IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 96

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some supports of the governments tend to believe that the governments face the financial problem or land problem caused by elderly problem, whereas others seem to arguer that the elders bring more advantages for communities. To the large extent, I agree that an ageing population is a negative phenomenon. However, there are some factors to be taken into the consideration before making a decision about the population problem on your own. The following paragraphs outline the arguments for this social issue.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some worker tend to their working hours are decreased and extend the holidays time, whereas others seems to keep the working time remains unchanged. To the larger extent, I agree that reducing the office hours is a positive trend. However, there are some factors to be taken into the consideration before making a decision about the office time on your own. The following paragraphs outline the arguments for this workplace problem.

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience

Based on multiple observations and statistics a lot of countries have fewer numbers of students in a science subject , because it is a complicated subject and difficult to study and the new trend that most the students now follow is technology study . As a result of this problem, there will be a shortage in the staff in the medical field and high salaries to the employees from outside the country.

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society?

Based on multiple observations and statistic alot of countries have less numbers of student in science subject , because it is complicated subject and difficult to study and the new trend that most of students now follow it which is the technology study . As a result of this problem, their will be a shortage in the staff in medical field and high salaries to the employees from outside the country.

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Some people think that newspaper are best media to learn and get information from, while others believe that internet is a better source.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

This has been a debatable topic between individauls since past decade that wether the internet is best media to know & learn about things or newspaper. I have attempted to shed light on both these view points and also given my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.

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People have different ways of escaping stress and difficult of modern life. Some read, some exercise, others work in their gardens. What do you think are the reasons for stress? What are the best ways of reducing stress?

In the new era,people are more likely to get stressed from different aspects in life,and they have different ways that can help them feel better,some prefer a habit of them and other fond of doing chores around the house. .In this essay i will discuss about the causes and the solutions of it.

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Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people’s lives and should receive more funding.’ To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the prevailing era, a large amount of money is being spent by news organizations. Nevertheless, regional news should obtain more subsidies because it is more appropriate to lives of individuals. Although international news are crucial for citizens, I believe that news agencies ought to focus on national news.

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‌2. As a result of electronic inventions such as computer and tv , people do less physical activity,and this is having a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the innovation of technological gadgets such as desktops and televisons, encagement in outdoor activities is becoming rare which in turn can cause weak fitness among individuals. I completely agree with this statement, since people spent more time in social media and on video gaming for hours and often ignore the importance of muscle strengthening and athletics.

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In many countries, there is a shortage of housing due to growing population. Some people argue that new towns should be built in the countryside. Other argue for the regeneration of the cities. What are the advantages and Disadvantages of building new towns in the countryside?

In recent years, there is a housing shortage because of population growth. while some individuals argue that building new towns in the countryside, others argue for cities's regenerate. I firmly believe that it is beneficial for the general public to build new towns in the countryside will help to decrease the over population in cities. Additionally, it will lower the cost of hosuing due to affordable lands price. In this essay, I will discuss this matter in detail.

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In some countries, many people want to know more about the history of the house or building where they live.

In some countries, many people want to know more about the history of the house or building where they live. This trend is getting more popular today. There are few reasons why people do this.

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Nowadays, news companies spend a lot of money covering international news. However, local news is more relevant to people's lives and should receive more funding.' To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is becoming evidently common that the big news companies spend a handsome amount of money for broadcasting international news. However, some poeple are of the view that local news must be more prioritized as compared to international. But I personally reckon that it is more beneficial for the nation to get the knowledge about global issues. There are some authentic reasons behind this notion that will be discussed below.

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Technological development leads to lots of environmental issues. Some people think a simple life style can preserve environment while others argue that technology itself can solve it. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge of experience

Nowadays, the development of technology brings lots of issues related environment. Many people think that simplicity lifestyle preserves environment, whilst other people stated that technology can handle it. This essay will elaborate that simplicity life surely preserve the environment through using eco-friendly product, but technology can help people to preserve the environment as well, for instance electric watering for the plants in the garden, farm and forest.

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Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore, they shoud be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school . To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that TV shows can be a useful tool for kids learning, and parents should push their children to see educational channels on daily basis. This essay totally disagrees with this statement, due to health and social issues that can be caused.

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t’s important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? Korkem

Many people think that children must understand what is right and what is wrong from a young age. Some also believe that punishment is a good way to teach this. I agree with this idea, but I think the punishment should be light and safe.

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Minority languages Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money.

There is a debate whether speaking various languages cannot be existed more in the future.It is commonly believed by some people that the authority should funding to preserve these languages,while some argues that this programme would be a waste of money.In this essay,i will explain both views,and touch on relevant examples and own perspective.

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It is responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement. Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit. To what extend to you agree or disagree with these statements?

Nowadays, it is argued that people should take reposibility of their own retirement by saving money to do so while some people argue that it is the responsibility of the government to provide such services which benefits people's retirement. This essay will discuss both views and will provide the necessary information about old age services for people.

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The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

The internet is probably the most transformative innovation of all times. It made our lives much more easier. Now we can communicate with other people and do it so quick just with one press, we can find any information in 1-5 seconds. I agree that the internet change our lives, but do I think that everything or everyone is going to become the same? Unfortunately, but I do not think so. First of all, we are humans from different countries, cultures, families or generations. That is not going to change. It means, that our personalities are created from different aspects and the intenert is only small part of our lives, even if it makes our lives easier, it could not make us to become all as one, because it is just a technology and that is all. Second of all, the internet step by step is becoming an addiction like alcohol or drugs. Most people are starting to understand this, that is why at some point people will start using the internet less. Everyone affraid of addictions that is why...

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Some people think that computers are more of a hindrance than a help in today’s society. Others believe that they are such indispensable tools that they would not be able to live or work without them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Electronic devices such as computers had became popular all over the world for its working capability and to store data. While, a few argue that it is a growing hitch to mankind others states that it is a resourceful tool where people depend on it for its exercise. I agree with the second statement as there are many positive side on IT which is indeed helpful to the community.

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With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer dome possible solutions to it.

In recent years the rate of family breakdown and seperation of them are hugely rise. This phenomenon is as a result of lack of closeness and distance between family members. In this essay, I intened to explore the root of this issue along with posible solution. Two main principal reasons of this are as follows.

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It is often thought that the increase in juvenile crime can be attributed to violence in the media. Do you agree that this is the main cause of juvenile crime? What solutions can you offer to solve this issue?

There has been a growing debate about the surging offence rate in teenage crime due to violence glorified over social media platforms. Although, some people argue that this is the main reason, I believe instead of inappropriate content on media, the main cause is family breakdown and poverty. This essay will detail the reasons and provide possible solutions.

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