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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Being selfish is considered a reason for job success? Give your opinion. Reasons with examples

The secret of being good at the job is to become a selfish person. I totaly disagree with this statement as to become sucess, an employee need to have a good teamwork and good working environment.

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Compared to the past, more people are now studying abroad because it is more convenient and cheaper than before. Do you think this is beneficial to the foreign student’s home country?

Nowadays, with countries connecting closer with each other, more and more students choose to study abroad, whcich leads to a discussion that whether the phemomenon is beneficial to the student's home country. It depends on each countries' conditions, which can be influenced by their population, their economic and their policy. To most of countries, it does have some benefits.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued whether girls and boys should study in separate schools or they should attend mixed schools. Although studying in separate schools help both genders to stay more focused towards their goals, I believe that co-educational schools help them to learn how to treat opposite gender in a respectful manner.

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Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not fuction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

When it comes to living in society, some would argue that the existence of rules and laws is pivotal otherwise people would do whatever they wish for. In my opinion, however, it would be possible to live in a society which does not have any laws as we do have ethics and moral already in us.

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all cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric car should replace them. Do you agree or disagree ?

In the world, nowadays, electric vehicles should substitute any car that uses fossil fuels such as diesel, petrol and others. Personally, I believe that using electric cars could

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The use of corporal punishment (physically hitting students) in schools is in decline, yet it should be used to improve behaviour. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is a debateable issue in teaching process to teach student to be good in attitude. While applying physical punishment on student cannot be applied in school due to rejection, this option could be the way to improve children manner. I really disagree by introducing physical punishment in learning process at school because there are many alternatives to increase student mindset to be good.

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

New houses are essential because of increased population, however only villages are the left out places to construct them. It is believed that the natural environtment in rural area to be reserved and should not have any buildings over there. I agree with this point of view and this essay discuss both of them before stating my opinion.

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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays the growth in demand on an online version of books causes the fall for paper ones. I am opinionated that this an edge-cutting innovation can brings series of benefits such as easy access into people’s lives, while others believe there are more drawbacks.

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Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to work harder. Do you agree?

It is thought that head managers have to offer a long holiday for employees in order to fulfill their complex tasks. In this essay, this topic will be discussed in addition to my opinion.

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In recent times, economic growth has helped many become richer, both in developed and developing countries. However, those in developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past. Why is this? What can be learned from this? (Write 250 words.)

Many people in the world want to be wealthy. They take time to work and develop their country for a good life and facilities. That is the reason in the present time there is much economic growth. And then after economic growth that gives people life easier and richer than the past. But sometimes so much money does not mean a good life. It has two main reasons that I think about the paragraph below.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reason for this? How can people research this?

In many nations there are large number of individuals that are giving attention to the past of the building they are staying in. There are many motive for this, mainly it is the curiosity of the individuals. Moreover, it will help them understand the architecture if they want to remodel it. People can gain knowledge about it by discussing with civil engineer and researching it online.

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has a negative impact on families, individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fast food is quite popular among the world, as a result, conventional cuisine are replaced by fast food in many nations. This trend has an adverse effect on society, families and individuals. I strongly agree with this statement and this essay will discuss it briefly for the following reasons.

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More and more parents allow their children to play on computers as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development overweigh the disadvantages?

These days, more and more people incorporate technology devices in many different context in their life, no exception for parents. They start to think some advantages for their children and let them exploring deeply, especially on computers since very young age. In my point of view, although there is some negative consequences but the positive effects overweigh them.

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Many people think that it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or the blue whale. To what extent you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, a lot of individuals believe that using finances for helping animal species that are in danger, for example the tiger or the blue whale, is a waste of funds. While this may be accurate to some extent, I personally believe that we can use the money in other ways that would benefit society such as for the people in need and restructuring the country’s weaknesses that may be corruption, low salaries and poor arranged places.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In our modern era, by developing new technologies people undertake to spend more time on phones. Reseaches suspect that young generation prefer to communicate online than spending time face to face. In this, essay I would give my way of thinking, and give possible solutions and measures which can reduce the time teenagers spent on phones.

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that keeping wild animals in a zoo is arguable. Some people think the animals should be kept in zoos, while others think they should live in their natural habitats. In my humble opinion, the zoo should not exist, and the elaboration will be covered in the following essay.

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Do you think it is better for students to work before their university studies? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

In my opinion, it is appreciated for students to work before enrolling in university. There are many benefits to doing it. I will discuss my mentality in this essay.

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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps demonstrate the same public park called Grange Park from its 1920 opening and its present version.

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In modern times, young adults are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

In contemporary world, youths prefer to spend time in their friends circle rather than with their families. The main reason why this situation appeared could be the vast difference between generations. I don’t think that children should be forced by parents to spent more time with them at home because it would be not a quality pass-time due to lack of pure willing from the young people.

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Logging of the rain forests is a serious problem that may lead to the extinction of animal life s and human life What are the causes of deforestation and what can be done to reduce its dangers?

Nowadays, deforestation is the serious problem in the world.It is true that this can be cause of several issues.Especially it may lead to the extinction of animal life and human life. This essay will focus on why logging of the rainforest is a serious complication for humans and animals.

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