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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The continued rise in the worlds population is the greatest problem faced by the humanity at the present time What are the causes of this continuous rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by the humanity?

The great increase in the worlds number of human's is the geatest issue presently. i totally agree with this opinion that continous rise of the global population of human-beings is the greatest problem.

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First impressions are more important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing good job? To what extent do you agree?

Careers can be flourished if someone is getting a good job of influencing the interviewer in the first place. Most people believe that performing well in an interview is the turning point in order to securing employment. In my opinion, facing an interview with great confidence and giving the best can lead to securing the job. However, there are other important aspects which really matter such as educational background, work experience and skills etc. It is commonly believed that, the first impression really matters when facing an interview, and then conversing with an interviewer decides why someone will get a job? An interview is a mode of evaluation of the candidates' credentials and how he or she reacts to the questions. For example, in an interview most of the time, candidates might ask to solve any task related to their field, and if they fail to provide solutions or explanations they might them reject. That is why performance in the interview really plays a vital role in ge...

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In most of the countries, people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. Do the advantages overweigh disadvantages of renting a home?

Most people prefer to have their own home since it could offer security and safety. However, thinking logically which one is more convenient? and renting a house has more advantages than buying one?

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Topic: Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that women are less competitive than men naturally. I totally agree with this opinion and think men are naturally doing better than women.

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Families who do not sent their children to government-financed schools should not be required to pay taxes that support universal education. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Education is a primary need in society. Making it a business will not hamper the student but also might destroy many lives. Tax is important for growth in states. No tax might leads to stopping the growth of a nation. Everyone is bound to pay the government, even government employees pay the tax. Let me throw some lights in detail.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

In this contemporary epoch, It is proclaimed by some people that children should opt group activities in their leisure time whereas others have differing views that instead of, juveniles should understand to keep themselves busy solitary. Both the views holds their own significance, this essay would discuss both the views and deliver my opinion in a nutshell.

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It is often argued that National Holidays should be celebrated while others suggest the government's investiments should be spent in public services

It is often argued that National Holidays should be celebrated while others suggest the government's investments should be spent in public services. I strongly believe the celebrations are essencial not only for the social projects, but also for the economy. However, the money should be well distributed. The following paragraphs will highlight both views based on my opinion and some relevant examples.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The mankind tend to think that children must know variety of essential things like good and bad. What is more people consider that getting of punishments is a convenient method for teaching. This essay totally agrees with that statement because parents’ and teachers’ roles are to guide children into the right path. However, guardians should not beat their children and instead, they can use other sorts of judgment.

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Anybody can use a mobile phone to answer work and personal calls at any time, 7 days a week. Does this development have more positive or negative effects on both individuals and society?

The availability of inexpensive technologies enables people to use personal devices at work as well as on a daily basis. While many people claim that this provides them with a sense of freedom and creativity, I strongly believe that its drawbacks outweigh the benefits.

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Crime novels and TV series have become quite popular in recent years. What is your opinion about these crime dramas?

At the outset of new millennium, it is undeniable that crime dramas on TV as well as novels regarding it are becoming quite popular among humanking ,especially youngsters. According to me, there are many pros and cons of it, which I am going to illustrate in this essay.

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Health education is an essential aspect of community health. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that people in the society should be educated about the vital role of health in their life. In my opinion, even though this is very significant, I would argue that individuals should be approached to other knowledge rather than only about health.

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Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time. To what extent do you agree?

Home science classes should be taught and taken by the adolescents especially the boys in mixed sex school as these classes or skills are equally significant for the youngsters irrespective of their gender. I , however, totally agree with this provided assertion and I will illuminate with some logical reasons to support my opinion in the impending paragraphs.

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Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?

It has been frequently perspectives that high authorities need to be liable for providing medical and educational services free of cost to their citizens, whereas others statments that it should be taken consideration by workforces . In this, essay i would contend that it is nessary for the states to support both of facets ; however , they should not fully paid .

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The internet is a good source of information and opened up opportunities for people all over the world. Is all information reliable online? What could be done to control information online?

The internet, also known as the World Wide Web, takes a remarkable place among the information sources. Also, for the people who looking for new opportunities, the internet is the ideal source since it is open for everyone in the world with easy access. But the concern is, we need to make sure whether the information available on the internet are reliable and have the capability to extract the only truthful information. But finding and extracting the truthful information cannot be done by everyone, it depends on the experience if the person who use it. But one way to control the truthfulness of the information is to regulate them.

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Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. What is your opinion?

To increase the abilities of a person, they required to pay some time on improving them. To increase the creativity level of an artist, it is a must to have freedom on developing the skills. And to reveal the ideas and thoughts, they are required to have an entire freedom on working on that.

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Should young people follow the older people’s examples or it’s good for them to challenge older people’s opinions and thoughts. Discuss both the views and give your .

As we all know, elders are the crucial part of our society and they provide us numerous suggestions and views in our daily life and teach us life lessons. Some individuals believe that, we should follow the guidelines of our elders, whilst others oppose that we should find our own ways. In my view, it is beneficial for a peer to set his own paths according to his desires, and I will provide supportive explanation to this statement in the further paragraphs.

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Recently published figures show that the wildlife population around the world has decreased by around fifty percent over the last fifty years. What can we do to help protect the wildlife around the world?

Nowadays, animals are decreasing in our surrounding’s even some are on verge of extinction. The latest published data revealed that flora and fauna deducted to half in percentage in last five decade’s. In my opinion, wildlife can be conserved by spreading awareness and through avoiding pollution.

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It is anatural process for animals to become extinct there os no reason why people should try and avoid this happening do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, many animals are on the verge of extinction in the world .Truly, it is the natural process behind the extinction of many animals .While society plays a vital role to save endangered species by trying some restrictions.I will slightly agree with this argument .

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Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern world, a large number of new generation people from countryside areas have more and more immigrated to the urban area to search for better opportunities in occupation and education. In this essay, the cause of immigration will be presented, and the negative implications of the situation is reached.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if the wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In today's world, migration, to live and work in localities apart from their homeland, is far more popular among people than any other time. The more expert a person is, the more controversial their migration becomes. Opposing to one another, two different points of view are prevailed among people in this case. In the following, there arguing ideas will be explained to some extent, and mine as well.

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