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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The development in technology has led some businesses to generate new ideas of advertisement. In order to gain more popularity many businesses make people think that their product is new some how.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

The future of AI is within reach, with the potential for automated vehicles to drive themselves. This essay supports the belief that the AI market will flourish in the near future, granting people control over these machines. It will explore the pros and cons of driverless technology.

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Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue. Give reasons and suggest some solutions.

It has been argued by many individuals that in bygone days most teenagers have done illegal activities in big cities around all over the world that is increasing continuously. This essay shall shed light upon the various reasons along with some ways to address the issues in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive ora negative development?

Over recent years, smartphones have become ubiquitous in many societies, and it is common for children to spend several hours a day using them. While some argue that this is a positive development, I believe that it is a negative trend that parents must take responsibility for.

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Every country in this world has problems with pollution and damage to climate environment. Do you think problems can be solved?

Pollution and climate change are major issues affecting cities globally, and responsibility for these problems lies not only with governments but also with individuals. By taking necessary steps, both parties can work together to save the environment.

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The number of older people is increasing. Some people think it will cause problems in their countries, others believe this group is important to the society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A rise in the number of aged people has been seen in the society. It is to be believed by some people that this age group of people does not contribute to the society by any means which will hamper the growth of the country. I have a biased opinion about the above statement which is discussed further.

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

It is true that the frequency of advertisements is rising in our daily routines

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The following plans show the layout of the university's sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment.

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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It has been a part of a debate from a decade that art as a subject is equally important while studying at school for child’s development. However, the other perception totally contradicts this idea because it results in lack of focus. This essay firmly describes both the views in the following paragraphs.

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Nowadays, education quality is very low . Some people think we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers . Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the class room . Discuss both sides.

In the modern world, the quality of education in people are decreasing . some assume that scholars should always ask questions and check their tutors' abilities. Whereas , others think that censuring the crew' capability can owing to lack of respect towards their lecturers . This essay will discuss both views along with my opinion.

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Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As the society is advancing by leaps and bounds, top priority has been given to public security due to its significance in maintaining social order. In the meanwhile, whether young criminal should be punished same as adults is debatable. Personally, I hold the opposite view about it.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The debate over whether sharing information related to science, business and academic subjects is useful or not matters. On the one hand, some people believe in publicizing information. On the other hand, others believe that such information is too valuable to be accessible to the public. I, however, tend to agree with the second group for a number of reasons. To begin with, it is vital to take the usefulness of the first group’s approach into count. It can be that for the college students to access scientific researches easily. Particularly, seniors need these resources for writing a thesis and articles in their last year of study. Moreover, it is considered that more people can be informed by having an easy access; as a result, this can increase the level of literacy and knowledge in each society. On the other hand, others are opposed to the former. They believe if ordinary people could know all the subjects in these areas, mental security of the society would b...

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People are divided in their opinion regarding if a high salary is more crucial than job comfort. I strongly disagree that gaining more money is more important than being in a satisfactory work, I will state the reasons for my view.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

it is a fact that the biggest threat to the environment is humans themselves. this essay will discuss the steps which governments and individuals should take to minimalise the damage to nature.

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Pollution is becoming a major envoronment problem. What are the causes and solutions to sole this problem?

Contamination is becoming the most environmental issue. Human products are the most reason for creating factories and factories are the reason for pollution. These days human beings can cause a lot of pollution like sound pollution , plastic pollution and a lot more reasons to create dirt and toxic things for the earth.

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Several languages die every year. Many people feel this is a positive trend and that a world with fewer languages promotes harmony and understanding between people. Analyze both sides of this argument and provide your opinion.

Some people are of the opinion that, with languages diminishing every year, it is believed have a positive impact on people by promoting more peace and compatibility amongst them. There are many pros and cons to this belief and I am of the opinion that, entire nation having a single language would certainly help in maintaining amicable relationships.

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Many people say that we now live in 'consumer societies' where money and possessions are given too much importance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to my opinion, fund and property are currently at a very high level compared to other things. To prevent this, many people are raising the value of knowledge and value in a different way so that it does not harm the growing teenagers. I believe that this is a very good result for us young public in the future. Many nations think that everything is based on cash and possessions, but they are very wrong. For example, you don't need a lot of pay to get an education. A person who wants to study can study without financial resources.

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n the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people argue that it will be unnecessary to purchase any printed newspaper or book as the advanced technology will enable people to read whatever they like online free of charge. I partly agree with this view.

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In this day and age, technological devices have affected and changed numerous aspects of our life, and education is no exception. Therefore, traditional methods have been more and more revolutionized by cutting-edge technology. However, besides the merits, it also has various consequential demerits.

Perceivably the most significant advantage of the use of state-of-art technology in education is the flexibility in time, places, etc. For instance, the corona pandemic spreading in 2020 taught us how essential this flexibility is. Moreover, online learning facility enables pupils living in far distances, especially from different countries to enroll and successfully finish useful courses offered by numerous institutes. Another area of flexibility is, of course, the interactive tools like "Moodles", which can be used by the lecturers can use them to deliver their courses to large numbers of students.

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Nowadays, people who live in cities have to encounter many problems. What are these problems? What can be done to solve these?

Nowadays, a lot of people move to city and often encounter with troubles. And I guess that people can face with problems to find accommodation and a new place for work. I think that the solution of it could that people should be more careful and before they will move to another city firstly they should find a new place for living and person who can support and help with workplace.

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