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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Universities are places where every gender has a chance to attend. Yet, there are some problematic situations about the rate of male and female students. A few schools still insist on posing their courses with male superiority. While some people agree with it, some are of the opinion that this will cause a single-sex education at some point. I reckon that distinguishing students according to their genders make them lose their self-consciousness and lead departments to become single-sex education areas instead of co-education.

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Advertising is all around us; it is an unavoidable part of everyone’ life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/

Institute of Health Policy, Management and Evaluation

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Some people say that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age of driving cars or riding motorbikes.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays in this contemporary ,era mostly teenagers and also some of a kids used four-wheel or motorbikes for their daily commute. By this ,point some individuals say ,there should be increment regarding the minimum legal age the driving car. I agree with this point to a large extent because it is very beneficial for the country as well as for them too. My points about that can be seen in further paragraphs.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Recycling is a much-discussed matter nowadays by virtue of its significant role in saving the planet. Some people surmise that introducing laws is the prime way to increase this action done by people. The idea seems logical to me based on some grounds which will be explained in this essay.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

It is a fact that quite a few people tend to believe that it is crucial to be a neat person and to clean an apartment and a working place constantly. Additionally, it is consedered that every item should have a particular place. To be truthfull, I could not agree more because the tidiness in daily routine allows to get more organised, and more productive as a result.

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Nowadays, more and more people don't wear their national clothes, and the clothes look almost the same all over the world. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Our appearance is greatly affected by the clothes we wear and it is because of this reason that a growing number of people have begun to question whether we should wear our traditional clothes or follow western trends.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines does this development has more advantages or disadvantages

Nowadays technologies has been improved very well. And people consider that machines facilitates their life. Actually, improvement of machines has more benefits than drawbacks.

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Prison is the best punishment for criminals. Discuss.

These days the rate of crook has rocketed and governments across the world have to deal with the developing numbers of wrongdoers. One of the most arguable issues in our society relates to the most effective measures to punish or rehabilitate offenders. Some people argue that the best way to suction offenders is to sentence them to time in jail. I completely disagree with this idea and in this , the essay I will support my opinion with examples. First of all, life in confinement is quite c...

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Prison is the best punishment for criminals. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's fast-paced world, the crime rate is becoming increasingly high.So how to deal with this problem?Some people argue that locking up criminals is the best solution while others including me disagree with this notion.

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Following fashion is crucial. Do you a agree or disagree?

Throughout decades of mankind, fashion has been changing over time with a diversified variety of clothing trends which mostly everyone in the society tends to go after. Whereas, in my point of view, it is better to be able to choose between being fashionable and being comfortable wearing anything they want to.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Developing countries need more than monetary support from developed countries to conquer privation this i strongly agree to.

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Some people prefer to stay in the same job for same company, but other prefer to change job frequently. You should use specific reason to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides.

The following graphs give statistics on how many males and females were imprisoned and their reasons which brought them to this punishment during 4 years.

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Some people believe that individuals who earn a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that the individuals who contribute to the society (such as scientists or teachers) are the most successful. 🔸Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The comparison in the amount and type of food consumed by Australian adolescents throughout a 25-year period is illustrated above by the line graph.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Since cities and towns had started to grow, accommodation was a severe role in the human life. While people in many countries consider renting as a much reasonable option, others claim that they prefer to buy a home or apartment regardless of any obstacles. In this essay I will examine the reasons of this phenomenon along with my personal opinion about correctness of this matter.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Nowadays, global warming has emerged as one of the biggest challenges of the world. It is caused by

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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strength and weakness.It is right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

It is believed that females and males have different abilities including strength and weakness.I completely agree with the opinion that women and men should have specified careers in order to the gender distinction.

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The world would be a much poorer place without colour. To what extent would you agree or disagree.

Colours are one of the greatest blessings that god has bestowed upon people in the world. Have you ever thought what it would be like to live in a world without colour. Forget everything for a moment and start using your imagination. Try to think how you would feel if people, cats, dogs, birds, butterflies and fruits had no colour at all. You would never want to live in such a world. Would you? Colours have a crucial role in man’s communication with the outside world and in the proper functioning of his memory. Hearing or touch alone, are not enough to define objects. How can we define colourless flowers placed on a colourless table. Human eye can recognise millions of colours. Identifying objects and our surroundings are not the only benefits of a diversity of colours. Colours also give us a lot of pleasure. The beautiful blue sky, the blood red sunset or a rainbow after a rainfall do add happiness to our lives. The colours of nature have been arranged so as to appeal to...

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Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this? Is this the best solution to traffic congestion.

Nowadays, co-education has become popular in every Institut. Some people still argue that those who study in a single-sex school, perform academically better ,however, others believe that it restricts social development. In this essay, I will describe the importance of mixed education society and the drawbacks of a single-sex curriculum.

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Nowadays some countries encourage people to buy more and more products, which is good for economy. While others believe it is bad for the society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is said that the officials should promote purchasing which are beneficial to its society, while criticism claims negatives are more obvious. From my perspective, positivities of spending on product overweigh its negativities

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Many people think countries should set increasing product and materials as their goal. Do you agree or disagree?

There is an ideology which is believed by many nation, is that every country should set the highest priority in increasing products and raw materials. Although there might be some superficial economic benefits by rising manufacturing and compromising everything else, I completely disagree with the statement. The following essay will show that setting increased manufacture will lead to unhappiness and also decrease the creativity of a state.

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