IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 703

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Children have more and more tests and exams to do at school, sometimes starting from the age 5 or 6, right up until age of 18. What are the advantages and disadvantages of making children do exams?

Exams has been a measuring tool in almost all the education systems in the world for more than a century. There are many metods of such examinations where the students in diffrent ages are tested for a set of pre defined objectives. The most common question asked by many is, does exams and tests measure the students capability equally ?, However continous examninations in schools has serious advantages plus disadvantages as discussed in the below sections.

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In today's world, the spread of computer use has changed our way of living so that people can buy many things through the Internet. Discuss some advantages and disadvantages of Internet shopping.

It is irrefutable that online shopping has changed our life in a good way; however, it has some negative effects on people's lives, too. In this essay, I will write about pros and cons of this trend.

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Most people these days prefer getting news online to reading newspapers or watching TV. Do you think it is a positive development?

In the olden days, newspapers and television were the only source of information to people. But now, times have changed. The internet has gained a monopoly in this domain. Newspapers and television are swept away by the giant tide of the internet. In my opinion, this is not a positive development. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall explain the reasons for the same. Primarily, newspapers are authentic sources of information. If they mishandle the content, they are liable to be sued on a defamation case. So they are more likely to be responsible when writing news. News writers are supposed to write in good language. So the reader’s knowledge of the language improves over a period of time. Besides they also have crosswords, puzzles and various other things apart from news. Also, they have a column where the reader can pen his views. So it gives the chance for the reader to ponder over social issues and make his contribution; however small it may be. They have a dedicated ...

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The pie chart compares the percentage of three unhealthy ingredients Sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in typical meals.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The working environment is different from one workplace to another. Is working in the same job location preferable more than working in a different place or the opposite is more chosen? I opine that working with the same organization has various advantages in terms of habituated persons and location, and more comfortable for psychological health.

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It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is considered by many individuals that marriage is not a good decision before even completing the

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Some say that music, art and drama are as important as other school subjects, especially at primary level. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some that the students at primary school must be taught creative subjects such as painting, music, and acting along with English, mathematics, and social science. This essay support the above nation, and it will firstly discuss how art-related subjects help children choose their stream and why other subjects are also essential for them.

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Why do I want to study in the university of sapienza

Buongiorno! In this letter I will try to explain my huge motivation to study Bachelor’s Degree in Business Administration at Sapienza University.

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Many people are choosing to move to cities. Why is this happening? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

There has been a remarkable increase in the number of people who prefer to go to a city to live there. Where as some people believe that living in a city has more positives while it is debatable, I would argue that why the negatives of such a trend outweigh the positives.

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Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and human experience whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is a waste of time and resources Discuss both these views and give your opinion

The subjects of which a student should be taught in school is always a debatable topic, therefore it is argued that subjects like music should be removed from the syllabus and give space for more useful subjects. It is my belief that the advantages of keep music as a mandatory subject in school outweigh the disadvantages and music as a subject must be a priority among the syllabus.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects?

The discussion of food supply has become the most crutial topic to be spoken as growing people around the world.There are some people who thing that eating the insects will meet the needs for there dietic dependency,on the other hand there are croud who supports that edible insects are having some negative impacts on health as well have difficulty in cultivating them.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays in four corners of this tumultuous world, in some of countries people prefer to buy a house or an apartment substitute to renting that. In my solid opinion it is a repercussion of the price volatilities meanwhile it is a positive situation.

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students at school and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources( such as internet and television). to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, undergraduate students spend more time on smartphones and television even whilst in class, thus, they learn most lessons from the internet, although some people are in diverse opinions. I strongly agree with this statement.

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Some people say that every human being can create art, for example painting. Others think only the people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both view and give your opinion?

There has been debates about inborn talents versus skills acquired through practice since the beginning of time. Some are of the belief that artistic talents are something that a person was born with, whereas others think that it’s something that can be achieved through determined training and hardwork. This essay intends to analyze both perspectives. I personally believe that artistic knack is a combination of both hardwork and talent.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not Get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

In today's world, people dedicate a lot of time to work and do not alocate much dedication to do exercise on their free time. This behaviour has negative effects in their health conditions. However, there is a series of changes that can be done to improve this situation and I will explaing them next.

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There are several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce, and money is the most important reason/factor. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this passage, we are going to discuss about the several factors that motivate people to stay in the workforce and is money the most important reason or factor for this. In my opinion, yes money is the most important factor for many people to stay in the workforce.

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As the world becomes technologically advanced, computers are replacing people at more and more jobs, What are some job positions that may be lost because of computers? What are some problems that may result from this situation.

Computers have become an integral part of our lives than ever before. With the advancement in technology, it will be no surprise if more and more jobs are replacing people with computers. The jobs that see this trend have a similar nature and such replacement of manpower will have its consequences when exercised at a magnitude.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

In today's society, many people believe that the only principal reason of happiness is having a lot of money. On the other hand, it is important to have into consideration other aspects in life that contributes to it. In this essay I will describe how money can contribute to have a more pleasure live and I will mentione other positive concepts that contribute to this.

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You recently made reservations for dinner at a very famous and expensive restaurant in town. However, the meal and the service were terrible. The restaurant manager was not available to solve the problem, so you left without a resolution. State what problems you had with the food you ordered. Complain about the service. Describe how you want the restaurant to resolve the problem to your satisfaction.

I am writing to let you know about My experience regarding dining in at your restaurant yesterday . Even though,I have visited your restaurant multiple times , never ever faced food issues like this .I reserved a dine-in with my family and friends where there is a lot of forwaiting time though booked a reservation prior to that .The soup which we ordered was cold and the vegetables inside the soup are uncooked , appetizers which we ordered were stale looks like all items are not up to mark.

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Some people think that tourists should follow the traditional customs of the host country. Do you agree or disagree?

Presently, a sizable group believes that local traditions and customs should be complied and not neglected by overseas travelers. In this essay, I will give reason why I concur with this statement. Firstly, I will explore how local traditions can assit to learn more about culture, and secondly, I will consider conrecte laws related to customs.

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