IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 607

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether children should be taught to be competitive or co-operative. While a spirit of competition can sometimes be useful in life, I believe that the ability to co-operate is more important. On the one hand, competition can be a great source of motivation for children. When teachers use games or prizes to introduce an element of competitiveness into lessons, it can encourage children to work harder to outdo the other pupils in the class. This kind of healthy rivalry may help to build children’s self confidence, while pushing them to work independently and progress more quickly. When these children leave school, their confidence and determination will help them in competitive situations such as job interviews. It can therefore be argued that competition should be encouraged in order to prepare children for adult life. On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to prepare children for the many aspects of adult life that require ...

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Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.

I hope this letter finds you in good health. First of all , Thank you so much for contacting me regarding your driving license.Here I will share with you some important tips and details for it.

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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, there has been a growing trend of people opting for cosmetic surgery to enhance their physical appearance. While it offers instant results, this can have negative consequences for their health in the long run.

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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum.

I came across a vacancy notice for part-time voluntary work in your museum. I am writing this letter to apply for the vacant part-time voluntary position in your museum.

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Looking at the task below, it's evident the way in which two different views make space between them, giving the opportunity to think and admit a personal idea, after having made a comparison and clear sentence between the first two views.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

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Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals think that the most effective ways to overcome environmental problem is to rise the price of fuel used by cars and other motor vehicles. For reducing the number of private vehicles used on road, it may be the best solution but the government should also improve its public transportation system.

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Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

There have been a lot of debates among people around the world that the importance of Science and Technology trumps that of History, and therefore should be prioritized above it in formal education. However, I wholeheartly disagree with the claim because I believe that History plays an unique role in advancing the society towards the better future.

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The best way to teach children to cooperate is through team sports at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people think that cooperation is very important to children because almost everything needs people to work together. So some people say team sport is the best way for kids to learn how to cooperate with others. In this essay, I shall explore both sides of this opinion and give my judgment to what extent I agree or disagree.

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Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying career life than those with frequent change jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Some people think that people who chase a job early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying career life than those who frequently change Jobs. I personally agree . I believe that people who chose a job early and keep doing are more likely to get satisfying career life. In this essay I will explain the reasons for my view.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors. Why is this? What can be done about this?

In the modern world, technology big impact people's lives, as well as changing human behaviour and routine base on my two main reasons below on my essay.

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Some people believe that to reduce the amount of time people spend commuting (travelling to work), parks and gardens close to city centres should be replaced by apartment buildings for commuters to live in. However, others disagree with this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many people assert that green spaces such as parks and gardens should be replaced by residential areas for enhancing family connections as well as to reduce traffic congestion, while rest of people are against it.Both the views will be discussed below.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that big corporates should not only make money, but also must have duties towards society, this essay totally agrees with this statement, I believe that the aim of a business should be beyond just making profit.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Some argue that it is important to accept negative condition. Even it’s an unacceptable job or a salary. Although, others believe that people should change those situations to accept the effect. This essay will discuss the reason and examples of this problem.

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Nowadays the majority of people are facing the problems with obesity.What are the possible solutions and how it can be tackled?

Globally,obesity is becoming a rampant issue that has been encountered among offspring and matured people.This essay will give reasons for this trend and also will provide some possible solutions to them.

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Nowadays,a growing number of people with health problem are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is now trendy to select medical treatments aside from doctors when people facing sickness,such as newly invented tablets or recommended by friends. However, I do believe this pose an overwhelming threat to individuals' health condition. Some elaborated reasons as well as my thoughts will be outlined in the essay.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about the reasons of studying foreign languages. While a group believe that traveling or finding jobs may be the main cause of it, some others think it can have other causes. I argue that it depends on a lot of motives.

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It is important for children to learn what is right and what is wrong at any early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn the distinction. To what extent do you agree? What sort of punishment should be given?

It is clear that children’s tendency toward misbehaviour should be controled, thus I belive that ought to beeing some penalty for preventing kids from inclining to wrong ways are necessary.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problem will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

Many developed countries are experiencing substantial increases in life expectancy. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.

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Many people opine that all university students should study whatever they like, whereas some people think the university should teaching some subjects that only related to science and technology for students. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most controversial issues around the world is education.Meanwhile,some people think,students should select their field of studywhatever they like.but,the second group believe,they should learn the lessons that they are useful and beneficial for their future.I strongly believe,students should learn subjects that they are interested in.In this essay I will discuss both view with some examples and I will give my opinion.

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