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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a very fast increase in the trend of online shopping, so much that it is now feared will lead to the obliteration of physical stores in urban areas. I do not agree with this belief. The major advantage that online shopping offers over walk-in shops is convenience. Regardless, the merits of these offline commercial centres outweigh the seeming advantage of online buying. The primary reasons are the lower prices of items, elimination of fraud and inspection of goods before purchase.
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These days many children spend a lot of time playing video games and many parents feel this is very negative. Do you agree or disagree?

The virtual entertainment industry leaps and bounds over the last two decades. Parents however believe that this creates a negative impact on children's life and I completely agree with them. In this ,essay I will discuss the cons of playing video games with relevant examples.
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Some people think that only the government can make significant changes in society, while others think that individual can have a lot of influence. What is your opinion?

Enormous changing on public has more controled by the politicians and the team of scientists than by ususal person in solitary,but,there is a controverial topic amongst nations and some believe each person has own power to influencing on the community,however,I am completely disagreed with the latter statement,but I am going to discuss both sides of this argument.
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In companies promotion to high positions should should be given to employees inside the company not to someone from outside or new hiring, do you agree or disagree.

The private region plays an important role to provides goods and services from country to country and from employment to employment . It requires a lot of employees who are professional experts in various sectors. I disagree with the notion that staff should be promoted inside the business rather than giving a chance to outsiders who are fresher graduates or have different commerce experience.
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In some societies, obesity is regarded as a major problem. Some people believe that junk food advertising is largely to blame for this problem and should be banned. However, others feel that junk food advertising does not contribute to the problem of obesity and should not be banned. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, Fatness are becoming more problem all over the world. Many say that junk food ads is the only reason for causing this problem. Other argue by saying that advertising is not the main cause for the problem. People can control their obesity by do some exercise and eat limited junk food.
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employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests and whether they are married or single some people say that this information may be relevant and useful other disagree discuss about these views and give your own opinion

Getting essential details of new employees is really imortant by employers when they are recuiting. These information can be consist of a wide categories varying from their qualifications to their personal data. No one can be quiet certain about whether this information can be one hundred percent beneficial or not.
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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Advertisement has became a vital tool to sell your products or services in a competitive market. Some people think that advertising is successful in leading us to buy the offered products or services but some people might think that advertising is getting common these days.
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young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

You can a see a trend in many countries, a lot of young people are leaving the countryside to live in citeis and towns. In some countries it is worse than others, a recent survey suggested that in America 5% of the young adults are leaving the countryside. However, in china this number is 10% and increasing each year. I will discuss in this essay what I think the problems are that causes this problem and what can be done to solve this situation.
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people agree that music is a good way to bring people together from different cultures and ages but some people may disagree with this topic.
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Children's educaton is expensive. In some countries the government pays some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Education has been increasing in importance. Education might be expensive in certain countries. I believe it. Every single person needs to be educated.but some of them can't  All benefit from education.If the government spent money on their education, it would benefit. such as saving money and encouraging the children.
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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Nowadays, there are many kinds of advertisements on television. Furthermore, on the social media such as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram etc. They know what we want while we talking with friends and then pop up on the feed. I will examine by considering the obvious opinions of mine on both viewpoints.
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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

The level of application of modern technology and techniques has never been on such a level playing field as it is today. However, this does not mean we have eradicated hunger, in fact, on the contrary, considerable number of people are still suffering from lack of food, if not absence of it. I think this is because of mal-distribution of the resources and corrupted governments, and there are two measures that can be taken to tackle the problem.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Most of the people believe that the acceptation of worse situation is the best choice for disappointing job opportunities or lack of wealth, while others believe that it is need to take opportunities to upgrade situation.In this essay I will discuss both views and state my opinion.
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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

In this present world education is such an important aspect in children for their mental and social development. Even with an excellence learning, the results for its future would be successful. For this reason, there are two excellent methodologies of teaching. For example, at school and at home that its leave opportunities for having deeper social relations, as well as more concentration.
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Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business, while others think that it provides more business opportunities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People has different views about whether climate change has a positive or negative influence on business. While the extreme weather may promote certain industries, the overall trading industry will be affected negatively.
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Some business find that their new employees lack in basic interpersonal skills such as the lack of ability to work with colleagues as a team. What are the causes and suggest possible solutions? Also provide relevant examples from your experience.

Recruiting a skillful employee is a huge challenge for companies that sometimes they choose a person who does not match in a group,some employer opine they have not a suitable feature such as poor commucation to adapting in their community ,however ,I believe when a person has losen coonection with others may be some reasons not only to the behavioural matching, so I am going to explore this topic in upcoming paragraphs.
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With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward whole others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Some individuals are in the support of the increase rate of e-book and decrease in paper books and see is as a growth while others are against it. This essay will demonstrate the advantages and the disadvantages of of the trends.
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across two years, for individuals with less than 50 in 1990 and 65 in 2010 relationship between percentage of giving money to charities and their ages was directly, but for both in begger ages the relationships were inversely.

The bar chart shows the percentages of British persons donating to charities by paying money in the range of 18 to more than 65 years old, in the years 1990 and 2010.
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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have a risk. Do you think that advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Since social media have grown, the issue of the security of personal data is ambiguous. In spite of this fact, social media is the most popular leisure time activity. In this essay, the pros and cons of social networks will be discussed.
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Some people say that computer have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. Discuss and give your opinion.

The word computer has become a household name across the globe in the 21st century. The usage of computers has rapidly risen from 2000 in India and ever since this has become very essential and important part of everyone day to day work.
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