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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In the past, shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is a positive trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Every day, millions of people go out to do shopping, it is an activity that you can do everywhere, alone or with some friends and there are many kinds of research which explain how this thing can relax the body and mind. Some years ago, “shopping” was considered merely buying groceries, but in these years is more than this, and for many people shopping is a lifestyle. In this essay,I will discuss why I strongly believe this is a negative trend for society

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A lot of social problems can these days be related to teenagers. Some feel that this is because parents are not able to spend enough time and take care of their teenage child. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in the modern society frequently community issues are linked to young generation.Many believes that the main cause of youngs unsocial behaviour is the wroung parrenting.

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Many believe that living in a city offers greate benefits compared to life in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Life in a city is considered to be more beneficial than life in countryside. In my opinion, I disagree that urban life has more advantages than rural life.

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young people are often influanced in their behaviours and situations by others of the same age. This is called "peer pressure". Do the Disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

In this fast-paced era, youngsters follow their surrounding people, who are in the same age group and then change their behaviours and attitudes. This is known as "peer pressure". There are both merits and demerits to this situation. If asked, the demerits are surpasses the merits. My inclination is discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It was true that there were plenty of fashion products which had very expensive prices. Some people agreed that fashion items were costly since they played an important role in daily life.

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Many young people leave school with a negative attitude towards learning. What are the possible reasons for this? Suggest some solutions to address this problem.

Now a days its has been noticed that majority of Youth Generation complete their Schooling with negative attitude for new learning.In this Essay I will explain why this thought comes in their mind and what are the best possible way to outcome their view towards School Learning.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given pictures illustrate changes that will take place at the site of an airport after renovation next year. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that more gates will be added, and a sky train across the gates will replace a walkway. In addition, some new facilities will be constructed for convenience.

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Nowadays more and more people are using media like TV or online platforms to read news instead of reading newspapers. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

It is true that, in late years, as the internet has developed, people stopped reading newspapers and they start use media like TV or online platforms to read news. There are a number of benefits and drawbacks of this development.

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Individuals cannot alleviate the poverty that exists in the world; it is the responsibility of governments. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, poverty is a big issue and problem in most of the co

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In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered effective ways of maintaining links with the past. How effective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past

In recent decades, a number of nations consider that it is efficiently and effectively possible for individuals to maintain connections with the past through wearing traditional clothes or costumes.

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e-books comes the decline in the paper books. what are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

E-books comes the decrease in paper books. Some of the advantages are people can carry electronic books all the time in their mobile phones and they are cheaper; however, the drawbacks are that readers can not touch them and they might feel uninterested in reading.

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To many people do not know their neighbours. What is this? What can be done about it?

Nowaday, fewer and fewer people keep in touch with their neighbors. Especially the youngsters, some of them do not even know how people who live near teir house look like or have any oinformation of them. In this essay, I will discuss about the issue and give solutions.

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Look at the diagram about the metamorphosis of a frog. (Metamorphosis is the process by which an animal changes its form as it matures)

The diagram illustrates the life cycle process of how a frog changes its morphological features as it matures. In general, there are five stages in the metamorphosis cycle experienced by a frog. In the process, its stages are categorized into their habitat, in the water and in the land, respectively.

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The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in the lives of famous people? Do you think this is a good thing?

In recent days, it is undeniable that the media has paid more attention to famous people in a society, moreover, who have a modest background. Given this situation, this trend may be accompanied by a reason and I believe this is a positive trend in society.

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Violence levels are increasing in USA. Guns are allowed to use. Is that a possitive fact? give your opinion

Nowadays, in some countries like the USA, having a gun at home is allowed, this fact causes citizens insecurity, since these can be obtained in stores that sell to anyone that want it.

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some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they are playing well. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no denying the fact that the main impact of athletes is arguable. While it is a commonly held belief that professional athletes must behave in front of the public because of their popularity. However, others argue that as those sports athletes winning the games, it is ok to behave badly. From my perspective, I strongly believe that sports athletes must behave in an immensely respectful way. This essay will shed light upon why I believe this.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working days or in the free time,and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise ?What can be done about this problem.

Undoubtedly Exercises keep an individual healthy.Recently it has been found that the majority workers practice very less or neglect to fitness exercise during the working days or they're relaxation time as a consequence to that, detrimental to health.,Personally I believe that the hectic works and long working hours are the two main reasons why these employees are reluctant to this.

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People have different ways of escaping stress and difficult of modern life. Some read, some exercise, others work in their gardens. What do you think are the reasons for stress? What are the best ways of reducing stress?

Most people think that in advance life there are several ways of escaping from stress . More of them are read books and some do exercise , a farm in a garden or busy in other places.Of ,course most of the reasons for stress and we also low our strain due to some physical strength.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world go hungry. What can be done about this problem?Why is this the case?

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It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that a family plays the most significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that today's young people have been directly affected by a variety of factors, which results in thier development. While it is considered by many that phenomenon is due to the emergence of media, pop culture, others believe that it depends on their family or parents. In my opinion, while the cause of modern society has significantly paved the ways youngsters live these days, everyone should be well-prepared and flexible.

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