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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

Some individuals are used to buying their children whatever they ask and permitting them to do whatever they want. In my personal point of view, it is a bad habit. In this essay, I will support my ideas with strong arguments and write about bad consequences.

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some people believe tahat professionals,such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the counrty where they did their training.Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is many question and beliefs that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in their own mainland and other say they were free to go to another nation as they wish.

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Noawdays online shopping becomes more popular than in-store shopping. Is it a positive or a negative development?

Comparison between online shopping and in-store shopping nowadays, mostly,online shopping being highlighted among both two factors.looking into ,both facts,development can be seen as positive and negative.

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some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to helo other people. do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are many reasons why people are being rich and becoming richer. I agree persons have an opportunity to help other individuals are one of the ways to remain wealthy.

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Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits of this outweigh the problems?

Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits of this outweigh the problems?An increasing numbers of students are deciding to relocate abroad for further education. In my opinion, i believe this approach will be beneficial, because it gives them the opportunity to acquire more knowledge and experience, that they could not get in their home country.

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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What are the reasons for this? What in your opinion can be done about it?

Recently the unemployment among the qualified people has increasesed in numerous counties of the world.Unbalanced economic policy and the lack of skill in particular job can be the two main reason for this problem.This essay would disscuss about these problems and solutions for this issue.

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Tourism is increasing day by day in nations. What are the affects on environment by tourism and what are the solution to curb these problems?

Nowadays a lot of people love to travel and explore different parts of the world thanks to inter-continental connectivity.Tourism is growing in nations on daily basis and it is also affecting our atmosphere.This essay will explain some causes of how tourism affects our environment however it will also suggest some viable solutions.

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University students often focus on one subjects . However , some people think that universities should encourage students to learn a range of other subjects . To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Today, more students are only one subject in universities . But , some might argue that colleges should motivate scholars to learn more than one module in their academics and I strongly agree with this statement because it provides a lot of details about different things and it can also use in their job perspective sector too.

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provide examples about self drive that demonstrate particular skills and abilities (competencies) that are important to your future success as a Manaaki New Zealand Scholar.

I have joined a writing movement named 30haribercerita on Instagram since 2017. It gathers Instagram users to write every January for 30 days. The evaluation of my writings is based on the number of stories reposted. This way helps me to assess the quality of my writing. One day, I demand something bigger than just that movement. I decided to join a writing class hosted by an Indonesian novelist named Okky Madasari. I am always hesitant about my writing and feel doubt to avoid judgment.

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Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

whereas some people believe that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money, others suppose that these are necessary for individuals and the society. in this essay I will argue both opinions and after that I will inform my own opinion.

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Young people are often influenced by their peers. This is called peer pressure. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

To introduce, presently into the society, youngsters can easily be convinced by their know people on the same group. However, this has a good effect at the same time, there has a number of bad effects.

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Some people think that spending a lot on holding wedding parties, birthday parties and other celebrations is just a waste of money. Others, however, think that these are necessary for individuals and the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Someone believes that celebrations like a wedding celebration, birthday event and others use a lot of budget to pay for them. On another hand, someone believes that is it very common in communities. In my opinion, I think positively in two ways. This essay discusses both two points of view.

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What are the major problem in city and how can the government deal with it

Unfortunately, there are many complications in cities, and the authority should deal with them. In this essay, I will inform how can the union deal with it.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without any payment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

A large number of have people have some consideration about paper books and newspapers will not be purchased because of e-books and papers.E books and papers are easy to get and can read free.

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Some people say that main environmental problem of our time is thye loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are other important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and your opinion.

According to various surveys conducted in past, we come to a conclusion that our environment is at stake in current times due to many factors, one among which are the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Nevertheless, there are various other important factors contributing to it as pointed by some other people. I will discuss both the views in the below paragraps and highlight my say on this topic.

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Robots‌ ‌can‌ ‌free‌ ‌people‌ ‌from‌ ‌difficult‌ ‌and‌ ‌dangerous‌ ‌work.‌ ‌However,‌ ‌some‌ ‌people‌ ‌are‌ ‌worried‌ ‌about‌ ‌the‌ ‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌ ‌robots‌ ‌may‌ ‌create. ‌‌Discuss‌ ‌the‌ ‌benefits‌‌ ‌of‌ ‌using‌ ‌robots‌ ‌and‌ ‌the‌ ‌‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌‌ ‌from‌ ‌it.‌ ‌

Modern technology and development these days have created plenty of solutions to make peoples' lives better, robots can be an obvious example to this. Some works can be described as dangerous or error-forbid works, so, robots are the proper helpful tool in such cases. On the other hand some people have their concerns about entering robots to our lives, specially when programmers start applying AI on these robots which can lead to bad sequences.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different opinions regarding education nowdays. Even though some of them consider that students should chose their path according the needs of society, I disagree with that opinion. From my point of view, everyone should have an opportunity to choose their profession.

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Some people say that it is the responsibility of the citizens to take care of the environment. While others say that it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss both the views and state your opinion.

Our surroundings to a large extent reflect our personalities. How it's been catered for depends on individuals or the governing authorities. A lot of people are of the opinion that people should be responsible for tending to their environs whereas another group opine that it is the duty of the government to ensure adequate running of the environment. This essay will be discussing both views and my thought concerning this topic.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is said that nobody will buy printed books or newspapers in the future because all of us will have access to online reading with any information we need without paying. In my opinion I agree with this statement because we live in information age when people accustomed to using the internet.

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Animals are kept in zoos all around the world. Zoos are used as a tourist attraction by most countries which requires wild animals of different species to be present there, I think zoos are not a place to keep wild animals and they should be kept in their natural habitat.

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