skills. However, important learn academic subjects than life skills. I can say that schools should teach solely academic subjects because it might contribute to their children's future.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, there are a lot of people who Studies abroad and have well-qualified degrees in such term as engineering and medicine. There are some occasions when people want to stay or left country where they trained. Some people believe that It is important to work in that country where they were educated. Other people think that there is nothing deal with that.

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Some people believe that arts like music and painting should be funded by the government. Others believe that these are important for a society and need government funding. what is your opinion?

Technological advancements in the recent times have prompted people to neglect other subjects like arts. Some people suggest that government should provide financial assistance to artists to avoid arts becoming extinct while others contest this claim. I strongly believe that given the situation, government funding is much needed. This essay will discuss several reasons and provide an explanation to justify my stance.

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Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not have strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In this globalization era consuming liquor escalating at an alarming rate. Due to this, it has been controversial, in some nations legal age of drinking but others thought not imposed laws on it. I will discuss both sides of a coin as well as elucidate my opinion.

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In some countries, university students live away from home and in another city while studying. Do you think the disadvantsges outweigh the advantages of living in another city?

I am writing this letter to you because I recently purchased an item from your virtual store but when the item reached my home it was not working as expected.

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What Is the Global Warming Crisis? - A Global Warming Solution

Global warming has a huge impact on the earth. The world has been facing many effects from global warming and I will cover these issues and some resolutions in this essay.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what Measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Global warming is considered to be one of the most pressing environmental problems which we have at the moment. Increased greenhouse gasses is the main reason for global warming and I will suggest some ideas, which governments and individuals can imply, in this essay.

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Demand for gas or oil is increasing and so finding new resources in remote and untouched area is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

The posibility of finding new sources that can supply the currently raising demand for gas and oil is becoming a priority. This is leading to considering the explotation of zones that has never been altered in the past.

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Social media badly impact our relationships. To what extent do you agree or disagree

in this contemporary epoch, social media play a major role in every aspect of our life. In fact, some people even say that it affected negatively the bonds between individuals. My personal position strongly agrees with that claim, therefore, in this essay, my supporting points will be provided along with relevant examples.

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the line graph ilustrates the supply of goods transported in the united kingdom from 1974 to 2002 by road,water,rail and pipeline.

The line graph depicts the information regarding the furniture that was shipped in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different means of transport.The data is calibrated in total oodles.

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All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects better for children's future.

Some people argue that schools should teach children skills however, as for others having a variety of subjects is better for children's future. I strongly believe that these both sides are beneficial for them. And attend to one course would be great.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences arethe key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

One of the social concerns today relates to reducing traffic accidents. Commonly suggested that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. However, others believe that it measures would be more effective in inproving road safety. In my opinion, the goverment has to strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents.

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Some people think books are losing importance as a source of information and entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think that goverment is wasting money on arts and thag money could better spent else where to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some of them are of the opinion that the government is spending more money than needed on art and this has become a serious issue of argument lately. In my opinion, it is necessary that funds should be allocated towards art in order to preserve the cultural heritage of the country and encourage young and creative artists but in a reasonable manner rather than splurging.

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The picture shows how to produce clothes from recycled plastic.

The picture shows how to produce clothes from recycled plastic. It is clear that there are a total of 13 stages in this linear process, which can further be grouped into collection, preparation and productions steps. Additionally, a range of specialized pieces of equipment are utilized in this process, although the main raw material is plastic.

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Travelling abroad is a common trend nowadays for different reasons.This essay will discuss two main reasons for this cause and point out the negative impacts that would have on Society.

Many people often in more developing countries travel more and more abroad. The democratisation of travelling for tourism in foreign countries is one of the causes of this upward trend as well as the globalization more generally, with for example the delocalization of companies abroad.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

One of the areas that governments must invest in is the transportation sector. Some people believe that they should spend more money on the railways section than the roads section. It is disagreed that governments should spend money on railways.

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Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and news events. Do you think advantage of technology outweigh the disadvantages

This day, most people using social media to stay updated to their loved ones and other people. I positively agree with this ways to communicate to others.

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