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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that the Internet becomes more and more popular nowadays and more people read news on it, but newspapers will remain the most important source of news. I partly agree with this view.

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Some sports are extremely dangerous for those who play them. Why do people participate in such sports? What measures could they take to minimize the risk involved?

All of people prefer to play games without age limit. As well as, sports give us a lot of benefits such mental relaxations, increase fitness. However, adventure sports may be life threating. Therefore, ensure paragraphs of this essay will discuss reasons for play adventure sports and how keep safety of players.

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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

More and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. I completely disagree that newspapers still become the most important source of news.

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Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that these days the experience is the priority to get a well-paid job position, but at the same time we can not underestimate the importance of knowledge.

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Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.To what extend do you agree?

In this present scenario,It is commonly seen that, there is an ever increasing number of people who desired to learn more about the history of their residence. Living in a contemporary society individuals are showing more interest in investigating the background of their accommodation. This essay will first outline the reasons why people are becoming more interested in their ancestor’s hoise history including used materials, and then it will explicate how to find information by simply asking local residents and researching in community libraries or online.

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Giving lecture in auditorium to large number of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

There are various methods of teaching for teaching staff to adopt including practical lessons, lectures, online, presentations, seminars, etc. However, the method of teaching to be adopted depends on the type of students being taught as well as the teacher's personal experience with the particular method of teaching.

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At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of younger adults, compared with the number of older.

It is true that nowadays some society have a large number of younger generations and it provides the country with many benefits over the increasing the older generation.

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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

Most people nowadays believe that the younger generation can do some volunteer work in their leisure time because this will be fruitful for society. In my opinion, I agree with this belief as described in the following paragraphs.

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Many children are encouraged to do part time work by parents? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Many parents believe that encouraging their own children to do a part-time job besides their school will help them to grow as credible members of society, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of a child's job and provide a logical conclusion. I believe that young people's work has more advantages than drawbacks.

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Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

One part of society opines that we need much more strict laws to persuade people to recycle their waste from homes because they think it's not satisfying what's happened these days. I strongly agree with them and I also think that nowadays it becomes even more vital because of the lack of sufficient consideration about our resources and the environment. In this essay, my opinion will be explained.

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Some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product ( such as cell phone) or service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?

Now a daNow a days everything is over pricing not only for the laxarious product but also daily needs. I strongly believe pricing is import for buying any type of goods.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The subject about what should people do after school sparked much debate between individuals. I tend to believe that it is important to apply into university straight after school to get education you need and only later on start working. Other people believe differently. In this essay I will argument both views and explain my opinion.

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It is now possible to order almost any item over the internet and have it delivered to one's home. As a result people are no longer patient or careful in their shopping habits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is no question that we are in a consumerism society nowaways. People has become impatient and incautious because of the convenience of online shopping; anything can be purchased and delivered without anyone step out from a house. This essays agree with the aforementioned statement and will provide several reasons before the conclusion is reached.

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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex school have disadvantages later in life. To what extend do you agree?

Nowadays, parents have their own choice to send their kids to a single school or co-educational school. However, certain people believe that single-sex school are not for good apply students as compared to co-educational schools.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?

I totally agree with the statement that the internet has changed the world significantly. It has also various consequences and benefits to using the internet.

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In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex school have disadvantages later in life. To what extend do you agree?

Nowadays, parents have their own choice to send their kids in single school or co-educational school. However, certain people believe that single-sex school are not for good to students as campare to co-educational schools.

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Young people are often influenced by others in the same age in their behaviour and situations. This is called "peer group pressure". Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

The contribution of overweight children to humans are is visible to everyone. Nowadays, childrens are dependent of unhealty food and watch TV. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and come to a logical conclusion.

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Some people say young people should be completely free to choose their future job but others think young people must be more realistic in their choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Mrs Monica Kullan Senior Nurse practitioner University of Marchbank Health centre Hillsdunne Rd Marchbank 30 August 2019 Dear Mrs Kullan Re: Mr Jake Peterson, aged 18 I am writing to introduce Mr Jake Peterson,who is about to start studying at Marchbank University.He presents with hair loss and with associated depression and anxiety. He requires regular monitoring and special exam arrangements. Initially, Mr Peterson presented with hair loss and anxiety when he was 13. He was referred to a trichologist and was prescribed steroid cream. However, his condition has worsened and discontinued the medication. After four years,his condition stabilized with some hair regrowth. In December 2018, Mr Peterson visited again with the same aforementioned complaints associated with a significant weight loss of 6 kilograms over the last two months. Although he was advised to consult the doctor, he opted to try homoeopathic remedies. After two months, he has no progress and reported that...

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

A good community spirit be promoted by various means, including prefer rent their homes than buying them. Nowadays, humans are choose on the mercy rent. This essay will both sides either a positive and a negative situation.

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Does modern technology make life more convenient or was life better when technology was simple?

We live in the technological era, in which the internet has become part of our life. Modern technology makes life brilliant. Past technology did not have more features compared to present technology.

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