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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that is best to accept a bad situation. Such as unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that is better to try and improve such situations Discuss both these views and give your opinion

It is an undeniable fact that situations do not favour us in every chapter of our lives. So, we as human beings must try to adapt and improvise in every scenario presented to us.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

According to many, both sexes education require segregation of schools whereas others against it. This essay clarifies how religion and culture can lead to the different types of schools. However, mix sex institutions can contribute significantly and eliminate bias in certain male dominated professions.

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In countries with a high rate of unemployment, numerous pupils should do offered only predominant education. There is no point in offering secondary education to those who have no hope of finding a job. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Job scarcity with the increasing unemployment percentage is a significant concern in numerous nations. The ministry does not encourage the community to take secondary academic and thought it is not constructive for the community with populations with no hope of finding a job. I am afraid I entirely have to disagree with this short-sight. In general, the government should do all its part to ensure that as many societies finish high school and university as possible.

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Some people think that government should provide free education at every level. However, some say that individuals should pay for their university education. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Education has been the most important part of life and government plays a vital role to ensure education to every child. Some people think that education is the right of all citizens and it should be provided at no cost at primary level, secondary level and university level while other people think that the cost of education at university level should be paid by students.

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According to research, the current stocks of fish in the world's seas are becoming more and more reduced. Why is thie happening? What can be done to change this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

Recent survey by national geographic channel to emphasis on the importance of preserving living creatures in sea water especially fishes was done. The survey shows that there has been a steady decline in the number of fish in the world sea. And they have pointed out major reason for its decline.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that a person’s personality and cultural background could possibly be identified by how they choose clothes. This essay agrees with the statement because of the importance of clothes in different cultures, and the fact that clothes are often chosen based on personal taste and preference.

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some people believe that allowing children to make their own choice on every matters is likely to result in a society of individual who only think about their own wishes. other believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them.

Children are in the state of growing up life, learning new things, making their own decisions. There are many people in the society think that allowing children to choose whatever they want by their own may cause them to become an individual person, think about only themselves. However, Some people argue that this would be a significant area where children can learn the consequences from their decision. Both of these views will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.

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In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

In recent times, where education plays a vital role in an individuals life, majority of highly educated professionals are being migarting to developed nations, as they are getting highly paid salaries. Not only skilled professionals but also labour workers are also flying to other countries where real estate business is dominant industry, so that they could be well paid compared to their own country. This essay, will discuss about the effects and solutions regarding the migration of skilled professionals.

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Social Media websites have amassed large user bases, and have become the sole source of information for their users. Do the advantages of being a part of a social media site outweigh the disadvantages?

Web content has become one of the primary sources of information related to any issues across the globe, which provides sources not only through websites but also by a various numbers of mobile applications such as Twitter, Instagram, Whatsapp. As these apps have of a huge number of followers so that, there is a higher possibility to spread news fastly as well as effectively. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of publicity through the internet.

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In many countries today, people in big cities prefer to live alone or in small family units rather than larger, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays there is a trend that numerous people accommodate alone or with small number of family. Some people think that it is a positive circumstance, whereas others believe that living alone can be a dangerous decision. In this essay, I will compare advantages and disadvantages and contend that this trend affects positively on society.

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A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a spurce of problems if it is not well-managed. what are the advantages and disadvantaged of tourism in the modern world?

In many countries around the world, tourism makes up 57 per cent of their financial income. As beneficial as this may seem tourism has some drawbacks to be considered. The question that remains is whether the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or not? This will be explained in further detail in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are many traditional or religious festivals around the world. However, in modern society, some people have forgotten the meaning behind them and their focus is on enjoying themselves. It is clear that individuals should not forget the reasons of those festivals and they need to try to pass onto the next genelations how to celebrate them.

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Many people say that the use of animals for the purpose of experiments is cruel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

In modern society, medical technology has been improving because many animals are used for the purpose of experiments. Although there is a belief that this trend is cruel, it is clear that using animals for experiments is necessary in order to save human lives.

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Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Nowadays, many people opt to live in an apartment rather than living in a house. Because the apartment is relatively safe and convenient.In contrast, others believe that a house is more place and multiple rooms. Clearly, living in an apartment has more benefits than drawbacks.

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“Developed countries have a higher obligation to tackle climate change than developing countries” Discuss the extent to which you agree with this statement

There is a growing debate that developed nations have more responsibility to help the problem of climate change than those developing countries. To a large extent, I agree that international countries should help more on tackling the environment change. However, there are few factors to be taken into consideration before agreeing that. Therefore, the following paragraphs will outline the argument of countries’ duty on solving climate change.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems, To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Living in a foreign country or ven visiting a foreign homey can be joyful,until language is not a barrier to us.Most of us have might go through this situation.And it can cause social or practical problems for us.

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the information about buying coffee and tea and drinking habit of people in five various Australian cities.

The given bar chart illustrates the information about buying coffee and tea and the drinking habit of people in five various Australian cities. Overall, the number of people who bought bot coffee and tea was the most in all five cities.

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Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. So companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women.

Historically, females were viewed as homemakers, accordingly, they were constantly given meaningless jobs, and didn't have a chance of being managers or professionals. I believe that this stereotype has already outlived itself and is old-fashioned. Women should not be treated inferior to males, mostly when they have the similar, if not better, capability to do work as men. Reports say that women are better in academics, but organizations ignore this.

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The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. School should cut art and music out of the cirriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree?

The central reason behind education is mastered in the modern world. Children pay more attention to necessary or favourable subjects that are related to modern technology due to art and music should be cut out of the curriculum. While I am in total disagreement with this notion that these kinds of subjects, for instance, music and art should be cut out of the education program for involving students in technological disciplines, but I agree that in the modern world students must have special interest for the IT.

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Many People like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or bad thing?

Today youth are following and wants to wear trendy clothing because of the different brands that are getting attracted by all ages without gender difference. In my opinion,i believe that this change is a good or bad thing will outline the discussions further in the essay.

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