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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As the population is increasing sharply, many people are looking for a better place to live in. Some folks believe that, immigration to more quiet places such as rural areas and countryside might be beneficial. On the contrary, I suppose that staying in cities undoubtedly has many privileges such as having better educational environment, a better job market, and having a dynamic atmosphere with many communities and facilities. The forthcoming paragraphs will demonstrate how mentioned facts would create urban areas a better place to settle.

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Many working people get little or no excercise either during the working days or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not to get enough exercise?

The Importance of exercise for better health is always debatable, the proverb is alwasys said by our elders that ‘’Health is wealth’’. But the current era and rise in the competition this proverb are demolished. Nowadays the working class people dont have enough time to look after their own health due to work loads and excessive working hours. To tackle this issue the government has to play a vital role in implementing the fixed weekly working hours and compulsory holiday on Sundays as well as festival days. On that invest in parks with outdoor gym equipment.

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Many working people get little or no excercise either during the working days or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not to get enough excerise?

The Importance of excerise for better health is always debatable, the proveb is alwasys said by our elders that ‘’Health is wealth’’. But the current era and rise in competition this proverb is demolished. Nowadays the working class people dont have enough time to look after his own health due to work loads, excessive working hours. To tackel this issue the govement has to play a vital role in implementing the fixed weekly working hours and complusory holiday on Sundays as well as festival days. On that invest in parks with out door gym equipments.

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Some think that climate change reforms will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is a contentious issue that the transformation of climate will have an adverse effect on the business. Some people are in its favour whereas others feel that it will be a chance for business to grow more. This essay will discuss both sides and then lead to my opinion in the conclusion.

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Completing University education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job,on the other other people think developing skills and experience is more important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Children’s education and healthcare are among the most concerning aspects in the race to modernize and industrialize our nation. Since their bodies are still growing, children are considered as seeds for new future. And in order to grow that seed into a plant, food is particularly one of the significant factors. Providing the necessities in a meal for students might help their bodies function properly focusing on studying for a better future.

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With advances in technological communication, more and more people are able to work from home. This increase in homeworking has been of real benefit to workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is obvious that more and more people are trying eagerly to work from home by the aid of technologies. While some people say that homeworking by using technological platforms are very useful to workers, some people claim that this may lead to mental related problems. Personally, I totally agree with the statement since the idea to work from his definitely convenient for employees.

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some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is true that nowadays people have too many choices to make and it will make people's lives comfortable and effecient. I completely agree with this statement but does having so many choices always makes our lives easy?

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Shops should give preference to selling local foods rather than imported foods. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been suggested that markets and vendors ought to priotise selling of local food over foriegn consumables. While this is often most appropriate, sales of imported food has its own advantages too.

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Dieting can change a person’s life for the better or ruin one’s health completely. What’s your opinion on that? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people pay much attention to the external appearance of the body. In their daily lives, many people are dieting. Dieting can change a person’s life for the better or ruin one’s health completely. This essay will discuss this.

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Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today's modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

In the contemporary epoch, there is an irrefutable debate among folks regarding which artwork and soundtracks became an integral element in life of the new generations’ life. Consequently, their new version is knotted in the identity of our golden era. Furthermore, as we conclude more of these factors in the early years of life, they will have became a bed to expand our qualifications in order to confront taxing situations in upcoming years. This essay will elucidate the aforementioned circumstances in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Government motivates the citizens to maintain their health. One of the ways is constructing the sports facilities, however a number of citizens voiced out that this kind of solution is not effectful, instead, the government should provide other methods. This essay will discuss both pros and cons of this matter.

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Government needs to spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students, rather than to support professional sports and art events. Do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, the activities of sport and art flourishing by leaps and bounds. It is generally believed that authorities should not waste money on professional players as well as art events, this is used to motivate school students, so they can expand their interest in such activities. I completely agree with the given statement for two main reasons which are discussed in the further essay.

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some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Although, nowdays technology has improved dramatically and most people can access to knowldge that they need to know, some individuals debate as information should be avaliable to public, but other group firmly discusses datas shouldnt be exist freely to everyone.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?

the elevation of crime is emerging rapidly severe in numerous nations and countries. Although offenders threaten myriad societies, their devastating consequences can be combated triumphantly. This discourse appraises some of the troubles caused by extensive volumes of unlawful acts on the entire planet and nominates some viable remedies to curb the grave concerns.

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The costs of international travel are decreasing and tourism is growing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of increasing tourism activity in different countries?

The expenses of international travel are falling and the tourism industry is increasing in various countries. The main benefits of this are economy-boosting together with more employment rates. However, the key drawbacks are the crowds and environmental damage. Economy growth is one of the most significant advantages of the tourism activity increasing. Having more tourists visiting the country can drive the economic system in both local and urban areas, therefore, the country earns more income and benefits for its locals. Furthermore, the increase of visitors from around the world results in the hiring of more workers in specific positions. For example, In Phuket, employment rates have increased every year due to the number of travellers rising. The vast positions hired are related to accommodations, restaurants and marine activities. However, the more tourists have visited the places the more crowded can be. Some countries have visiting rate of more than 10 million...

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Online is the best way to learn foreign language, To what do you agree or disagree?

There are so many cultures in the world and they each have their own language. And English is common in all countries besides, it is an international subject. But sum has a problem with speaking and understanding and multiple ways to learn that. If I talk about online and offline both are good for learning so I parsley agree with the statement.

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Should the government pay for the course fees for everyone who wants to study at the university?

Governmental duties such as free university education are controversial issues. Some say that it is one of the duties of all governments to spend money for it because it is a priority for the society and some say that free education should only be provided for beginning to highschool students and the money for university education should be devoted to other critical issues such as healthcare system. In this essay I am going to discuss both sides opinions and give my own.

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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over the importance of the regulations to the community. Some people hold a strong view that if people are allowed to do whatever they want, society could not work. From my perspective, I consider myself an advocate of this statement.

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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?

There is a tremendously controversial perspective heating up a debate whether people’s action in the community is based on legal guidelines. While this statement is valid to some extent, I would contend that it may do more good than harm.

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Natural resources such as oil, forests, and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does this cause? How can we solve these problems?

Nature damage is emerging rapidly severe in numerous nations and countries. Although ecology destruction threatens myriad societies and species, its devastating consequences can be combated triumphantly. This discourse appraises some of the troubles caused by extensive consumption of aqua on the entire planet and nominates some viable remedies to curb the grave concerns.

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